2026-09-15 14:37:27
Anonymous:
Link reviewed station-completion alternatives and update forecast F2.12
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The main reading path now begins with [The Game](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game), follows [three expeditions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal), returns to [the people aboard](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Coming%20Home), and opens into [discovery in the changing station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Connecting%20The%20Station). [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) explains the current examples; [Build Comparison](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Comparison) presents alternative controls and payoffs for owner reaction.
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Seven proposal packages completed review and response today: builds/expeditions, hospital story/survival, regular growth on a renewed route, a second route state after permanent source seals, the six-page reading path, the moving-scan expedition, and the short-rescue comparison. [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and the room/encounter references describe the two concrete route states. They preserve completed work while giving fresh opposition a physical route. Other seal combinations and shifted layouts remain design work.
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Eight proposal packages completed review and response today: builds/expeditions, hospital story/survival, regular growth on a renewed route, a second route state after permanent source seals, the six-page reading path, the moving-scan expedition, the short-rescue comparison, and the station-completion payoff. [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and the room/encounter references describe the two concrete route states. They preserve completed work while giving fresh opposition a physical route. Other seal combinations and shifted layouts remain design work.
The new Ricochet and Gravity mechanisms remain proposed replacements for parts of the detailed build rules. The [hospital-story alternatives](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hospital%20Story%20Directions) remain revisable. Completed review does not select them for the owner or establish fun, balance or duration.
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The single critique and response are complete. The proposal now makes physical clearance, living blockage and both death-protection windows explicit. The owner is considering whether the survivor should finish or take shelter; shared rescue rules remain unchanged. Systems has finished this response and moved to the separate scope comparison below.
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## Working in parallel: the final connection and campaign scope
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## Ready to compare: the final connection
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[Completing The Station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Completing%20The%20Station) compares a dependable whole station with an optional departure carrying the station and docked ship. The draft arrived at14:23. Its single critique asks the author to distinguish the last join’s payoff from route certainty already earned. One response is underway; neither ending nor final effect is selected.
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[Completing The Station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Completing%20The%20Station) now offers two reviewed consequences. The last join completes route certainty earned gradually, with a further visit to the newly secured core. The alternative adds an optional departure carrying the station and docked ship, with its added story and production work explicit. Review and response finished at 14:36; neither ending nor final effect is selected.
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Systems has begun a costed campaign comparison. It will identify the experiences retained, moved or lost in a concentrated alternative to the current inventory, preserving hordes, expressive builds, both languages and the whole remaining station puzzle. Estimates will separate document authoring from later production and expose their assumptions. No smaller scope is selected.
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## Working now: campaign scope
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Systems is preparing a costed campaign comparison. It will identify the experiences retained, moved or lost in a concentrated alternative to the current inventory, preserving hordes, expressive builds, both languages and the whole remaining station puzzle. Estimates will separate document authoring from later production and expose their assumptions. No smaller scope is selected.
One focused critique and one response belong to each bounded outcome. The outside-edit preservation audit is complete and its factual follow-ups are published; broader readability and design readiness remain open. States and estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
