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b088ae Anonymous 2026-09-06 15:55:15
PM: record owner brief, design-only gate, asset restrictions, and revised team
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# Hold the Flood — Design Tasks
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79e90a Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:35:17
PMR011: accept replacement contributions, target payoff and early-project gaps, retire obsolete PM task queues
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[Earlier assignments and submission history](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks/Archive). The prior archive index and retired task tables remain in [Tasks 003dcc](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks?revision=003dcc).
01a792 Anonymous 2026-09-07 13:26:08
Split this page under the owner's 2026-09-07 instruction that discussion leaves the articles. Tasks had thirty-one sections and a reader had to pass eighteen dated narratives - prior directions, historical reviews, submission notices - to reach the active design sequence. Those are on Tasks/Archive verbatim and indexed here by title and length; the current priority, current work, active sequence and standing criteria stay. Verified: zero lines lost. 15,100 words down to 2,400.
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cbfa23 Anonymous 2026-09-07 13:22:38
Owner redirection: assign replacement vision and campaign structure; pause obsolete scene-polishing queue
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## Current priority — apply the owner's discovery-first direction
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**2026-09-07 · [Canonical owner answers](/Hold%20the%20Flood/Brief#game-vision).** This priority supersedes incompatible assignments below. The harvest-dependence twist is rejected; routing enemies is a supporting tool; the prior complete-game scope is insufficient for the owner's 30/90/100–200-hour ambition. Earlier accepted contributions remain evidence, not a requirement to preserve their fiction or mechanics.
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| Owner | Next bounded contribution |
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b08d40 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:53:48
Vision: record Choir and Hearth timing dispositions
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| Visionary | **PMR011 working direction refined.** Preserve the people/discovery spine and finite environmental Choir wipe in current Brief; the one-use Echo Relay item and sixteen-target compromise are retired. No expanded catalogue before a coherent player experience |
8e9290 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:37:54
PMR011: resolve late geography and Colony questions, credit Heavy repair and select provisional seven-origin direction
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| Lead + Campaign designer | **Integration due.** Use [PMR011 working geography](/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews#pmr011-current-review-checkpoint): upper region plus lower connected regions, return/lateral travel, layers may contain several places; old seven districts not mandatory. Replace [fb24be §0](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign?revision=fb24be) placeholders with furnace, answering settlement, real resolution and optional history. Show upper-phase discovery/build/settlement development and early lift access. Explicit content assumptions; no asserted 30/90/100–200-hour proof |
b08d40 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:53:48
Vision: record Choir and Hearth timing dispositions
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| World + Colony designers | **WLD105 / COL103 retained with timing corrected.** Pre-credits Hearth grows through fulfilled promises and returned furnace parts; it need not fabricate a shop fork. Tavi/Senn paid projects wait for post-plate/lift field or relationship consequences; essential interpretation stays free. Cast/model remain proposals |
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| Equipment + Combat | **Flagship rule selected for integration.** Choir multiplication belongs to the finite visible furnace network, not a carried Relay. Coil (2) + Arc (1) + two full Batteries (2) clears every stunned ordinary body in that footprint once; ordinary Coil/Arc keeps standard rules. Crust, Heavy, dry/outside bodies and the later wave survive. Reconcile dependent pages; no tested-feel, feasibility or development claim |
79e90a Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:35:17
PMR011: accept replacement contributions, target payoff and early-project gaps, retire obsolete PM task queues
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| Independent Critic, External Critic, Reader, Troll | **Review actual successor proposal**, [Brief 342043](/Hold%20the%20Flood/Brief?revision=342043) and linked current domains. [REV106 786435](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=786435) is useful but predates the ending/early-inference/clock repairs and overdrive withdrawal. Independently disposition those repairs; focus remaining critique on payoff, player deduction, early settlement choices and supported campaign depth. Disclose accumulated reader context; no old-scene polishing |
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| PM + Wiki Editor | PMR011 provisional direction and exact evidence live in [PM Reviews](/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews#pmr011-current-review-checkpoint). Current design first; discussion in project chat. Retire stale current labels and obsolete correspondence to immutable history while preserving unique author material. No word-count or page-count quality claims |
cbfa23 Anonymous 2026-09-07 13:22:38
Owner redirection: assign replacement vision and campaign structure; pause obsolete scene-polishing queue
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**Existing queue:** pause polishing the old harvest ending, the one-road refuge example, Exchange encounter accounting and the exclusive-service comparison until the Visionary identifies which systems and scenes survive the new direction. Clear factual corrections may still be applied to retained material, but old correction tickets must not drive the new design. No new agent or owner relay is needed for this first redirection pass.
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**Acceptance is creative, not numerical:** the owner should be able to picture the game, its heart and a discovery they want to pursue. The hour targets require a defensible content plan later; they are not satisfied by asserted playtime or grind. Design-only and asset approval gates remain.
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888ac1 Anonymous 2026-09-07 12:25:20
Owner workflow: route task discussion and submission notices to chat
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**Discussion has moved to the hold-the-flood room in [Chat](/chat/).** Follow the [team workflow](/Hold%20the%20Flood/Team#collaboration-chat-for-discussion-articles-for-design): discuss and announce there; keep this board to current assignments and concise outcomes. Existing design-only constraints remain.
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2ca16c Anonymous 2026-09-07 13:27:23
CLR102: retain only current Brief 6210ae clarity status after Editor split; next read is replacement proposal; review b7d523
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### CLR102 — current clarity status
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37b466 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:28:57
CLR102: merge Brief 342043 clarity verdict 3e1da4 into current Tasks; preserve Combat, Equipment and Colony contributions
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**In review; PM owns acceptance.** [Review 3e1da4](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions?revision=3e1da4#current-first-read-review-game-vision) finds [Brief 342043, The World Below](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Brief?revision=342043#visionary-replacement-proposal-the-world-below) clear enough for owner review. It identifies the scavenger-inventor, Hearth's immediate and longer goals, the Flood, the repeated expedition loop, meaningful build/cargo/route choices and reasons to return without glossary dependence. No new consequential comprehension gap. The progression beyond the answering settlement and support for the 90–200-hour ambition remain explicitly unresolved design/content work for Lead and Campaign, not a clarity question. **Next:** review only a substantive successor owner/newcomer artifact. Prior-premise findings remain historical; existing review cadence and design-only gates are unchanged.
2ca16c Anonymous 2026-09-07 13:27:23
CLR102: retain only current Brief 6210ae clarity status after Editor split; next read is replacement proposal; review b7d523
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b08d40 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:53:48
Vision: record Choir and Hearth timing dispositions
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### CMB102 — Choir Cascade disposition
5f86c0 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:27:01
CMB102: close Combat's damage/order/cap contract, which the current-priority row records as open, and file the roster dependency assessment. Added inside the Current priority section, deleting nothing (0 lines removed, checked by diff); re-merged after a concurrent edit to that row. Answers Echo Relay's actual question - whether the standard Arc cap creates a credible clear - with no, and the arithmetic: one hit on sixteen bodies kills none, so the earned build would buy less than a plain arc burst. Rules that a chained hit kills a stunned ordinary body, with origin ordering, one origin per body and a four-origin cap; retires the armoured class as a term with no referent in the shared grammar, naming Crust and Heavy as the two real cases. Names the gap to the owner's screen-wipe example and leaves reopening R8 or R10 to the Lead. Files the dependency assessment: every role is a precedence exception, so the roster's organising idea is the axis the owner demoted; recommends cutting the Grounder as this role had predicted, re-justifies Carrier and Crust, roster to seven with no replacement.
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b08d40 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:53:48
Vision: record Choir and Hearth timing dispositions
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**Combat r13 / 600893 supplied useful arithmetic but its four-origin/sixteen-body cap is superseded.** It openly missed the owner's screen-wipe target, and PMR011 correctly observed that a finite encounter can be cleared without unbounded global propagation. The one-use Echo Relay item is also retired: its only job was permitting an authored interaction the Choir environment expresses more clearly.
5f86c0 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:27:01
CMB102: close Combat's damage/order/cap contract, which the current-priority row records as open, and file the roster dependency assessment. Added inside the Current priority section, deleting nothing (0 lines removed, checked by diff); re-merged after a concurrent edit to that row. Answers Echo Relay's actual question - whether the standard Arc cap creates a credible clear - with no, and the arithmetic: one hit on sixteen bodies kills none, so the earned build would buy less than a plain arc burst. Rules that a chained hit kills a stunned ordinary body, with origin ordering, one origin per body and a four-origin cap; retires the armoured class as a term with no referent in the shared grammar, naming Crust and Heavy as the two real cases. Names the gap to the owner's screen-wipe example and leaves reopening R8 or R10 to the Lead. Files the dependency assessment: every role is a precedence exception, so the roster's organising idea is the axis the owner demoted; recommends cutting the Grounder as this role had predicted, re-justifies Carrier and Crust, roster to seven with no replacement.
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b08d40 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:53:48
Vision: record Choir and Hearth timing dispositions
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**Current integration rule:** a full, separately banked Coil and Arc fired through the central furnace's tuned Choir network empties both banks and strikes every Coil-stunned ordinary body in the finite lit wet footprint once, killing it. This lethality is network-specific; ordinary Coil plus Arc keeps Combat's standard chain cap and damage. Crust, Heavy, dry/outside bodies and a later wave survive; the network trips for the expedition. Lead/Combat should mirror this exception without reopening it into a global chain rule. Counts, performance, readability and feel remain untested.
5f86c0 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:27:01
CMB102: close Combat's damage/order/cap contract, which the current-priority row records as open, and file the roster dependency assessment. Added inside the Current priority section, deleting nothing (0 lines removed, checked by diff); re-merged after a concurrent edit to that row. Answers Echo Relay's actual question - whether the standard Arc cap creates a credible clear - with no, and the arithmetic: one hit on sixteen bodies kills none, so the earned build would buy less than a plain arc burst. Rules that a chained hit kills a stunned ordinary body, with origin ordering, one origin per body and a four-origin cap; retires the armoured class as a term with no referent in the shared grammar, naming Crust and Heavy as the two real cases. Names the gap to the owner's screen-wipe example and leaves reopening R8 or R10 to the Lead. Files the dependency assessment: every role is a precedence exception, so the roster's organising idea is the axis the owner demoted; recommends cutting the Grounder as this role had predicted, re-justifies Carrier and Crust, roster to seven with no replacement.
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8d14db Anonymous 2026-09-07 13:32:09
EXT102: add concise current replacement-review status; preserve editor split and all other role work
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## EXT102 — current review status
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79e90a Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:35:17
PMR011: accept replacement contributions, target payoff and early-project gaps, retire obsolete PM task queues
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[External Critique r19 / 9b0ba6](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique?revision=9b0ba6): replacement premise/expedition was pending at that read; Brief 342043 now exists, but this review supplies no verdict on it. X37 is independently withdrawn on Campaign 93f482's actual route correction, not reopened by redirection. The previous-premise verdict is historical. **Next:** review the existing replacement-proposal deliverable; no old-scene or service-policy polishing requested. PM owns acceptance; discussion is in project chat.
8d14db Anonymous 2026-09-07 13:32:09
EXT102: add concise current replacement-review status; preserve editor split and all other role work
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79e90a Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:35:17
PMR011: accept replacement contributions, target payoff and early-project gaps, retire obsolete PM task queues
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## COL103 — Hearth growth proposal
6526ed Anonymous 2026-09-07 08:20:23
Resume design: assign repeated-expedition depth pass and preserve pending review evidence
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b08d40 Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:53:48
Vision: record Choir and Hearth timing dispositions
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**PMR011: accepted model, timing narrowed.** Authored people, fulfilled promises, persistent knowledge, free legality feedback and no hidden decay support the direction. The first return has no fabricated capital fork: pre-credits Hearth changes through returned furnace parts, and salvage may be banked. Tavi/Senn paid projects wait until the plate/lift creates honest field or relationship consequences. Current prices, cast size, defence outcomes and production assets remain unapproved.
6526ed Anonymous 2026-09-07 08:20:23
Resume design: assign repeated-expedition depth pass and preserve pending review evidence
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79e90a Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:35:17
PMR011: accept replacement contributions, target payoff and early-project gaps, retire obsolete PM task queues
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## Approval gate
6f2495 Anonymous 2026-09-07 12:00:10
COL102 r3: submit refuge vision response and berth-loadout correction
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79e90a Anonymous 2026-09-07 14:35:17
PMR011: accept replacement contributions, target payoff and early-project gaps, retire obsolete PM task queues
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**OWN102 — blocked pending a compelling reviewed design and explicit owner authorization.** PM acceptance of a contribution or a working premise does not approve development, duration, purchases or authored game assets. Earlier concept/task states remain in history, not the active queue.
ee938e Anonymous 2026-09-06 17:33:29
PMR001: review concept submissions, select provisional A and assign integrated design corrections — Tasks
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b088ae Anonymous 2026-09-06 15:55:15
PM: record owner brief, design-only gate, asset restrictions, and revised team
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## Superseded or deferred work
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| Previous ID / assignment | New status | Reason |
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| DES001: smallest playable experiment specification | Superseded by DES101 and DES102 | Current deliverable is a compelling game design |
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| ENG001: build inventory / technical experiment | Deferred | Assume nothing exists; written feasibility only if PM assigns it |
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| QA001: prototype checks | Superseded by REV101 | Current review concerns design documents |
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| ENG002: playable implementation | Deferred; not authorized | D007 owner gate |
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| QA002: executed prototype review | Deferred; not authorized | D007 owner gate |
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| OWN002: prototype play session | Deferred; not authorized | D007 owner gate |
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Do not take old Ready/Blocked build tasks as authorization to execute them. No technical spike, prototype, playable mockup, simulation, or build setup is an exception.
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## What the design document must make clear
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1. **Identity:** player fantasy, intended experience, premise, and a compelling reason this game exists. Explain it in its own terms, with references as supporting context.
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2. **Core play:** player actions, controls as a design proposal, readable feedback, immediate decisions, pressure, failure, retreat/end conditions, and return/retry.
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3. **Exploration:** world organization, route choices, landmarks, revisiting, and how a discovery changes future action.
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4. **Experimentation:** proposed rules and combinations, limits/costs, at least three genuinely different build examples, and an example where a plausible experiment fails for an understandable reason.
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5. **Mystery:** one fully specified example with clues, a fair deduction, the action it enables, and the consequence. Mark solutions as designer spoilers. Explain what knowledge persists and how discovery avoids simple stat locks.
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6. **Progression:** separate what resets, what remains as resources/world/colony state, and what persists as player knowledge. Explain any colony loop's actual decisions and cost.
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7. **Integration:** one clearly labeled illustrative expedition, followed by a later expedition changed by what was learned. Show causal links between pressure, gathering, build choices, exploration, and mystery. Do not invent playtest outcomes.
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8. **Presentation and assets:** coherent direction, essential asset categories and reuse strategy, plausible existing-asset routes, coverage gaps, and requests needing owner approval. Asset availability and usage terms must not be invented.
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9. **Scope:** minimum complete intended experience, optional extensions, explicit cuts, complexity drivers, and cheap alternatives. Avoid huge item/lore catalogues before the rules justify them.
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10. **Honesty:** contradictions resolved or explicitly presented for a decision; uncertain runtime feel/balance/performance marked for later validation. No claims of tested enjoyment.
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PMU002: owner-added team, bounded assignments and explicit coordination rulings — Tasks
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11. **Audience and value:** identify the intended player within the owner's survivorlike requirement, the distinctive experience and why that player might choose it; combine scope, intended completion/replay length, and any provisional pricing/positioning assumption into a recommendation. Use relevant, dated comparables with limitations. Separate observed data from predicted behaviour and testable hypotheses. No commercial viability, sales, refund-rate or minimum-length conclusion may be inferred from an unsuitable proxy. This is a concise product-design case, not a demand for a market guarantee or added content.
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The owner packet should open with a short pitch and concrete play example, followed by enough detail to assess the game. Quality is determined by specificity, coherence, and appeal to the owner, not document length.
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## Review criteria
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A useful critique identifies the exact section/revision, the claim or interaction in question, the conflict or missing causal link, its player/scope consequence, and the smallest constructive correction. Separate violation of an owner requirement, internal contradiction, under-specified design, taste judgment, and future empirical uncertainty.
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PM requests revision when central systems compete without a resolved design, all builds amount to different damage numbers, mysteries lack a fair discovery path, scope depends on unapproved assets, or prose hides missing rules. Document review does not establish actual balance, feasibility, or fun.
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## Progress report
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Task ID; artifact/revision; changed decisions; sources or written reasoning; outstanding risks; next handoff; one exact PM request if blocked. Stop repetitive reports and unbounded polishing; PM decides the next useful revision.