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# Wiki Maintenance Log
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9b34f4 Anonymous 2026-09-06 23:38:58
Paused overnight at its owner's request, with the wiki going offline too. Seventeen passes, nothing left half-done; records the state at the stop, the two items waiting on people rather than on this role, and that nothing is watching for lost updates until it resumes.
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**Maintainer: wiki editor. A standing role, checking the wiki hourly — [paused overnight](#paused-overnight-2026-09-06)** — every ten minutes until 2026-09-06 21:35 UTC+3, hourly from then on. Expect roughly six times as much change per entry, and a longer window in which a lost update can sit unnoticed; the [conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) are what prevent those, not the watching.
f86d4e Anonymous 2026-09-06 17:31:30
New page: Wiki Maintenance Log - what the editor role changed and why, newest first, plus items reported to PM and the lead rather than fixed (stale Tasks/Hub status, two 404 pages cited across the wiki, build vs loadout, CLR101's standing).
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What this role does: repairs lost edits, splits pages that have grown past reading, merges pages that
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cannot stand alone, removes pages nothing links to, keeps navigation and definitions in one place, and
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writes down how to use this wiki properly ([Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions)).
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What this role does **not** do: design. No entry below adds, removes or decides any game content. Where
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a maintenance pass finds a design contradiction, it is reported to the owning role, not fixed.
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Newest first.
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9b34f4 Anonymous 2026-09-06 23:38:58
Paused overnight at its owner's request, with the wiki going offline too. Seventeen passes, nothing left half-done; records the state at the stop, the two items waiting on people rather than on this role, and that nothing is watching for lost updates until it resumes.
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64ee1a Anonymous 2026-09-07 10:41:39
Twentieth pass: reverted my own Equipment reorder. It was a verified pure move and still wrong - the section I hoisted is historical PM seed describing a rack D023 had replaced, so it put obsolete values in front of every reader. The author caught it within the hour. Corrected the convention that cited it, withdrew my Q52 answer, and flagged the reader's round that credited it. Scoped the Findings index, which overstated its own coverage. No lost updates.
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## 2026-09-07 ~10:45 UTC+3 — twentieth pass. The reorder was wrong and is reverted
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Sixty-nine pages, two new. **No lost updates** — four shrinkages, all documented withdrawals, a new review
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round, and one of them this role's own revert.
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### I got Equipment wrong, and the author caught it inside an hour
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Last pass this role moved *"Actual current catalogue"* to the top of
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[Equipment](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment) to answer Q52, and reported it as a clean win: a pure reorder,
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zero lines lost, nothing authored.
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**It was all of those things and still wrong.** That section is part of the **historical PM seed**. It
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describes a 2×3 rack and seven modules; D023 replaced those with an eight-cell rack and a twelve-entry
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catalogue. So a move that altered not one word put **obsolete values in front of every reader** — worse
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than the density it was fixing, and precisely the failure mode this role audits other people for.
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The Equipment and Build Designer flagged it in their next revision, precisely and without heat, and left
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the correction to the editor. **Reverted**: both sections are back immediately before *Expansion
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assignment*, my orientation note is gone, verified as a pure move with nothing gained and only my own line
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lost. Their correction note stays — it is theirs and it is right.
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**The tell was there and this role missed it.** Those sections sat directly under **Preserved PM source
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seed**. I read the heading, which says *current*, instead of the neighbourhood, which says *seed* — an
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hour after declining the identical move on [Colony](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Colony) *because* its equivalent
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section says "before expansion" on its face. I got it right when the label was honest and wrong when it
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was not, which means I was never really checking.
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Three things corrected, not just the page:
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- **[Wiki Conventions §7](/Wiki%20Conventions)** cited Equipment as the worked example. It now carries the
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failure and its tell instead: *check that the plain text you are hoisting is current, and do not trust
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the heading to tell you — if you are not the author, ask or move nothing.* Enemies is the worked example.
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- **[Q52](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions)** is **open again on all four pages**, my "partly
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answered" withdrawn.
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- **The reader's round crediting the fix** is left as they wrote it, with a dated correction under it. It
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was true when written; the error was mine, not theirs.
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### Also
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- **[Findings index](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Findings)**, published last pass, claimed to cover
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*every* finding. REV105-1 onward opened on the live review page within the hour. Now scoped to archived
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rounds, with a pointer to where the current ones live — the same class of overstatement this role keeps
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having to fix in other people's pointers.
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- No orphans, no broken internal links.
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**What this pass is actually evidence for.** Being told to edit aggressively made this role bolder in the
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same morning it made two content errors, both of them moves or deletions that looked safe under its own
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checks. The checks are not the problem — a pure-move verifier cannot know which of two sections is
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current. **The page's author can.** Aggression on structure is cheap and reversible; aggression on *which
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text is true* is neither, and this role should be asking before doing it.
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7845b5 Anonymous 2026-09-07 09:44:47
Nineteenth pass: no lost updates; the reader took the Clarity Questions split (129KB -> 9.5KB, all 51 questions verified preserved). Answered their costed lever with a measurement - 36 of 59 finding identifiers are still cited from live pages, so the archives cannot become dated links - and addressed the underlying complaint instead with a new Findings index: all 59 findings in one line each, lifted verbatim from the critic's headings, linked from the review page and all four archives. Equipment reordered for Q52. Recorded the growth rate: 21,000 words an hour.
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## 2026-09-07 ~09:45 UTC+3 — nineteenth pass
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Sixty-eight pages. **No lost updates.** Seven shrinkages, all documented, including the largest single
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change this wiki has seen.
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### The reader took the split, and did it better than it was offered
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[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions): **129,223 bytes → 9,492.** Verified —
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**all fifty-one questions present in [the Archive](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions/Archive), none
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lost**, with a status line and a one-line index of every question kept on the live page. Offered three
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passes ago and left with them; they took it and kept the part that made the page worth its size. They also
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filed the whole-wiki readability audit above this entry, against their own page first, which is the right
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order to do it in.
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### Answering the lever they costed but would not pull
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Their audit's sharpest point: **59,000 words — a fifth of this wiki — is superseded review text across
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four archives**, and [Wiki Conventions §2](/Wiki%20Conventions) permits citing by revision URL instead
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of retaining it. They declined to propose it because they did not know which findings are still cited by
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name, and said the critic and the editor do. Measured:
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**36 of 59 finding identifiers are still cited from live pages today.** REV104-1 alone appears on Campaign,
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Districts, Pumping District and the live review. **So the archives cannot become dated links — that would
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break sixty per cent of the citations pointing into them.** The option is costed and closed for now, with
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the number rather than an opinion.
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### But the reader's underlying complaint was right, so: a findings index
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The real defect was never the archives' size — it was that meeting *"resolved at REV104-1"* on a design
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page forced you to load seventeen thousand words to learn what REV104-1 said.
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**[Design Review / Findings](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Findings)** now lists all fifty-nine
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findings, one line each, with a link to each full text and a column showing which are still cited.
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**Every statement is the critic's own section heading, lifted unedited; the editor wrote none of them.**
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Linked from the live review page and from all four archives.
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That also makes the archives *reducible later* if the critic ever wants it: once the one-line statement
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lives somewhere permanent, the bodies are a judgement call rather than a dependency. **That call is the
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critic's, not this role's.**
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### Also
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- **[Equipment](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment) reordered** — see the Q52 note below; a pure move, zero
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lines lost, one line added.
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- Dropped the count from Clarity Questions' new *Status* heading: it read *"51 asked, 51 answered"* while
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Q52 was open.
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- [Enemies/Drifter](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Enemies/Drifter) stays: its six inbound links are all about the
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rename, and the Design Index now names Walker as current with Drifter as the compatibility pointer,
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which is better than the plain repoint this role made.
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### One number for the mandate
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The wiki grew **295,420 → 327,274 words in about ninety minutes** — roughly 21,000 words an hour, a
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full working day of reading every three hours. Splitting, reordering and indexing keep the front of it
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navigable. Nothing this role does changes that arithmetic, and PM and the owner should know it plainly.
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e72ac8 Anonymous 2026-09-07 08:16:44
Readability audit of the whole wiki by the outside reader: 65 pages, 293,288 words, about 22 hours to read; 44 percent design, 22 percent process, 20 percent superseded review text, 9 percent reference. Records that the largest page was the reader's own Clarity Questions at 22,541 words and that it has been cut to 1,725 with the full record preserved verbatim at Clarity Questions/Archive, minus 20,816 words and nothing lost. Names the one large remaining option - 59,031 words of verbatim superseded reviews, which Conventions section 2 permits either as stable homes or as revision-URL citations - and leaves it to the critic and editor since only they know which findings are still cited by name. No page but the reader's own was edited
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## Readability audit of the whole wiki, by the outside reader, 2026-09-07 08:20 UTC+3
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Measured, not impressions. Every page fetched as source and counted; reading times at 220 words a minute,
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the basis the Hub's own figures use. **I have edited no page but my own.** Everything below about other
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people's pages is a measurement handed to whoever owns them.
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### The number
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**65 pages. 293,288 words. About 22 hours 13 minutes to read.**
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| Category | Words | Share |
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| Design content (Document, Campaign, World, districts, enemies, mechanics, equipment, colony) | 130,937 | 44% |
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| Process and meta (questions, PM reviews, tasks, team, logs, register, external critique, conventions) | 65,891 | 22% |
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| Superseded review revisions retained verbatim (Design Review / Archive and its three sub-pages) | 59,031 | 20% |
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| Reference | 26,573 | 9% |
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**Fifty-six per cent of this wiki is not design.** That is not an accusation — review, coordination and
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sourcing are why the design got as good as it did, and I filed a fair amount of the process bulk myself.
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It is just a fact nobody had counted.
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### The ten largest pages
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| 22,541 | Clarity Questions **(mine — fixed today, see below)** |
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| 21,565 | Design Document |
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| 17,819 | Design Review / Archive |
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| 16,998 | Design Review / Archive / REV104 |
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| 13,304 | World and Mystery |
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| 12,124 | Design Review / Archive / REV102 |
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| 11,934 | Campaign |
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| 10,698 | Design Review / Archive / REV103 |
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| 9,552 | Enemies |
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| 9,290 | Wiki Maintenance Log |
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### What I did about mine, since it was the largest page on the wiki
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The single biggest page here was the one whose entire job is to report when the wiki has become hard to
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read. It had reached **22,541 words — larger than the Design Document** — because twenty rounds were
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appended and none were ever removed, and by this morning every one of its 51 questions was answered.
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It is now **1,725 words**. The full record is at
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[Clarity Questions / Archive](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions/Archive), verbatim: nothing edited,
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nothing summarised, every status cell as its owning role set it, and the two questions filed there by
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other contributors included as they stood. What stayed on the live page is what anyone actually needs —
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what the page is for, that all 51 are answered, a one-line index of every question and where it was
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answered, and the page's own four corrections. **Net effect on the wiki: −20,816 words, about 95 minutes
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of reading, with no information lost.**
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I am recording that against myself deliberately. That page grew by exactly the mechanism it kept
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reporting in other pages: every addition was justified on its own, and nobody was counting the total.
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### The one lever that would move the number most, and it is not mine to pull
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**59,031 words — one fifth of this wiki — is superseded review text retained verbatim across four archive
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pages.** Moving it off the live review page was plainly right and the editor's note explains why. The
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question is only whether it needs to be retained *in full* now that it is off.
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[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) §2 already sets out both options and permits both: a superseded
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passage that other pages cite by name may be given "a stable home of its own", which is what these
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archives are — **or** it may be cited by revision URL, since every revision is kept forever and
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addressable at `/<Page>/source/<hash>?raw`. If the second route were taken for the reviews that nothing
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now cites by name, four pages of stacked text become one page of dated links, and the wiki loses about a
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fifth of its length without losing a sentence, because the sentences stay in history where §2 says the
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archive actually lives.
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I am not proposing that, because I do not know which findings are still cited by name and the critic and
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the editor do. I am reporting the size of the option.
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### Two smaller observations, offered without recommendations
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- **The Design Document at 21,565 words is not the problem it looks like.** REF105 measured published
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design documents at 2,456 to 31,160 words; this one is mid-range. Its length is normal for its kind and
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I withdrew my own worry about it yesterday for exactly that reason.
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- **The four archive pages plus this log plus the register plus the questions page** are all pages that
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exist to record process. Together they are 92,000 words, and every one of them is individually
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justified. The pattern worth watching is not any single page but that process records have no natural
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end: design pages get superseded and replaced, process pages only accumulate. Mine did. This one is at
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9,700 words and rising.
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*Filed by the outside reader. No design content, no decisions, no owner requirements, nothing built, no
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assets. All counts are of page source as fetched at 08:15–08:20 UTC+3 on 2026-09-07 and will drift; the
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method is `wc -w` on `/<Page>/source?raw` for every page in `/-/index`, so anyone can re-run it.*
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9b34f4 Anonymous 2026-09-06 23:38:58
Paused overnight at its owner's request, with the wiki going offline too. Seventeen passes, nothing left half-done; records the state at the stop, the two items waiting on people rather than on this role, and that nothing is watching for lost updates until it resumes.
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01c9e0 Anonymous 2026-09-07 08:13:37
Eighteenth pass, resumed with a wider mandate: measured the wiki (295k words, 65 pages, 58% in 13 monster pages, one project code every 28 words, over half the words coordination rather than design). Fixed the front door, which opened with yesterday's server outage. Found and restored a fourteen-hour-old truncation of Home caused by the editor's own trailer regex - the sixth lost update here and the second by this role.
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## 2026-09-07 ~08:10 UTC+3 — eighteenth pass. Resumed, with a wider mandate
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The owner resumed the pass this morning, judged the wiki **unreadable by humans**, and asked the editor to
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be more aggressive. That is now a standing instruction, and this entry starts by measuring the thing
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before acting on it.
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### What this wiki actually is, measured
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| Total | **295,420 words, 65 pages** — about 21 hours of reading |
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| In pages over 8,000 words | **170,361 words in 13 pages (58%)** |
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| Process and coordination, at page level | 59,600 (20%) |
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| Superseded review archives | 55,775 (19%) — four pages nobody will read again |
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| Provenance *inside* design pages | a further ~20% of them |
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| Project codes and revision hashes | **10,505 — one every 28 words** |
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Netting that out: **more than half the words on this wiki are roles talking to each other about the work
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rather than describing the game.** The audit trail is excellent. The encyclopedia is missing.
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### The front door led with a server outage from yesterday
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[Home](/Home) opened with a resolved incident notice — a DNS change and a git thread-safety fault —
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which was the first thing any human read. It is now at the foot under *Site notices*, and the page opens
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with what this wiki is and a **five-minute path into the project** for a person who wants to know what is
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being built.
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### And a content loss of the editor's own, fourteen hours old
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Restoring Home turned up that **its last four API notes and the whole House rules section have been
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missing since 17:28 yesterday.** The cause was the editor's own trailer-stripping regex: `[^)]*` spans
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newlines, so on the one page whose text *quotes* the trailer syntax it matched from that quote to the last
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`)` in the file and deleted everything between.
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Nobody noticed — including the editor, across seventeen passes of auditing everyone else for exactly
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this — because the page still ended in a plausible-looking bullet. **A truncation that leaves valid
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prose behind is invisible to every check this role runs**; the size sweep only compares a page to its own
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previous revision, and the loss happened in the same save as a legitimate addition.
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Restored verbatim from [8322e8](/Home?revision=8322e8). The regex is fixed and the working pattern is now
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on [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions), because every agent here strips that trailer.
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**That is the sixth lost update on this wiki and the second caused by this role.** Both of the editor's
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were the same shape: a deletion that looked like a formatting detail.
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9b34f4 Anonymous 2026-09-06 23:38:58
Paused overnight at its owner's request, with the wiki going offline too. Seventeen passes, nothing left half-done; records the state at the stop, the two items waiting on people rather than on this role, and that nothing is watching for lost updates until it resumes.
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## Paused overnight — 2026-09-06 ~23:30 UTC+3
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**The editor's pass is stopped and the wiki is being taken offline for the night**, both at their owner's
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request. It resumes in the morning.
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Seventeen passes ran, 17:20 to 23:22. **Nothing is left half-done** — no page is mid-edit, the last pass
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closed cleanly, and every item this role raised is either fixed or recorded under *"reported, not fixed"*
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in the entry that raised it.
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**State at the stop.** Sixty-five pages, no orphans, no broken internal links.
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[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) is at fifty-one asked, fifty answered, with
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only **Q21** open and that one the reader's own to close. Five lost updates have occurred in total across
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the day; four were repaired and one — reported against this role — turned out not to have happened.
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**Two things are waiting for a person, not for this role:**
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- **Q46**, for the lead: the [Design Document](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Document) still says *"three
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to four hours"* six times, after the owner rejected that scope.
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- **The offered split** of Clarity Questions, now 125 KB with 86% closed rounds — the outside reader's
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call, and silence is a valid answer to it.
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**Nothing is watching for lost updates until this resumes.** The
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[conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) are what actually prevent them — re-read immediately before you POST,
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and diff what your save removes — and three roles have now derived that second rule independently. They
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work whether or not anyone is watching.
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5f6523 Anonymous 2026-09-06 19:52:10
Pause the standing maintenance pass at its owner's request, and say so on the page that claims it runs every ten minutes. Fourteen passes, 17:20 to 19:48, nothing left half-done. Records what is still open and for whom, and notes that while this is paused nobody is watching for lost updates - the conventions are what prevent them anyway.
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fad070 Anonymous 2026-09-06 23:25:52
Seventeenth pass: 65 pages, no lost updates, sixteen shrinkages all accounted for including the Design Review dropping to 8 KB as its archive absorbed 23 KB. The seeded-page header template held - every design page created since carries the Glossary link unasked, six hand-patches became zero. Broke my own stale-pointer convention again by enumerating six enemy roles a day before a seventh landed; corrected, and the general form folded in as 'an enumeration is a count in words'. Clarity Questions at 50 of 51, nothing waiting on a role.
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## 2026-09-06 ~23:22 UTC+3 — seventeenth pass
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Sixty-five pages, three new ([The Exchange](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Districts/The%20Exchange),
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[Floater](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Enemies/Floater),
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[Reference/Asset Audit](/Reference/Asset%20Audit)). No orphans, no broken internal links.
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**No lost updates.**
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Sixteen shrinkages across the interval, five of them new, all accounted for. The largest — the
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[Design Review](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review) falling 29,859 → 8,351 across two saves — is
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the archive pattern running at full speed: [Archive/REV104](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/Rev104)
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gained 23,548 in the same window. Every superseded round is moved, the live page stays under 10 KB, and
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nobody has had to be asked since the second pass.
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### The template held, and that is the result worth recording
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seeded-page header down on the [Design Index](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Index) instead. **Every design
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page created since carries it** — The Exchange and Floater both, without being asked. Six hand-patches
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became zero. That is the whole argument for fixing a template over fixing instances, and it is now
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evidenced rather than asserted.
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### And I broke my own convention again, in a new shape
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Last pass this role added a Glossary row naming *"the six enemy behaviour roles"*. A seventh, **Floater**,
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was published about an hour later. The convention against this is one the editor wrote two hours ago —
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*do not stamp a pointer with something that will move* — and the row is now corrected to say that
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[Enemies](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Enemies) owns the list and the Glossary does not track it.
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count in words.** Naming the members of a set someone else maintains fails the same way as counting them,
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and it is not obvious until it breaks.
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### Where the questions stand
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[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions): **fifty-one asked, fifty answered.** The only
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open item is **Q21**, and it has been the reader's own to close for eight passes — their Round 5 verdict
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already says the Design Document read cold and worked. For the first time since this log began, **nothing
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on that page is waiting on a role.**
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**The split offered last pass** — archiving the closed rounds of that page, now 125 KB — has had no
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answer, which was one of the two answers offered. Not re-raised.
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861431 Anonymous 2026-09-06 22:27:31
Sixteenth pass, first hourly: 62 pages, ~78 saves, no lost updates, eleven shrinkages all accounted for. Answered Q50 - the Hub's 'short owner read' was 14,655 words and about 64 minutes, so it now names the genuine five-minute path and the full hour separately, both measured and dated. My Hub scope caution was correctly removed by PMR006 now the document acknowledges the expansion. Offered the outside reader a split of Clarity Questions, now the largest page at 125 KB with 86% closed rounds - their call, not an edit.
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## 2026-09-06 ~22:27 UTC+3 — sixteenth pass, first at the hourly cadence
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Sixty-two pages, four new (a REV104 archive, PMR005 and PMR006 sub-pages,
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[Reference/Electroreception](/Reference/Electroreception)). Roughly seventy-eight saves in the interval.
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No orphans, no broken internal links. **No lost updates.**
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Eleven shrinkages, every one accounted for. Two worth naming because both are this wiki's own conventions
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being applied by people who did not need telling: [Colony](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Colony) r2 rewrote itself
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and kept PM's seed *"preserved verbatim"* under a labelled heading; and
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[Mechanics/Combat](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanics/Combat) r4 consolidated two stacked reconciliation
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appendices into one current contract with the history moved out — which is exactly what was done to the
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Design Review in the first pass, arrived at independently.
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**My scope caution was removed from the Hub, correctly.** PMR006 took it out as a contradictory line,
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noting the Design Document now acknowledges the expansion itself — verified: it cites the Expansion
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Brief twice and D019 five times. The caution had done its job and become clutter. *It still says "three to
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four hours" six times, which is Q46 and remains the lead's.*
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### Q50: the "short owner read" was about an hour
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The reader timed the path the Hub sends an owner down and found it was 12,707 words. Re-counted this pass,
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it has grown: **[Campaign](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign) 11,012 words plus
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[Build Paths](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment/Build%20Paths) 3,643 — 14,655, about 64 minutes**, against
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the 91 minutes the same page quotes for the document this replaced. Over half of it is Campaign §3's
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three districts in depth, which is what makes the seven-district claim checkable and which reviewers need.
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The genuinely short read already existed one heading down. The Hub line now names both: **five minutes**
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(Campaign's own *"Read this first"*, 902 words, plus §10 *"Decisions for the owner"*, 297 — both
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stand alone) and **the full hour**. PM's routing is unchanged; only the label now matches the thing, and
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both figures are dated because both pages are moving.
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That is the third navigation defect the reader has found by *walking* a path rather than checking that its
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links resolve. All three passed every link check this role runs.
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### Reported, not fixed — for the outside reader
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**[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) is now the largest page on the wiki**, at
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125 KB and 21,000 words across nineteen rounds. Fifty questions asked, forty-eight answered; **86% of the
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page is closed rounds whose status cells have stopped changing.**
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In the fifth pass this role decided *not* to split it, and recorded why: unlike the Design Review, its old
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rows were still live. That reason has largely expired. **But it is your page and the map it holds — every
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question with the revision that answered it — is the thing that makes it worth its size, so this is a
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question rather than an edit.** If you want it, the shape that preserves the map is: the box, a complete
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question → status → where-answered index, and the recent rounds on this page; rounds 2–14
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verbatim on `/Clarity Questions/Archive`. Say the word and this role will do it; say nothing and it stays
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as it is, which is a defensible answer.
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d050d9 Anonymous 2026-09-06 21:32:02
Fifteenth pass, auditing the whole 96-minute pause: 58 pages, 20 new, two designers seated and shipped. A fourth lost update happened in the gap and PM caught it themselves, deriving the delete-guard independently - recorded beside the editor's case. Fixed real link rot on the Design Index after an enemy rename, brought the Glossary up to the new page tree with pointers rather than copies, recounted the questions box.
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## 2026-09-06 ~21:30 UTC+3 — fifteenth pass, auditing the 96-minute gap
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last ten minutes. **Fifty-eight pages now, twenty of them new** — two designers were seated and shipped:
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a Combat and Enemy Designer (`/Enemies/*`, six behaviour roles with a page each, plus
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[Mechanics/Combat](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanics/Combat)) and an Equipment designer
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(`/Equipment/*`, [Inventory and Charge](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanics/Inventory%20And%20Charge)), along
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with [Campaign](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign), two districts, PMR004 and PMU005. No orphans, no broken
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internal links.
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### A fourth lost update happened in the gap. PM caught it themselves.
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PMR004 replaced a section of [Tasks](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks) and, in doing so, removed the Equipment
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author's embedded submission note and revision ledger — which had been written *inside the span being
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replaced*. PM found it by diffing against an immutable earlier revision, restored it verbatim under a
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dated heading, and wrote the rule in their own words: **"Fresh-read plus successful readback alone does
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not prove author preservation."**
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did the same thing to the reference researcher four passes ago, and after TRL102 turned it into a
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mechanical check. Three incidents, three roles, one rule. PM's case is now recorded on
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[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) beside the editor's, because a convention with two independent
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derivations behind it argues for itself.
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**Nothing else was lost.** Seven other shrinkages across the window, all documented: withdrawn findings,
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archived review rounds, and one enemy renamed.
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### Fixed
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1. **A renamed enemy that the map still pointed at under its old name.** The Combat designer published a
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role as *Drifter*, found an hour later that the Lead's Campaign page called the same role *Walker*,
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and did the rename properly — citing convention 6, leaving a pointer page, and asking the editor to
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retire it *"once nothing links here"*. Five pages still linked it. Four of those are discussing the
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rename and should; **one, the [Design Index](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Index)'s enemy list, was
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real link rot** and now says Walker. The pointer stays until the meta-references go.
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2. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) caught up with the new tree.** One row for the six enemy
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behaviour roles pointing at the page that owns them, rather than six copies that would drift; and a
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note on the gear section that the equipment items now have their own pages which own the detail, so
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this page is not read as a competing definition.
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3. **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions)** recounted for the first time in
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ninety-six minutes — forty-nine asked, forty-seven answered — and the box now says when it went
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unattended, rather than implying it had been current all along.
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**What the gap actually cost.** One lost update, caught by its author rather than by this role, about
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twenty minutes after it happened. The conventions did the work; the watching only shortened the delay.
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That is worth knowing before anyone treats this pass as load-bearing.
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065e72 Anonymous 2026-09-06 21:27:20
Resume the ten-minute pass and convert the pause note into a record of the gap: 19:50 to 21:26, ninety-six minutes in which nothing was watching for lost updates while the wiki gained two designers, an enemies tree and two PM rounds. The next entry audits the whole window.
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## Paused 19:50, resumed 21:26 UTC+3 — a 96-minute gap
5f6523 Anonymous 2026-09-06 19:52:10
Pause the standing maintenance pass at its owner's request, and say so on the page that claims it runs every ten minutes. Fourteen passes, 17:20 to 19:48, nothing left half-done. Records what is still open and for whom, and notes that while this is paused nobody is watching for lost updates - the conventions are what prevent them anyway.
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065e72 Anonymous 2026-09-06 21:27:20
Resume the ten-minute pass and convert the pause note into a record of the gap: 19:50 to 21:26, ninety-six minutes in which nothing was watching for lost updates while the wiki gained two designers, an enemies tree and two PM rounds. The next entry audits the whole window.
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The ten-minute pass was paused at its owner's request after fourteen passes and resumed at 21:26.
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**Nothing was watching for lost updates during that window**, and the wiki did roughly a day's work
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in it: two new designers, a `/Enemies/*` tree, `/Mechanics/Combat`, PMR004 and PMU005. The first pass
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after resuming audits the whole gap rather than only the last ten minutes.
5f6523 Anonymous 2026-09-06 19:52:10
Pause the standing maintenance pass at its owner's request, and say so on the page that claims it runs every ten minutes. Fourteen passes, 17:20 to 19:48, nothing left half-done. Records what is still open and for whom, and notes that while this is paused nobody is watching for lost updates - the conventions are what prevent them anyway.
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39edc7 Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:30:50
Sixth pass: no lost updates across five documented shrinkages; answered the reader's report (the box was never lost - I renamed its heading without saying so, breaking a convention I had just written); trimmed three oversized Hub entries back to the section's norm; refreshed the Glossary's project-codes table from six code families to eleven; the open-questions box is now recomputed and saved atomically. Q28 closed after six passes.
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39216f Anonymous 2026-09-06 19:47:46
Fourteenth pass: no lost updates; answered Q48 (GDD undefined - defined on the Glossary rather than edited off other pages) and partly Q46 (the Hub's own 'start here' line pointed at a document recommending the scope the owner just rejected - one-line scope caution added, rewrite left to DES104). Stopped patching the missing Glossary link page by page and wrote the seeded-page header down on the Design Index instead.
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## 2026-09-06 ~19:48 UTC+3 — fourteenth pass
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Thirty-eight pages. Five new ones, all from PMU004 finishing its rollout:
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[Colony](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Colony), [Enemies](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Enemies),
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[Equipment](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment),
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[Team / Expansion Prompts](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Team/Expansion%20Prompts) and
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[Reference / Content Scale](/Reference/Content%20Scale). No orphans, no broken internal links, **no lost
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updates** — three documented shrinkages, all roles withdrawing their own findings or archiving a
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superseded review round.
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### The signpost problem the reader named, and it was pointing at the wrong thing
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**Q46.** The Hub bolds the Design Document and says *"Start here to read the game."* That line is the
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editor's. The document at r14 mentions the expansion steer **zero times** and still states *"three to four
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hours"* **five times** — the scope the owner has just rejected. PMU004 and document r14 landed about a
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minute apart, so this is a crossing rather than anyone's error; but as the reader put it, *"the gap
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between an owner changing their mind and the document knowing it is the one window where a reader can be
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actively misled"*, and this time it was visible on the page the project points strangers at.
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Fixed the way they proposed — **one line, not a rewrite.** The Hub's Design Document entry now carries
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a scope caution naming the Expansion Brief and D019, and separating what still stands (how the game works)
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from what is being revised (how much game there is). The rewrite is DES104's and Q46 stays open for the
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lead; only the signpost was mine to fix.
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**Q48 — "GDD".** Used four times across the new topic pages, defined nowhere, while the same sentences
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write *"Design Document"* in the link text beside it. Now one line on the
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[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary), **defined rather than edited off other people's pages**, so both
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spellings resolve. The reader's own note on it is the right framing: this is the exact failure Q1–Q9
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spent the afternoon eliminating, and the fix each time was one clause.
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### Fixed, and one thing fixed properly
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- **The Glossary link was missing from all three newly seeded topic pages**, as it was from the three
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before them. Added — and then, rather than patch this a third time, the standard header for a seeded
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topic page is now written down on the [Design Index](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Index): source page
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and revision, then Design Index · Expansion Brief · Glossary. **Six pages across two passes was
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enough of a pattern to stop treating it as six problems.**
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- **Hub length figure re-measured:** about 21,000 words, roughly ninety-one minutes. A 6% move, which is
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worth re-stamping where last pass's 3% was not.
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**Nothing reported to a role this pass** beyond Q46, which is recorded where the lead will see it.
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7c6d44 Anonymous 2026-09-06 19:38:52
Thirteenth pass: PMU004 restructured the wiki around the owner's expansion steer and the Hub linked none of it - fixed, plus Glossary links on the seeded topic pages and the new task codes. No lost updates. My own error: I marked three pages missing within four minutes of PM creating them, auditing a rollout mid-flight; all three annotations undone and the lesson added as a convention.
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## 2026-09-06 ~19:40 UTC+3 — thirteenth pass
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**The wiki changed shape this pass.** PMU004 published the owner's expansion steer — one district and a
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few hours is far too little, many more districts wanted, separate pages for mechanics, enemies and weapons
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— and with it a hierarchy: [Expansion Brief](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expansion%20Brief),
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[Design Index](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Index), and seeded topic pages under
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[Mechanics](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanics/Power%20And%20Attraction),
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[Districts](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Districts/Pumping%20District) and
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[Weapons](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Weapons/Cutter). Thirty-three pages now. **No lost updates.**
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The Design Index names this role in its header — *"navigation maintained by Wiki Editor"* — and
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assigns **EDT102**, the protocol for moving rule definitions out of the design document onto topic pages
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with their authors' validation. Noted and accepted; that is transfer work for coming passes, done with the
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content owners, not an editorial rewrite.
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**Fixed**
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1. **The Hub did not link the new structure at all.** The Design Index and Expansion Brief were reachable
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from nothing outside their own cluster, so a reader arriving at the project's front page could not find
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the map of the design. Both now sit above the existing groups, because that is what they are: the new
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entry point.
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2. **The seeded topic pages did not link the [Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary)**, which EDT102
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itself asks for. A reader meeting *beacon*, *dispatch*, *signal cable*, *valve* or *field pump* on
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those pages had nowhere to look them up. One link each.
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3. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) codes** now decode EDT102, DES104, WLD103 and the PMR/PMU
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rounds that have their own sub-pages.
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### And an error of mine, made and undone inside four minutes
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I marked *Enemies* and *Colony* as **"planned; page not created"** on the Design Index, and flagged a 404
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on the Expansion Brief where it tells the owner the expansion prompts are ready. **All three pages were
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created within four minutes of my checking them.** PM was publishing a hierarchy page by page and I
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audited it mid-flight. Every annotation was accurate when written and false a minute later. All three are
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removed.
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This is the same defect as the stale pointers I wrote up an hour ago, wearing the opposite coat — and I
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wrote that convention. It is now [convention](/Wiki%20Conventions) too: **before marking something
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missing, check `/-/log` for saves in the last few minutes; if a structure is actively being published,
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come back rather than annotate it.** A gap and a gap-being-filled look identical in a link check, and only
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the log tells them apart.
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**Also:** [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted — forty-seven asked,
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forty-four answered. The delete-guard refused one of this pass's saves for exceeding its removal
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allowance; the removals were all the editor's own box text, reviewed, and the save was re-run with the
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allowance raised deliberately rather than by reflex.
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cbaf0f Anonymous 2026-09-06 19:26:47
Twelfth pass: no lost updates; the outside reader walked the wiki as a newcomer and found two stale signposts, one of them the editor's own Hub sentence - both fixed and marked; new convention 'do not stamp a pointer with something that will move' with three instances. Recording that walking the path found what eleven passes of link-checking could not, because both links resolved and only their words were false.
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## 2026-09-06 ~19:27 UTC+3 — twelfth pass
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Twenty-seven pages, no new ones, no orphans, no broken internal links.
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**No lost updates.** Four documented shrinkages, all roles revising their own records or archiving a
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superseded review round into its own sub-page.
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### The reader stopped auditing the document and audited the signposts instead — and found two of mine
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Nothing of the reader's was open, so
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[CLR101 r14](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) did the other half of the job: arrived at the wiki
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as a stranger and tried to find the game. Both defects they found were pointers that had been correct
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when written and had quietly stopped being true. **Both are fixed.**
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- **Q43** — the [Design](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design) page's banner said its rules were superseded by
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the Design Document *"draft r1, revision d828a4"*. That had been true for about ninety minutes and
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thirteen revisions. The link pointed at the page, so a reader landed on a twenty-thousand-word document
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while believing they had arrived at a first draft. Fixed the way the reader proposed — **by naming no
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revision at all**, because the banner's own last sentence, *"Where this page and the Design Document
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differ, the Design Document is current"*, is the durable statement and needs no version number.
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- **Q44** — the Hub's Reader aids said *"Both of the above sit in the Reference section"*. The shelf
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has five pages now, three of them cited by the Design Document itself. **That sentence was the
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editor's**, written in the sixth pass when there were two. It now points at the
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[Reference](/Reference) index and tells the reader to trust the index over the Hub line.
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Both marked answered on the reader's page, per its own instruction that whoever answers sets the status.
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**New [convention](/Wiki%20Conventions): do not stamp a pointer with something that will move.** Three
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instances in one afternoon — the banner's revision, the Hub's count, and this log's own
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open-questions box, which put a number in its heading and was wrong twice in ten minutes. A pointer that
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names its target's revision or counts what is on the other end fails *quietly*: the link still works and
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the reader still lands somewhere real. Point at the thing and let the thing say what it is; if a figure
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genuinely has to appear, date it and say it moves.
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**Worth recording about the reader's method.** They noted that every stale pointer they found points at
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something that got *better* after the pointer was written — "the wiki is being added to faster than its
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signposts are being re-read". That is the right diagnosis, and it is a maintenance failure rather than an
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authoring one, which makes it this role's. Walking the path as a stranger found two things that eleven
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passes of link-checking did not, because both links resolved perfectly; only their *words* were false.
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Link-checking cannot see that, and this role has been leaning on it.
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### Also
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- [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions): forty-four asked, forty-three answered.
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- [Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) current against Design Document r13; no vocabulary moved.
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249776 Anonymous 2026-09-06 19:16:28
Eleventh pass: no lost updates across five documented shrinkages; TRL102 rewrote the editor's delete-by-range convention into a mechanical diff check that would have caught the editor's own destruction last pass, and it is now adopted for every editor save; Clarity Questions at 41 of 42; Glossary current against document r13. Deliberately not re-stamping the Hub's length figure for a 3% move.
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## 2026-09-06 ~19:16 UTC+3 — eleventh pass
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Twenty-seven pages. Two new ones, both sub-pages of things that were getting long:
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[Design Review / Archive / REV103](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/Rev103) and
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[PM Reviews / PMR003](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Pm%20Reviews/Pmr003). No orphans, no broken internal links.
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**No lost updates.** Five pages shrank and all five were documented: three roles correcting their own
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records, the critic archiving REV103 into its own sub-page, and PM replacing the PMR002 status section on
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[Tasks](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks) with a PMR003 one — checked task by task, nothing dropped.
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### The convention I wrote last pass has been replaced with a better one, by the role I would least have expected
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TRL102 — the self-appointed adversarial role — rewrote the *delete by content, not by range*
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convention on [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions), and it is a genuine improvement. My version said
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*"print what you are deleting and read it."* Theirs points out that this asks for care at the exact moment
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care has already failed: **the editor did re-read, correctly, and deleted anyway.** What would have caught
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it is not a reading but a comparison — diff the live text against what you are about to send, enumerate
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every removed line, and refuse to POST if any line is one you did not write.
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They used my own figures as the proof: 2,524 characters removed, 890 of them mine; a diff would have
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printed 1,634 characters of someone else's prose and stopped the save. *"That turns this failure from a
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habit you must maintain into a precondition you cannot pass, and it costs one command."*
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**Adopted.** Every editor save from this pass onward goes through that check, and it printed its first
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removal on this pass's recount of the
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[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) box — one line, the previous
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*"Recounted at…"* stamp, mine. The page's standing invitation is to change a convention here rather
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than argue with it elsewhere; this is the first time someone has taken it, and the wiki is better for it.
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### Also
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- **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions):** forty-two asked, forty-one answered.
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Q21 remains the only one open and has been the reader's own to close for five passes.
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- **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary)** is current against Design Document r13; no vocabulary
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changed this pass.
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- **The Design Document is now about 20,250 words, roughly 88 minutes.** Up 3% since the Hub figure was
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measured, which is not enough to be worth another edit — re-stamping a number for a 3% move is the
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activity-for-its-own-sake that PMR002 ruled against. It will be re-measured when it moves materially.
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**Nothing reported to a role this pass.** The reading-time question raised two passes ago is live and
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being worked with evidence at [Reference / Design Documents](/Reference/Design%20Documents); repeating it
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would add nothing.
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---
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ac6623 Anonymous 2026-09-06 19:07:12
Tenth pass: the editor destroyed 1,634 characters of the reference researcher's reply by deleting a section by range twenty-one seconds after they wrote into it - restored verbatim, and the lesson is now a convention (delete by content, not by range; the re-read guard structurally cannot catch this). Clarity Questions at 41 of 42 answered; Hub's document-length figure re-measured and dated.
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## 2026-09-06 ~19:06 UTC+3 — tenth pass
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Twenty-five pages. Two new ones, both from the reference researcher:
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[Asset Licences](/Reference/Asset%20Licences) and
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[Design Documents](/Reference/Design%20Documents). No orphans, no broken internal links.
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### I destroyed another role's work, and this is how
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**At 18:54:43 the reference researcher replied to an editor's note on [Reference](/Reference)** —
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1,634 characters confirming the contradiction the editor had flagged, saying which half was stale,
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recording that the *"search who was quoting it"* convention has an inward-facing half, and listing the
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search they had run across every page on this wiki. **At 18:55:04, twenty-one seconds later, the editor
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deleted it.**
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Not by racing them. The editor's re-read guard fired correctly and found no concurrent save — because
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there was none. Their reply was already on the page when the editor read it. The editor removed the
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editor's own note *by range*: everything between the note's heading and the next heading. Their reply had
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been written inside that span. The commit message said "note removed as resolved"; it removed 2,524
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characters, of which the editor had written 890.
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**Restored verbatim from [e75200](/Reference?revision=e75200)**, with a header on the page saying what
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happened, and the lesson is now [convention](/Wiki%20Conventions): *delete by content, not by range —
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print what you are about to remove and read it; if it is longer than what you wrote, someone else has been
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in there.* This is the only failure mode on this wiki that careful re-reading structurally cannot prevent,
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and it is the editor's.
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Three lost updates have now happened here. The first was between two other roles and the editor repaired
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it. The second was reported against the editor and turned out not to have happened. **The third was real
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and the editor caused it.**
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### Also
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- **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted:** forty-two asked, forty-one
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answered. The only thing open is **Q21**, and it has been the reader's own to close for four passes.
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- **The Design Document's length figure on the Hub was re-measured** — about 19,700 words, roughly
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eighty-four minutes, up from eighteen thousand an hour ago. The line now says when it was measured and
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that it keeps moving, because a number in a summary that does not date itself is a mistake this wiki has
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already made twice.
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- **The reading-time report from last pass was picked up**, not by an argument but by research: the
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reference researcher opened [Design Documents](/Reference/Design%20Documents) on documented
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design-document practice. That is the right way for a measurement to turn into a decision, and it is
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nobody's decision but the lead's and PM's.
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3b2822 Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:57:04
Ninth pass: no lost updates (three self-corrections); the REF102 contradiction reported last pass was fixed four minutes later and the Reference index is now correct, note retired. Reported to lead and PM: the owner-facing Design Document has more than doubled in seventy minutes, from a 37-minute read to a 78-minute one, with the growth curve tabled - measurement only. Hub now states the length on the line telling readers to read it straight through. Clarity Questions recounted at 39 of 41.
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## 2026-09-06 ~18:56 UTC+3 — ninth pass
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Twenty-three pages, no new ones, no orphans, no broken internal links.
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**No lost updates.** Three pages shrank; all three were roles correcting themselves.
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[External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) did it twice in ten minutes — r3 withdrew
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three of its own claims including one about a tool being blocked that was never blocked, and r4 retracted
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X24a because PM produced a counterexample and the finding had called three examples exhaustive.
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**Closed: the retraction that had not travelled.** Last pass this log recorded that
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[REF102](/Reference/Survivorlike%20Market%20Data) contradicted itself — its r4 header said the
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*"two distinct bands"* claim was retracted while its §2 heading still stated it — and that the
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[Reference](/Reference) index therefore could not describe that section correctly either way. **Four
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minutes later r6 renamed §2 to "List prices of the eleven titles sampled" and withdrew the
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price-to-audience inference.** The index now describes it correctly and the editor's note has been removed
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as resolved. Flag to fix: four minutes.
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**Reported, not fixed — the owner packet's reading time**
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Every revision of the [Design Document](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Document) has answered a real
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finding, and none of them is wrong on its own. The aggregate is worth stating plainly, because nobody
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watching one revision at a time will see it:
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| Revision | Words | Read time at 230 wpm |
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|---|---:|---:|
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| r1 | 8,612 | ~37 min |
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| r2 | 10,738 | ~47 min |
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| r3 | 11,851 | ~52 min |
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| r6 | 13,930 | ~61 min |
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| **r9 (now)** | **17,991** | **~78 min** |
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The document has **more than doubled in about seventy minutes of wall-clock work**, and the body alone,
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before the appendices, is now an hour. The Hub — on a line the editor wrote — tells the owner this
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is the page to *"read straight through"*; that line now carries the length so the claim is at least
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honest. [Tasks](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks) states the standard itself: *"Quality is determined by
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specificity, coherence, and appeal to the owner, not document length."*
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**For the lead designer and PM.** This is a measurement, not a design judgement, and the editor has no
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view on which sections matter. But growth of this shape usually means findings are being answered by
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addition, and the thing being optimised — an owner who reads it and wants the game to happen — is
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not obviously served by an eighty-minute read. Worth one deliberate decision rather than another
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increment.
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**Also:** [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted — forty-one asked,
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thirty-nine answered.
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---
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7e950e Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:47:21
Eighth pass: no lost updates (two documented self-shortenings); fixed a retraction that had not travelled - REF102 withdrew four claims and the Reference index went on stating three of them as fact, which PMR002 had already asked for; the price line left neutral because REF102 contradicts itself there and that is the researcher's call; new convention 'when you retract a claim, search for who was quoting it'; Clarity Questions recounted at 37 of 40; the 18:18 report thread closed by the reporter's own correction.
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## 2026-09-06 ~18:45 UTC+3 — eighth pass
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Twenty-three pages. Two new ones, both good structure by their authors:
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[PM Reviews / PMR002](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Pm%20Reviews/Pmr002) — PM has moved to one sub-page per review
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round — and [Reference / Length and Price Audit](/Reference/Length%20And%20Price%20Audit). No orphans, no
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broken internal links.
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**No lost updates.** Two pages shrank by more than a third and both said why in their own text:
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[External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) under a *"Withdrawn at this revision"*
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heading, and [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r8, which shortened itself deliberately
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because PMR002 ruled against repeated status posts.
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**Fixed — a retraction that had not travelled**
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[REF102](/Reference/Survivorlike%20Market%20Data) withdrew four of its own claims after PM's ruling. The
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[Reference](/Reference) index went on describing them as fact: *"two non-overlapping bands"*, §3a as
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*"completion rates"*, §3b as *"per-step retention"* — three statements a reader takes as current, on the
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page whose only job is to say what REF102 contains. PMR002 finding 4 had already asked for that index to
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be corrected, and the request was recorded further down the same page.
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Sections 3a and 3b now use REF102's **own current headings, verbatim** — *lifetime unlock shares* and
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*ratios between ordered markers, and what they do not mean*. The price line was left describing only
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"list prices", because REF102 currently contradicts itself there: its r4 header says the *"two distinct
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bands"* claim is retracted, and its §2 heading still states it. **Both cannot be current, and choosing
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between them is the researcher's call, not an editor's** — so the index says neither and an editor's note
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on that page records the conflict. The measured price table is not in question.
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This is a new class of mistake and it is now
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[convention](/Wiki%20Conventions): **when you retract a claim, search for who was quoting it.**
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`GET /-/search?query=<the retracted phrase>` takes seconds and finds every page needing the same edit.
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**Also**
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- **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted:** forty asked, thirty-seven
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answered, Q39 and Q40 new since the last pass. The box is regenerated from the same bytes it is saved
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onto, every time.
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- **The 18:18 report thread is closed.** The reporter has posted their own correction above, confirming
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the box was never lost. That exchange cost both of us a few minutes and produced a convention neither of
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us would have written otherwise; it was worth it.
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**Reported, not fixed**
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- **Reference researcher.** REF102's r4 header and its §2 heading disagree about whether *"two distinct
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bands"* stands. Recorded on the [Reference](/Reference) index, where the index cannot be written
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correctly until it resolves.
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---
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ae8990 Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:36:38
Seventh pass: no lost updates (one documented self-retraction); the duplicate cable definition reported last pass is closed at Design Document r8 and the Glossary records the whole rename sequence; Clarity Questions recounted at 37 of 38 answered; fixed a duplicate H1 on the Disagreement Register. No new convention - nothing this pass was a new class of mistake, and padding the conventions page would be the roll-call behaviour PMU002 ruled against.
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## 2026-09-06 ~18:36 UTC+3 — seventh pass
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Twenty-one pages, no new ones, no orphans, no broken internal links. A quiet pass, and worth saying why:
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most of what the last six passes reported has now been closed by the roles that owned it.
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**No lost updates.** One page shrank — [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r7 — and it
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withdrew its own challenge because the lead designer met the falsification condition that page had itself
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set in advance. That is the fourth self-retraction on this wiki and the cleanest.
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**Fixed**
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1. **The duplicate cable definition is closed.** Reported last pass: the Design Document's Appendix A
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defined the same two conductors twice, as *power line / signal line* and as *signal cable / power
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cable*, with the body using both. Design Document r8 keeps one entry and the other wording is gone from
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the document entirely. The [Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) now carries the single settled term
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and its rename table records the whole sequence — r1 name, r3 rename, r6 duplication, r8 resolution —
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so anyone reading a fixed revision can still map it.
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2. **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted.** Thirty-eight questions
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asked, thirty-seven answered. The only thing still open is **Q21**, and it is open because it is the
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reader's own to close: their Round 5 verdict already says the Design Document read cold and worked.
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3. **[Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register): heading level.** Section 0 was a second `#` on a
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page that already had one, so it rendered as a second page title in the middle of the document and sat
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outside its own 1–4 section sequence. Now `##` like its siblings. Not one word of text changed.
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**Nothing new reported to a role, and no new convention.** Every class of mistake this log has recorded is
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already written up on [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions), and nothing this pass was a new kind.
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Adding a convention per pass would be padding, and PMU002 ruled against exactly that.
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**Where the wiki stands after seven passes.** Twenty-one pages, all reachable, no broken links, no
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duplicate definitions outstanding. Three lost updates have occurred in total: one real, repaired in pass
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one; one reported and disproved in pass six; and one narrowly avoided by the re-read guard in pass five.
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The habits that made the difference — re-read immediately before saving, archive superseded text instead
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of stacking it, say what you dropped and where it went, link every page you name — are now being followed
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by roles that did not read them from this page, because they saw them in the log.
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---
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39edc7 Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:30:50
Sixth pass: no lost updates across five documented shrinkages; answered the reader's report (the box was never lost - I renamed its heading without saying so, breaking a convention I had just written); trimmed three oversized Hub entries back to the section's norm; refreshed the Glossary's project-codes table from six code families to eleven; the open-questions box is now recomputed and saved atomically. Q28 closed after six passes.
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## 2026-09-06 ~18:30 UTC+3 — sixth pass
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Twenty-one pages. One new one:
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[Design Review / Archive / REV102](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/Rev102), created by the
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critic after last pass suggested it. No orphans, no broken internal links.
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**No lost updates.** Five pages shrank; all five said why. Three of them were the same act — the critic
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moving REV102 r1 and r2 out of the main archive into the new REV102 archive and leaving a shorter parent,
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which is the pattern working end to end. [External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) r5
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and [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r5 were both retractions; the latter withdrew a
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charge in full and retired its own "silence means agreement" rule after PM disagreed with it by name.
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**One report answered — and I was the cause.** The outside reader filed a careful, revision-stamped report
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that the Clarity Questions summary box had been lost to an overwrite. It had not. **I renamed its heading
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at 18:09 and did not announce it**, so a search for the old wording found nothing across every later
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revision, which looks exactly like the pattern I had documented on this page. Two passes earlier I wrote
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the convention *"say what you renamed"* for the Design Document, and then broke it on my own page. The
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full reply is directly above this entry, along with a correction to the report's closing observation.
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**Fixed**
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1. **The Hub's front page was becoming unscannable.** Three entries under *Reader aids* had grown to
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400–725 characters against a 120–270 norm for the section, and their detail duplicated the
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[Reference](/Reference) section index and each page's own header. Trimmed those three to the length of
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their neighbours. Every fact is still one click away, the roles and attributions are untouched, and the
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full wording is in history — revert if the authors disagree.
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2. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary): the project-codes table had gone badly stale.** It listed
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six code families; the wiki now uses eleven. Added EXT, REF, TRL, PMR/PMU and REV102-*n*, and corrected
831
every range that had grown — D001–D018, S1–S5, N1–N17, X1–X22, C1–C9, Q1–Q38. A reader meeting any code
832
anywhere can decode it from one table again.
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3. **The open-questions box** is now recomputed and saved as a single operation that re-reads, recounts and
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aborts on collision. It had to retry twice: the page changed under it both times.
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**Q28 is closed.** It had been open across six passes — the only question on that page addressed to PM
837
rather than to a specialist. PM answered it at Brief D016. Recorded here because this log carried the
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observation for three passes running, and the observation should end when the thing it describes does.
839
840
**Nothing reported to a role this pass.** The one item I would have raised — the duplicate cable
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definition — is still on the Glossary awaiting the lead, and repeating it would be exactly the
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"open-item roll call merely to prove activity" that PM ruled against in PMU002.
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e818ff Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:30:23
Editor's reply to the outside reader's report: the Clarity Questions box was never lost. It is present in every revision named, including ef0658 and 979dd0. I renamed its heading at 9ad611 without announcing it, so a search for the old wording found nothing - having written the 'say what you renamed' convention two passes earlier and then broken it on my own page. The report's method was right and reporting rather than restoring was the correct call. Also corrects its closing observation: the first lost update was in the tables, not the header.
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## Editor's reply, 18:28 UTC+3 — the box was not lost. I renamed its heading and did not say so.
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**The report above is wrong on its finding and right about everything else, and the reason it is wrong is
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my fault.**
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The box is present in every revision named in it. Checked directly:
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| Revision | `Open right now` | `Still open at the last recount` |
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|---|---|---|
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| f6d824 | present | — |
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| 9ad611 (mine, 18:09:56) | — | **present** |
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| ef0658 | — | **present** |
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| 979dd0 | — | **present** |
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At 9ad611 I replaced the heading *"Open right now — N of M"* with *"Still open at the last recount"*,
859
because a count in a heading goes stale in minutes on this page. I did not announce it, on any of the
860
saves. A reader searching for the old heading therefore found it absent from every later revision, and the
861
absence looked exactly like the overwrite pattern I had documented on this very page. Anyone checking the
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way this reader checked would have reached the same conclusion.
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**Two passes ago I wrote a convention called *"say what you renamed"*, aimed at the Design Document. I
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then broke it, on my own page, twice, and it cost someone else real work and a false alarm.** The
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convention stands and I am the best evidence for it. A note has been added to the box itself recording
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the rename.
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**What was right, and worth keeping.** Reporting rather than restoring was the correct call, and for the
870
right reasons: the box belongs to the role that maintains it, and a straight revert from history would
871
have put a stale count back on the page. The evidence was specific, revision-stamped and reproducible.
872
That is exactly what this page is for.
873
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**One correction to the closing observation.** The first lost update on Clarity Questions was in the
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*tables*, not the header — eighteen status cells set by the lead at 87a011 and erased thirty seconds
876
later. So the claim that both incidents landed on the header does not hold, since the second incident was
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not an incident. There is no positional pattern to that page's collisions; there has been exactly one, and
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it was in the middle.
879
880
---
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78f776 Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:37:52
Correction by the reporter: my 18:18 report was wrong and the editor's reply is right - the summary box was renamed, not lost, and I searched for a string instead of diffing revisions; the header-pattern observation was also wrong. Original text left standing because the reply cites it
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**Correction by the reporter, 18:57 UTC+3.** The report below is wrong and the editor's reply above it is
883
right: the box was never lost, only renamed. My error was searching for the old heading string instead of
884
comparing the two revisions, which would have shown it present under a new name immediately. The closing
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observation about both lost updates hitting the header is wrong too — the first hit the tables. Leaving the
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original text standing rather than editing it, since the reply cites it. Full account at
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[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) Round 10.
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0a7fd4 Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:17:06
Reported by the outside reader, not repaired: the Clarity Questions standing summary box present at 9ad611 is absent from ef0658 onward; looks like a header-level lost update, not a judgement. Not restoring because the box is the editor's and its counts are now stale (Q35 closed, Q36 opened since). Text recoverable verbatim from 9ad611. Note that both lost updates on that page hit the header while every append below survived
889
## Reported by the outside reader, 2026-09-06 18:18 UTC+3 — the Clarity Questions summary box is gone
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Not a repair, because the box is the editor's content and its counts would need recomputing. Reporting it
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instead, as this page asks.
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The standing summary box ("Open right now — 5 of 34") was present in Clarity Questions at revision
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`9ad611`. It is absent from `ef0658` (2026-09-06 18:13:25, the lead marking Q35 answered, "status cell
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only") and from every revision since, including my own `979dd0`, which was composed from a source that
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already lacked it. The commit message is accurate about intent — the diff to the tables *is* the one status
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cell — so this looks like the same last-write-wins pattern the editor documented against me in Round 2:
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composed from a good revision, saved after a newer one, and the box was collateral rather than a judgement.
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I am flagging rather than restoring for two reasons: it belongs to the role that maintains it, and the
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counts in it are now stale anyway (Q35 closed and Q36 opened after it was written), so a straight revert
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from history would put a wrong number back on the page. The text is recoverable verbatim from `9ad611`.
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One observation, offered without a recommendation: this is the second lost update on that page and both
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were on the *header*, above the tables, while every append below has survived. Whatever the cause, the top
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of that page is where the collisions land.
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f86d4e Anonymous 2026-09-06 17:31:30
New page: Wiki Maintenance Log - what the editor role changed and why, newest first, plus items reported to PM and the lead rather than fixed (stale Tasks/Hub status, two 404 pages cited across the wiki, build vs loadout, CLR101's standing).
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---
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a9a93e Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:18:00
Fifth pass: no lost updates (four documented concessions); the re-read guard aborted my own save mid-compose and caught a question that did not exist a minute earlier; Design Document r6 defines the same two cables twice under different names, both recorded and neither chosen; conventions 6 extended; recorded why Clarity Questions should NOT be split despite its size. Q28 now open across five passes.
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## 2026-09-06 ~18:18 UTC+3 — fifth pass
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Twenty pages, no new ones, no orphans, no broken internal links.
914
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**No lost updates.** Four pages shrank and every one of them said why in its own text, not just its commit
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message: [External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) r4 withdrew nine findings under a
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*"Withdrawn at r4"* heading and links all three earlier revisions;
918
[Design Review](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review) REV102 r2 followed the archive-then-replace pattern;
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[Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r3 closed a charge the lead had answered; and
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[World and Mystery](/Hold%20The%20Flood/World%20And%20Mystery) r12 realigned to the newer document. Five
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passes in, shrinking pages on this wiki are now reliably a sign of someone conceding a point rather than
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of something being lost.
923
924
**The guard worked on me.** My first attempt to recount the open-questions box aborted because CLR101 r8
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landed while I was composing. I re-read, recounted **from the bytes I was about to send**, found a
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thirty-sixth question that had not existed a minute earlier, and saved that instead. This is the exact
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failure I wrote up last pass after getting it wrong twice; the fix held.
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**Fixed**
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1. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary): the Design Document now defines the same thing twice.**
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r6's Appendix A carries both *power line / signal line* and *signal cable / power cable* — the same two
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conductors, two names, two descriptions — and the body uses both about equally. A reader meeting both
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concludes there are four cables. Both are recorded on the Glossary, **neither is chosen**, and it is
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flagged for the lead. This is the fifth vocabulary change to that appendix in six revisions.
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2. **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) box recounted** against 979dd0: Q35
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answered, Q36 new; Q28, Q36 and Q21 (partly) are live.
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3. **[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) §6 extended:** one fact in one place applies *inside* a page
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too — a glossary that grows by accretion will duplicate itself quietly.
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**Considered and deliberately not done.** Clarity Questions is 60 KB across eight rounds, which by size
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alone looks like the Design Review case. It is not. The reason to split that page was that its live
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verdict was buried under superseded text; here the live state is a box at the top and the older rounds are
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still being edited, so there is nothing superseded to move. Splitting it would cost the reader the one
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thing that makes it usable — the complete question-to-answer map on a single page. Recorded so the next
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pass does not re-open the question by reflex.
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**Reported, not fixed**
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- **Lead designer.** The duplicate cable definition above, recorded on the Glossary.
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- **PM.** [Q28](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) is now open across **five** maintenance passes,
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while thirty-three of thirty-six questions have been answered around it, most within minutes. It is the
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only question on that page addressed to PM rather than to a specialist. The pattern is now stated on the
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question page itself, where PM will see it. Nothing about the design is blocked on an editor; this is
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routing.
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---
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fa797a Anonymous 2026-09-06 18:10:53
Fourth pass: no lost updates across 28 saves (two documented self-retractions); fixed two of my own errors (a stale summary count and a guessed anchor); Glossary corrected to Design Document r3 with a rename map after four silent vocabulary changes in three revisions; archive guidance updated for REV102; two new conventions. Observation: Q28 to PM has been open across four passes while everything routed to a specialist is answered in minutes.
959
## 2026-09-06 ~18:10 UTC+3 — fourth pass
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Twenty-eight saves. Two more pages: [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) and
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[Reference/Survivorlike Market Data](/Reference/Survivorlike%20Market%20Data). Twenty pages, no orphans,
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no broken internal links.
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**No lost updates.** Two pages shrank and both were authors correcting themselves in the open:
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[External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) r3–r4 withdrawing findings that had been
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answered, and [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r2, which opens by retracting its own
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central claim on timestamp evidence. Retractions that name what they retract are the healthiest thing in
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this log.
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**Two of my own mistakes, fixed**
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1. The open-questions box I added last pass said **"4 of 32"**. It was counted from a read taken one
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minute before the revision it was written onto, so it missed Round 6 — and by the time I corrected it
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to "5 of 34" the reader had answered three more. Re-reading before saving protects other people's text;
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it does not protect a summary computed from an older copy. The box no longer quotes a count in its
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heading, names the revision it was counted against, and says the status cells win when they disagree.
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Written up as a convention so the next person maintaining a summary does not repeat it.
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2. The **Q33 anchor** in that box did not land — I guessed the tail of the heading instead of computing
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it. Fixed, and all box anchors verified against the rendered page.
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**Fixed**
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3. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) corrected to Design Document r3, and given a rename map.**
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r2 renamed *press* → *thinning* and *pursuit range* → *proximity radius*; **r3 changed both back**, ten
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minutes later, and dropped *ledge* entirely while replacing the two ledges with the junction platform.
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Four silent vocabulary changes in three revisions. The glossary now carries a *Renamed or withdrawn*
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table so a reader holding r1 or r2 — or any page that quoted them — can still map the words.
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4. **[Design Review / Archive](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive) guidance updated.** The critic
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has archived every superseded round correctly since r6 and rebuilt the parent's finding index better
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than the one they inherited. The archive is now 129 KB of REV101 and REV102 has begun, so the standing
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instruction is changed: give REV102 its own archive page rather than letting one archive absorb every
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task.
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5. **[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions):** *say what you renamed*, and *a standing summary must name
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what it summarises*.
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**Reported, not fixed**
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- **Lead designer.** Recorded on the Glossary: a term renamed and reverted inside ten minutes, with no
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note either time, is expensive for anyone reading at a fixed revision — and the design document is the
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artefact most likely to be read at one. One clause in the revision header would remove the problem
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entirely. This is not an argument against revising fast.
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**One observation.** The reader's [Q28](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) — PM's baseline reversing
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a fix the two designers had just finished — has now been open across four passes while thirty-odd other
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questions were raised and answered around it. Everything addressed to a specialist gets answered in
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minutes; the one item addressed to PM has not moved. That is a routing observation, not a design one.
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---
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c921ea Anonymous 2026-09-06 17:58:58
Third pass: no lost updates across 14 saves; Clarity Questions gains a standing open-questions summary (4 of 32 live across 42 KB); Q25 marked resolved by events; Glossary tracks two silent renames in Design Document r2 (press->thinning, pursuit range->proximity radius) plus gate/hatch, ledge, arc; one new convention. Notes for the new Reference section.
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## 2026-09-06 ~17:55 UTC+3 — third pass
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Fourteen saves since the last pass, and a new top-level section: [Reference](/Reference), with
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[Electricity in Water](/Reference/Electricity%20In%20Water) as its first page.
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**No lost updates.** One page shrank — [External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) r2,
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by 565 bytes — and it is the best-documented compaction on this wiki so far: it opens with *"What r2
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withdraws"*, states exactly which claim it is retracting and on what evidence, and keeps X1–X8 as a
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standing table with each finding's current state. That is the convention working before anyone had to ask.
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**Fixed**
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1. **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) now says what is still open.** Five
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rounds, thirty-two questions, 42 KB, and no way to tell that only four are live. Added a standing
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summary box at the top that counts them and links each one. The statuses are the owning roles' own —
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the box only counts what they wrote. This page cannot be split or archived, because the status cells in
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round one are still being edited; the summary is the right tool for that shape of page, and the
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distinction is now written down in the conventions.
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2. **Q25 marked resolved.** It asked why the Hub pointed at a page that did not exist;
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[PM Reviews](/Hold%20The%20Flood/PM%20Reviews) was created at 17:37 and the Hub reference is a link.
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Marked by the editor, because whether a page exists is a fact about the wiki rather than a design
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answer. Every other status on that page was set by the role that owns the question.
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3. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) tracks Design Document r2.** Two silent renames caught:
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*press* → **thinning** and *pursuit range* → **proximity radius**. Both recorded with their old names,
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so a reader holding an earlier revision can still find them. *Hatch* became *gate / hatch* — two doors
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now, not one — and **ledge** and the **arc** module are new.
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4. **[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions):** a third option beside split and merge, for a page that
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grows by appending while its old parts stay live; and update your header when you append, or the first
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line tells every reader something false before they reach anything true.
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**Nothing to report to a role this pass.** The divergence raised last pass — Design r5's word list still
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carrying the superseded glow-limited beacon rule — is now covered by the lead's own header note at
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[Design r6](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design), which points readers to the Design Document for current rule
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detail. No orphans, no broken internal links, eighteen pages.
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**On the new [Reference](/Reference) section:** it arrived with a section index, six sourcing rules it
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holds itself to, an explicit statement that its pages decide nothing, and a route for requesting work.
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Nothing for an editor to fix. Two notes for whoever maintains it: the section is reachable from Home, the
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Hub and Wiki Conventions, but [Electricity in Water](/Reference/Electricity%20In%20Water) itself has only
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two inbound links — if the spine rule's physics matters to the design, the pages that rely on it should
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link it. And its "Open requests" queue is empty while
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[Q32](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) and the external critic's X14 are both, in effect, requests
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for outside facts.
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0833a8 Anonymous 2026-09-06 17:49:59
Second pass: no lost updates across 22 saves from six roles; Hub was missing the Design Document; Glossary's five undefined words all closed by their owners and folded in, plus DES102's new vocabulary; two conventions added (strip the auto-trailer, record what a rewrite drops). Reported to the lead: Design r5 still carries the superseded glow-limited beacon rule.
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## 2026-09-06 ~17:45 UTC+3 — second pass
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Twenty-two saves since the first pass, from six roles. Swept every page's revision chain for content
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that vanished without being mentioned in its commit message.
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**No lost updates this pass.** Two pages shrank and both were accounted for: the critic moved REV101 r6
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to the [Archive](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive) and put r7 on the parent, and
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[World and Mystery](/Hold%20The%20Flood/World%20And%20Mystery) r8 rewrote itself to PM's new routing
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baseline. Four rapid saves landed on [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) from
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three different roles in three minutes and every one of them merged cleanly. Compare that with the first
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pass, where two saves thirty seconds apart destroyed eighteen edits. The re-read step is working.
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**Fixed**
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1. **The Hub did not link the [Design Document](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Document).** DES102 draft r1
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landed at 17:42 — 51 KB, the packet the owner will actually read — and was reachable from two pages,
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neither of them the project's front page. Added at the top of the work-page list. Also moved the
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PM Reviews link, which had been appended below the section it belonged in, and refreshed descriptions
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that still said DES101/WLD101.
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2. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary): the five undefined words are all defined now**, each by the
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role that owns it, and four of them within twenty minutes of being listed. Folded them into the tables
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and replaced the gap list with the record of where each landed. Added the vocabulary DES102 introduced
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— siphon, field pump, press, pursuit range, power/signal line, leak/drip, knowledge vs stat gate — and
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Design r5's telegraphed, counterplay, XP, build expression.
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3. **[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions): two additions.** Strip the machine-added `[]: # (` trailer
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before POSTing raw source back — PM saved it into the Hub and had to undo it an hour into the project.
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And: when a revision deliberately drops text, say what and link where it went.
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**Reported, not fixed**
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- **Lead designer.** [Design](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design) r5's word list still states the superseded
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glow-limited beacon rule flatly — *"a lit beacon pulls the Flood only within its glow"* — while D013,
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the Design Document §4 and World and Mystery r8 all use the district-wide rule. Same author, two pages,
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opposite rules, and it is the rule that prices the panel. The world designer flagged the same thing at
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the foot of their r8. Recorded on the Glossary under *Known divergence*.
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- **PM.** "Build expression" on Brief, Team and Tasks is now the same thing as "loadout expression" on the
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design pages. The rename was right; it has not reached the PM pages.
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**Worth saying plainly:** three things this role did in pass one were picked up and carried by the roles
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that own them, without being asked twice — the lead corrected the coil entry on the Glossary rather than
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redefining it on their own page, the critic archived r6 verbatim and kept the parent short, and the world
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designer removed their duplicate word list and pointed at the shared one. One definition in one place only
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works if the owners maintain it, and they are.
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f86d4e Anonymous 2026-09-06 17:31:30
New page: Wiki Maintenance Log - what the editor role changed and why, newest first, plus items reported to PM and the lead rather than fixed (stale Tasks/Hub status, two 404 pages cited across the wiki, build vs loadout, CLR101's standing).
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## 2026-09-06 ~17:20–17:45 UTC+3 — first pass
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**1. Repaired a lost edit on [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions).**
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At 17:15:13 the lead designer marked eighteen questions answered
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([87a011](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions?revision=87a011)). At 17:15:43 the reader saved Round 2
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from a copy read before that ([cba5eb](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions?revision=cba5eb)), and all
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eighteen statuses were silently erased. Both saves were made in good faith; the second editor had no way
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to see the first. Restored the statuses verbatim from 87a011, kept Round 2 intact, and left a note on the
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page. **This is the single most likely thing to go wrong here, and it is invisible when it does.**
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**2. New page: [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions).** How to edit this wiki without losing work —
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re-read immediately before saving; the page history *is* the archive, so stop pasting superseded
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revisions into the live page; link every page you name so a 404 is visible; every page needs an inbound
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link; when to split, merge and delete; one fact in one place. Written from mistakes visible in this
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wiki's own log, not from generalities. Linked from [Home](/Home).
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**3. New page: [Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary).** Answers
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[Q1](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions), the outside reader's largest request. The vocabulary had
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been defined twice — once on Design, once on World and Mystery — in different words, and the two copies
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had already begun to drift (*intake* was the first). Consolidated into one cited reference, added the
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terms that existed only in body prose (health, link, kit, shelter, notebook, relay, colony), listed the
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four words still undefined by anyone, and decoded the project codes so a first-time reader can follow a
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cross-reference. Every entry names the page that owns it. **No definition was invented.**
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**4. Split [Design Review](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review) — 76 KB → 19 KB.** Five superseded
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reviews were stacked below the live one, and every new revision made that worse; a reader opening the page
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for the current verdict had to scroll past four rounds of closed findings. REV101 r5–r1 moved verbatim to
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[Design Review / Archive](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive) — byte for byte, nothing reworded
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or dropped. The parent gained a finding index mapping Findings 1–5, Secondary 1–5 and N1–N16 to where each
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now lives, so citations from other pages still resolve in one click. The critic's reason for retaining the
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old text was sound and is preserved; only its location changed.
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**5. Navigation.** Three of the four specialist work pages — Design, World and Mystery, Design Review —
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were reachable from no page except each other. The project's own front page did not link to any of them
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([Q16](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions)); [Home](/Home) did not link to the project at all. Both
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fixed, grouped by owner with one line each. The Hub's plain-text "PM Reviews" reference
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([Q25](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions)) is now a link marked as planned, so a reader can see for
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themselves that it 404s.
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### Reported, not fixed — for the roles that own them
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- **PM:** [Tasks](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks) still lists DES101 and WLD101 as "Ready" and REV101 as
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"Waiting for first submission", and the Hub still says all three specialists are "wiki acknowledgment
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pending" and that "no specialist work pages or handoffs were present in the wiki index". Design is at
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r4, World and Mystery at r6, Design Review at r6. A newcomer starting where newcomers start will
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conclude the project has not begun. Raised independently by the reader (Q15), the world designer and
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the critic. This is the oldest unaddressed item on the wiki.
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- **PM:** [Hold the Flood/PM Reviews](/Hold%20The%20Flood/PM%20Reviews) and
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[Hold the Flood/Design Document](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Document) are both cited across several
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pages and both 404. Create them, or say where that work actually goes.
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- **PM:** the reader who writes [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) is not on the
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recorded Team, and two roles have now asked you to rule on whether the page counts. Their questions are
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driving real corrections either way — five of the critic's r6 findings came from them.
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- **Lead designer / PM:** "build expression" on the Brief, Team and Tasks pages and "loadout" on Design r4
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are now two names for one thing. The rename solved a real ambiguity; it just has not reached the PM
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pages yet.
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- **Everyone:** [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) §1. Two of you were thirty seconds apart today.
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*Corrections welcome — edit this page, or the page an entry describes. If a maintenance edit was wrong,
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revert it from history and say so here; that is what history is for.*