2026-09-15 15:02:30
Anonymous:
Record reviewed campaign scope and journal next delivery F2.15
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The main reading path now begins with [The Game](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game), follows [three expeditions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal), returns to [the people aboard](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Coming%20Home), and opens into [discovery in the changing station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Connecting%20The%20Station). [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) explains the current examples; [Build Comparison](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Comparison) presents alternative controls and payoffs for owner reaction.
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Eight proposal packages completed review and response today: builds/expeditions, hospital story/survival, regular growth on a renewed route, a second route state after permanent source seals, the six-page reading path, the moving-scan expedition, the short-rescue comparison, and the station-completion payoff. [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and the room/encounter references describe the two concrete route states. They preserve completed work while giving fresh opposition a physical route. Other seal combinations and shifted layouts remain design work.
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Nine proposal packages completed review and response today: builds/expeditions, hospital story/survival, regular growth on a renewed route, a second route state after permanent source seals, the six-page reading path, the moving-scan expedition, the short-rescue comparison, the station-completion payoff, and the campaign scope comparison. [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and the room/encounter references describe the two concrete route states. They preserve completed work while giving fresh opposition a physical route. Other seal combinations and shifted layouts remain design work.
The new Ricochet and Gravity mechanisms remain proposed replacements for parts of the detailed build rules. The [hospital-story alternatives](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hospital%20Story%20Directions) remain revisable. Completed review does not select them for the owner or establish fun, balance or duration.
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[Completing The Station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Completing%20The%20Station) now offers two reviewed consequences. The last join completes route certainty earned gradually, with a further visit to the newly secured core. The alternative adds an optional departure carrying the station and docked ship, with its added story and production work explicit. Review and response finished at 14:36; neither ending nor final effect is selected.
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## Working now: campaign scope
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## Ready to compare: campaign scope
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[Campaign Scope Choices](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign%20Scope%20Choices) was submitted at 14:38. It compares 40 rooms with a denser 36-room alternative, naming the discoveries and recovery spaces that move. The independent critique is complete. Systems is writing the single response: clearer named player journeys, explicit historical-estimate wording and conditional layout claims. No smaller scope or revised estimate is selected.
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[Campaign Scope Choices](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign%20Scope%20Choices) completed review and response at 14:56. It compares 40 rooms with a denser 36-room alternative through named discoveries, build moments and recovery spaces. Five supporting references now agree on fourteen proposed mechanisms, while the historical cost allowance keeps its original thirteen-mechanism basis and leaves the added work uncosted. Neither scope nor a revised hour estimate is selected. Systems has finished this outcome.
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## Working in parallel: the language journal
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## Working now: the language journal
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The existing [Language And Journal](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Language%20And%20Journal) page is being rewritten around what the player does: capture a clue during an expedition, pause to compare records, make a prediction and try it. The revision preserves the current observation, testimony and historical-route rules while making the pleasure and cost of discovery easier to understand. Temporary editorial support owns this page; a separate reviewer is preparing.
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The existing [Language And Journal](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Language%20And%20Journal) page has been rewritten around what the player does: capture a clue during an expedition, pause to compare records, make a prediction and try it. The revision preserves the current observation, testimony and historical-route rules while making the pleasure and cost of discovery easier to understand. The rewrite was submitted at 14:58. Its author has stopped edits while the separate reviewer checks the actual page and preservation of existing rules.
One focused critique and one response belong to each bounded outcome. The outside-edit preservation audit is complete and its factual follow-ups are published; broader readability and design readiness remain open. States and estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
