2026-09-15 15:13:10
Anonymous:
Record campaign overview submitted and earlier review forecast F2.17
hold the flood/design plan.md ..
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## Working now: the whole campaign
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Systems is rewriting [Whole Game Outline](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Whole%20Game%20Outline) around the player’s journey from the first expedition through deeper investigation and optional secrets. The page will explain how fresh hordes, growing builds, useful discoveries and relationships develop together. Existing mechanics and unresolved creative choices must remain accurately represented. Its independent reviewer has prepared criteria and sources. Draft target 16:00 and reviewed target 17:00 today, with ranges on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
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Systems submitted the rewritten [Whole Game Outline](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Whole%20Game%20Outline) at 15:10. It follows the player’s journey from the first expedition through deeper investigation and optional secrets. The page explains how fresh hordes, growing builds, useful discoveries and relationships develop together. Existing mechanics and unresolved creative choices must remain accurately represented. Its independent reviewer is now checking the full article and source preservation. The reviewed target is now 16:00 today, with its range on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
One focused critique and one response belong to each bounded outcome. The outside-edit preservation audit is complete and its factual follow-ups are published; broader readability and design readiness remain open. States and estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).