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PM restart setup: define first design milestone and acceptance criteria
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# Hold The Horde — Design Plan
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
Record completed combat and reading path; forecast moving-scan design
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You leave home with a modest rig, fight through a growing horde, discover a powerful interaction between your equipment and the station, and return with something that changes the next expedition. That sequence must be exciting on the third trip as well as the first.
126e8a Anonymous 2026-09-09 13:05:21
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## The current design
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The owner chose fresh hordes each expedition and regular combat growth with larger transformations. Permanent changes and physically carried property remain, while temporary power resets on returning home. The [Owner Brief](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Brief) records the requirements.
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
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The main reading path now begins with [The Game](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game), follows [three expeditions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal), returns to [the people aboard](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Coming%20Home), and opens into [discovery in the changing station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Connecting%20The%20Station). [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) explains the current examples; [Build Comparison](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Comparison) presents alternative controls and payoffs for owner reaction.
126e8a Anonymous 2026-09-09 13:05:21
Owner570 feedback pause; preserve completed first-pass564 and stopped drafts
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a83ab7 Anonymous 2026-09-15 15:08:15
Record accepted journal and active campaign overview F2.16
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Ten proposal or editorial packages completed review and response today: builds/expeditions, hospital story/survival, regular growth on a renewed route, a second route state after permanent source seals, the six-page reading path, the moving-scan expedition, the short-rescue comparison, the station-completion payoff, the campaign scope comparison, and the language journal. [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and the room/encounter references describe the two concrete route states. They preserve completed work while giving fresh opposition a physical route. Other seal combinations and shifted layouts remain design work.
126e8a Anonymous 2026-09-09 13:05:21
Owner570 feedback pause; preserve completed first-pass564 and stopped drafts
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
Record completed combat and reading path; forecast moving-scan design
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The new Ricochet and Gravity mechanisms remain proposed replacements for parts of the detailed build rules. The [hospital-story alternatives](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hospital%20Story%20Directions) remain revisable. Completed review does not select them for the owner or establish fun, balance or duration.
126e8a Anonymous 2026-09-09 13:05:21
Owner570 feedback pause; preserve completed first-pass564 and stopped drafts
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b41864 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:02:53
F2.8: moving scan complete, preservation corrections published, short rescue working
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## Completed: the moving scan
126e8a Anonymous 2026-09-09 13:05:21
Owner570 feedback pause; preserve completed first-pass564 and stopped drafts
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b41864 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:02:53
F2.8: moving scan complete, preservation corrections published, short rescue working
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The [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition) now places the lamp in Cable Junction. Three source areas supply the rising fight; ordinary growth precedes the electrical climax. Observations from three positions reveal a receiver across a void, and the player unfolds and walks a bridge to it. Living return preserves the useful shortcut. A changed alignment makes the old samples historical and exposes a visible rewind for a new scan.
126e8a Anonymous 2026-09-09 13:05:21
Owner570 feedback pause; preserve completed first-pass564 and stopped drafts
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b41864 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:02:53
F2.8: moving scan complete, preservation corrections published, short rescue working
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The price is a fourteenth proposed major mechanism and substantial rail, bay, bridge and receiver geometry. The room, encounter, combat and information references now agree; physical fit and the intended pleasure remain untested.
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92ee89 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:32:40
Update active station-completion response and campaign scope forecast F2.11
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## Ready for a choice: the short rescue
b41864 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:02:53
F2.8: moving scan complete, preservation corrections published, short rescue working
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79573e Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:22:21
F2.10: rescue comparison ready for owner choice; station completion working
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[Rescue Under Pressure](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Rescue%20Under%20Pressure) is now a reviewed comparison: the astronaut’s movement and build earn a short crossing for Yeva, followed by a specific homecoming. It compares a protected retreat with completing the crossing after the astronaut dies. The owner can judge the stakes, preparation burden and effect on the shifting-station premise. Neither survivor mortality nor the first survivor is selected by this comparison.
b41864 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:02:53
F2.8: moving scan complete, preservation corrections published, short rescue working
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92ee89 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:32:40
Update active station-completion response and campaign scope forecast F2.11
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The single critique and response are complete. The proposal now makes physical clearance, living blockage and both death-protection windows explicit. The owner is considering whether the survivor should finish or take shelter; shared rescue rules remain unchanged. Systems has finished this response and moved to the separate scope comparison below.
ffec28 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:16:35
F2.9: rescue response and station-completion proposal in parallel
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837ac6 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:37:27
Link reviewed station-completion alternatives and update forecast F2.12
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## Ready to compare: the final connection
92ee89 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:32:40
Update active station-completion response and campaign scope forecast F2.11
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837ac6 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:37:27
Link reviewed station-completion alternatives and update forecast F2.12
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[Completing The Station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Completing%20The%20Station) now offers two reviewed consequences. The last join completes route certainty earned gradually, with a further visit to the newly secured core. The alternative adds an optional departure carrying the station and docked ship, with its added story and production work explicit. Review and response finished at 14:36; neither ending nor final effect is selected.
92ee89 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:32:40
Update active station-completion response and campaign scope forecast F2.11
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841715 Anonymous 2026-09-15 15:02:30
Record reviewed campaign scope and journal next delivery F2.15
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## Ready to compare: campaign scope
837ac6 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:37:27
Link reviewed station-completion alternatives and update forecast F2.12
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841715 Anonymous 2026-09-15 15:02:30
Record reviewed campaign scope and journal next delivery F2.15
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[Campaign Scope Choices](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign%20Scope%20Choices) completed review and response at 14:56. It compares 40 rooms with a denser 36-room alternative through named discoveries, build moments and recovery spaces. Five supporting references now agree on fourteen proposed mechanisms, while the historical cost allowance keeps its original thirteen-mechanism basis and leaves the added work uncosted. Neither scope nor a revised hour estimate is selected. Systems has finished this outcome.
23c748 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:52:25
Record scope response and language journal readability F2.14
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a83ab7 Anonymous 2026-09-15 15:08:15
Record accepted journal and active campaign overview F2.16
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## Ready to read: the language journal
23c748 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:52:25
Record scope response and language journal readability F2.14
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a83ab7 Anonymous 2026-09-15 15:08:15
Record accepted journal and active campaign overview F2.16
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The existing [Language And Journal](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Language%20And%20Journal) page has been rewritten around what the player does: capture a clue during an expedition, pause to compare records, make a prediction and try it. The revision preserves the current observation, testimony and historical-route rules while making the pleasure and cost of discovery easier to understand. The rewrite completed its independent critique and reasoned response at 15:06. No material correction was needed; its longer visitor and scan examples retain the reasoning behind those discoveries.
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## Working now: the whole campaign
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13d272 Anonymous 2026-09-15 15:13:10
Record campaign overview submitted and earlier review forecast F2.17
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Systems submitted the rewritten [Whole Game Outline](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Whole%20Game%20Outline) at 15:10. It follows the player’s journey from the first expedition through deeper investigation and optional secrets. The page explains how fresh hordes, growing builds, useful discoveries and relationships develop together. Existing mechanics and unresolved creative choices must remain accurately represented. Its independent reviewer is now checking the full article and source preservation. The reviewed target is now 16:00 today, with its range on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
ffec28 Anonymous 2026-09-15 14:16:35
F2.9: rescue response and station-completion proposal in parallel
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One focused critique and one response belong to each bounded outcome. The outside-edit preservation audit is complete and its factual follow-ups are published; broader readability and design readiness remain open. States and estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
5f2ffe Anonymous 2026-09-10 10:55:47
Record completed discovery/home correction and active combat/build batch
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
Record completed combat and reading path; forecast moving-scan design
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## What makes a proposal useful
e17a00 Anonymous 2026-09-10 12:08:00
Record completed combat/build proposals and active room/information work with revised forecasts
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
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The reader can picture what the player wants, sees and does. Pressure develops through meaningful horde combat. A growth choice changes the next movement decision; a build breakthrough creates a visible payoff; quiet lets a discovery change an understanding or future action.
a0f39d Anonymous 2026-09-10 12:54:09
Close room and information batch and schedule horde-scale builds and successive expeditions
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
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Builds differ in behavior, attention and cost. Their strongest results should feel constructed and discovered. Practical limits should support interesting choices without automatically suppressing powerful combinations. Each substantial scene identifies a plausible way its intended pleasure could fail.
8c10c2 Anonymous 2026-09-10 12:39:39
Record completed room and information review and earlier correction forecast
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
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Readable prose leads with an example and explains necessary terms where they arise. Detailed references support the explanation. Discussion history and execution records stay outside game descriptions. Written consistency helps us design; later evidence is still needed to establish the experience.
01555d Anonymous 2026-09-10 13:59:59
Close build/expedition batch and forecast story/survival work
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
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## Remaining design work
126e8a Anonymous 2026-09-09 13:05:21
Owner570 feedback pause; preserve completed first-pass564 and stopped drafts
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
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- Extend renewal and regular growth across worthwhile expeditions with different goals and crowd patterns.
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- Reconcile selected build directions with their detailed mechanics while retaining expressive combinations.
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- Develop the hospital, alien setting, people, short rescues, languages and story consequences through concrete scenes.
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- Decide what completing the station connection changes and cost a content model that can support the intended journey.
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- Continue the readability pass through supporting articles, preserving useful outside edits and resolving actual contradictions.
0b1275 Anonymous 2026-09-07 17:26:34
PM restart setup: define first design milestone and acceptance criteria
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a431be Anonymous 2026-09-15 13:30:20
Record completed combat and reading path; forecast moving-scan design
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Use [Open Decisions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Open%20Decisions) as an overlapping issue index. Its recommendations remain proposals; the team handles routine consistency and brings consequential creative alternatives to the owner. Development, simulations, playtests and game assets await separate authorization.