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Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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# Hold The Horde — Player Information and Options
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**Status.** First-pass inventory of the main player cues, actions and refusals, a prose structure for the journal and manifest, and a proposed controls/options set. It is not screens, art, an implementation, a usability or conformance claim, a complete string/glyph/dialogue inventory, or an owner selection of any pending question. Every binding, default and number is a first-pass choice, not a balanced or validated one.
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7d7413 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:51:40
Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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Read live: Brief `4b0a3bcb…`, [Player Information](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Player%20Information) `34f8d4a0…` (accepted first-pass parent, not repeated here), [Survival and Loadout](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Survival%20And%20Loadout) `892afa4a…`, [Equipment Catalogue](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment%20Catalogue) `737b3cfd…`, [Combat and Enemy Roster](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20And%20Enemy%20Roster) `f1fe0d9a…`, [Save and Content State](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Save%20And%20Content%20State) `438cdf35…`, [Station Room and Module Inventory](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Station%20Room%20And%20Module%20Inventory) `d4ef2497…`, [Home and Colony Loop](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Home%20And%20Colony%20Loop) `5bff3436…`, [Two Language Discovery Map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map) `df0f48f5…`, [Story and Ending Map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map) `03c9cb8e…`, [Cast and Short Rescue Map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Cast%20And%20Short%20Rescue%20Map) `6456406b…`, [Equipment Acquisition and Rig Growth](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment%20Acquisition%20And%20Rig%20Growth) `f5f6d768…`. [Encounter and Mechanism Placement Inventory](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Encounter%20And%20Mechanism%20Placement%20Inventory) `5c1a9ad6…` is preparation-closed and is used for hosted warning and withdrawal-reset needs; its counts and placements remain team proposals, not owner selections, and nothing here treats them as chosen.
e972d0 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:41:37
Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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**Four prohibitions this layer accepts.** No unseen knowledge is made current. No alien script is translated automatically. No loot is unloaded, sold or absorbed without an explicit player transition. No cost is hidden behind an affirmative colour: any commit that spends, consumes, hands over, installs or puts an object out of reach for this trip states that in words on the preview itself, at the same weight as the confirming control.
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## Cue priority and coexistence
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Six bands, highest first. **Bands 1–4 may all be live at once and must never suppress, dim or overdraw one another**; they are separated by fixed position on the display, not by colour and not by taking turns.
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1. **Body in jeopardy** — suit tank reaching the fixed or player-set reserve mark; condition near death. Anchored, never suppressed by anything.
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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2. **Commitment at an observed condition** — a staged action, oxygen coupling or survivor transfer that is live while one of three named facts is true: the astronaut is displaced out of reach of the control, a creature is within reach of that control, or the coupling has been broken. These are observations, not a forecast that failure is imminent.
e972d0 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:41:37
Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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3. **A locked threat with a direction** — a wind-up already committed at the astronaut: Boltspitter's final rail click, Clampcrawler's jaw-flash lock, Bellback's planted cone, a Caller's completing brace.
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4. **What the player acts with** — ordinary readiness and its selected valid target; manual special availability and facing.
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5. **Refusals** — shown at the moment of the attempt, never deferred and never silent.
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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6. **Persistent facts** — carried/installed labels, join state, roster counts, evidence provenance. Available on inspection or in the journal rather than continuously. **Bands 1 and 4 never fall into this band and are never suppressible by any option:** tank level, the reserve mark, condition and actuator readiness are always present.
e972d0 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:41:37
Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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**One cue in each band carries the direction marker.** When two band-3 threats are locked at once, both keep their own body cue, but only the nearer committed one takes the single peripheral direction marker; the other is still shown at its source. This is a deliberate choice against drawing two competing arrows, and it is the thing most likely to be wrong in play.
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7d7413 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:51:40
Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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**The clutter cut.** During world time the field display does **not** carry the rig diagram — ports, links and the explanation of which branch a packet reached. **Every actuator's own readiness and selected target stay visible**, because readiness is band 4 and is never suppressed. Also kept: the manual special's facing, and storage saturation as a state change rather than a running meter. The full diagram is one input away in the paused journal. **Sacrificed:** the branch explanation — why a part that was ready still did nothing this wave. **Kept:** every individual part state needed to act, and the evidence to work the rest out afterwards.
e972d0 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:41:37
Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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## The main cue and action inventory
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7d7413 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:51:40
Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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Forty-one states in nine bands. "Non-colour" and "non-audio" name the form that must carry the same information when colour or sound is unavailable.
e972d0 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:41:37
Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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7d7413 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:51:40
Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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### Body and supply — 6
e972d0 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:41:37
Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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| State | Where sensed, provenance | Non-colour / non-audio form | Action, and the refusal |
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| Suit tank level | Worn instrument, direct reading | Filled bar with numeric level and a labelled fixed or player-set reserve notch | None; it is a reading |
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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| Reserve level reached | Worn instrument, from the level alone. **A fixed or player-set reserve mark, labelled as such — never a calculated cost of getting home** | Notch reached plus a persistent text state naming it a reserve; no colour change alone | None forced; nothing auto-returns. It cannot be shown as a route estimate |
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| Tether attached, with its radius | The Glass Siphon's own visible tether; ordinary drain is separately shown | Tether drawn to its source with its radius; the raised drain shown as a second, separately labelled rate | Break the tether by leaving the radius or ending it; breaking stops only the extra drain and refunds nothing |
e972d0 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:41:37
Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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| Selected canister and fill | Manifest and coupling control; four states — ordinary-full, prepared-full, partial, empty | Four distinct labelled fills, not one gradient; prepared-full marked as its own state | Couple/decouple; coupling is world time. Uncoupled while out of reach |
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| Coupling transfer in progress | The act itself, in world time | Incremental progress with amount already moved | Cancel keeps what transferred; damage alone does not cancel |
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| Condition and displacement | Direct, on being hit | Condition step plus a distinct displacement mark | None; displacement can lose an unfinished stage |
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### Equipment, capacity and rig — 6
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| State | Where sensed, provenance | Non-colour / non-audio form | Action, and the refusal |
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| Carrying capacity used/free | Manifest; one shared total | Two numerals, used and free, never merged with area | Pickup, retrieval or departure over capacity **refuses before commitment**, item left visibly where it was |
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| Active rig area used/free | Manifest; separate figure | Occupied spaces shown as spaces, not a percentage | Install refuses on full area; moving a part to inactive cargo frees area, not capacity |
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| Carried vs installed vs dropped | Manifest sections; installed and dropped entries name their place | Section membership plus explicit "installed at / dropped at", no icon-only distinction | Reclaim by walking there; reclaim refuses on capacity, leaving it installed |
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| Ordinary readiness and selected target | Per actuator, direct | Readiness as a discrete filled state; the selected target carries an outline marker, not a tint | Reposition to change the candidate. **No valid target holds fire, and shows no marker** |
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| Manual special availability and facing | Per control, direct | Availability state plus a facing wedge drawn from the astronaut | Activate. A release with no acceptable receiver refuses **before** starting a wave or spending stored charge |
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| Stored charge and saturation | Per storage part; detail on inspection | Saturation announced as a state change with text; running level in the journal | Configure the release trigger; manual release starts a new wave, rig-triggered release keeps the incoming wave |
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### Paid rewire and controller eligibility — 3
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| State | Where sensed, provenance | Non-colour / non-audio form | Action, and the refusal |
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| Field edit in progress | The act, in world time | Stage shown; the journal cannot finish it | Cancel commits nothing; the last completed arrangement stands |
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| Direct-link validity | Preview between two accessible ports | Valid shows a directed connector with an arrowhead; invalid refuses with the reason named in words | Commit or abandon; an invalid link costs nothing |
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| Controller eligibility | Inspection of the source and its downstream actuators | Text naming which ready actuator currently gates the event | None directly. A blocked branch neither buffers nor creates a second event, and this is stated where it is inspected |
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### Work, commitment and withdrawal — 4
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| State | Where sensed, provenance | Non-colour / non-audio form | Action, and the refusal |
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| Work stage and completed checkpoints | The mechanism, direct | Discrete completed marks, each one a separate mark | Continue, cancel, leave. Cancel loses only the unfinished stage |
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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| Commit preview with its actual spend | Before any consuming commit | The spend written in words beside the control, same weight as the confirm | Confirm or decline. Protected objectives refuse selection outright. **It states the spend only** — it never predicts which downstream parts will accept, since that would evaluate an assembled rig |
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Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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| Interruption | Cancel, displacement out of reach, occupied control | Names which of the three occurred, and what was preserved | Re-approach; damage alone never cancels |
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| Withdrawal boundary and reset | Crossing a named physical host face | The face itself is the boundary; re-entry begins from the shown neutral warning | Cross to reset a temporary phase; completed work is never reset |
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### Threat — 3
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| State | Where sensed, provenance | Non-colour / non-audio form | Action, and the refusal |
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| Hostile present, aware or unaware | Sight, facing, movement | Posture and facing; awareness as a distinct silhouette state | Move, look, avoid. Looking and journal use raise no alarm |
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| Locked wind-up aimed at the astronaut | The creature's own visible tell | The tell itself plus a peripheral edge marker at its bearing | Break line, place the barrier, displace, accept the hit |
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| Alarm source, Caller brace, answering entrance | Source lights/motion; the entrance itself | Source mark plus a bearing marker for the entrance that will answer | Stop the source or the brace; a completed call moves only existing adjacent groups |
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7d7413 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:51:40
Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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### Place and evidence — 7
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| State | Where sensed, provenance | Non-colour / non-audio form | Action, and the refusal |
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| Current room and observed entrance | Direct, from where the astronaut stands | Named room plus the entrances actually seen | Walk through. Nothing lists an unobserved neighbour |
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| Reverse breadcrumb this life | Passages actually traversed | A back-trail to the last anchor, marked "traversed this life" | Follow it; it promises no present safety and no oxygen cost |
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| Historical route or adjacency | An earlier life's record, dated by arrangement | Marked historical in words and drawn in a different line weight | Read and plan; it never re-labels itself current |
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| Unknown route | Nothing | Nothing drawn; absence is the honest answer | Go and look |
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| Capture in progress | The framing act itself, in world time | The frame drawn plus discrete commit progress | Cancel yields no record; nothing is partially filed |
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| Committed record and provenance | The capture; the record thereafter | Place, arrangement/life, source kind and factual limit on the record | Capture is world time and atomic — interrupted before commit yields nothing |
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| Instrument report: ship pressure bearing, receiver value | **Read live at the ship console aboard.** A committed field copy is a recorded reading stamped with observation time and arrangement/life, not a live update. Its bearing is from the collar anchor, never a direction recalculated from the astronaut's current position | An anchor-labelled bearing arrow, drawn unlike a route line; a labelled receiver-value snapshot. Both say recorded rather than live while away from the console | Use it as evidence and recheck at the console. Unchanged geometry does not prove that a pressure source or receiver value remains unchanged. It gives no distance, path, safety, current field telemetry or distinction between sensor failure and a quiet ward |
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Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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### Station joining — 5
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| State | Where sensed, provenance | Non-colour / non-audio form | Action, and the refusal |
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| Face signature family A / B / R | Inspection of the face | The count is the form: one, two or three repeated marks, in three distinct outline shapes. Amber/blue/red are decoration on top | Attempt a join where a face is currently adjacent |
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| Flow direction, and transform faces | The face; a local test pulse | Arrowheads into or out of the face; a transform face shows both its named sides | Run the local test; it reports present behaviour only |
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| Join attempt result | The latch preview at the seam | Refusal draws the actual reason — for two outputs, two arrowheads meeting head to head | A mismatch refuses, spends no pulse, changes no existing join |
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| Walking / latched / diagnostic | Three separate readings at the same place | Three separately labelled states, never one combined indicator | Walk, latch, release, re-power. Losing diagnostic power never un-latches |
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| Roster counts | The gallery display, an instrument report | Three numerals: joined, discovered-unjoined, anonymous | None. It names no room, face, route or location |
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### People and home — 5
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| State | Where sensed, provenance | Non-colour / non-audio form | Action, and the refusal |
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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| Rescue state | The witnessed physical fact behind it | One of five words from the shared rescue contract — waiting, prepared, in transfer, **at abort refuge**, Sent — with that fact named | Prepare, signal, hold, abort. **Either party may abort, and the display names who did** |
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| Confirmation provenance | Whether the astronaut saw it or the survivor reported it | Stated on the state itself; a survivor's flow confirmation stays theirs | None; it is never promoted to direct observation |
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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| Unconfirmed outcome | Death during transfer | Last confirmed state kept, present location and outcome marked unconfirmed in words | Nothing asserted. Delivery, refuge, loss and safety are all withheld. **Conditional hook only:** if a later continuity rule defines a receipt or a current-room alignment on death, this row gains that reading with its provenance; none is adopted here |
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Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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| Home project state | The fixture aboard | Four labelled states: unavailable, setup incomplete, commissioned, person not participating now | Inspect, commission in world time, postpone. Postponing costs nothing |
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| Participant readiness | The person's own visible signal | Their signal, plus a subtitle when it is speech | The astronaut acts after it; nothing begins on their behalf |
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| State | Where sensed, provenance | Non-colour / non-audio form | Action, and the refusal |
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| Isolation coupling: live or isolated | The coupling's own tell, at the room | Tell present or dark, stated in words; historical story records stay dated and separate | Re-seat, leave, postpone — world-time work. No remote "safe" verdict appears |
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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| Departure readiness, pending owner choice | Ship functions actually installed | A list of actual functions, not a progress bar | Inspect. If the departure package is adopted, undocking carries an explicit preview of the **in-world** irreversibility — leaving the field ends revival and closes station exploration in this continuity. Whether the player may save or continue beforehand is a separate unanswered save-policy question, and the preview must not imply it is settled |
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Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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## The journal and the manifest, in prose
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**The pause.** Opening the journal freezes every world-time process — enemies, oxygen, readiness, projectiles, mechanisms, warnings and work stages — and completes none of them. Note editing is available there because it changes no world state. Capture, rig edits, oxygen transfer and any payload change stay in world time and cannot be finished from a paused page. **Whether any other screen pauses is a proposal here, not an owner requirement:** the proposed default is that the manifest pauses aboard and does not pause in the station, and that the options screen pauses everywhere. **Tradeoff:** the proposed options pause gives another way to stop encounter pressure while choosing settings. It allows controls to be changed without enemies advancing during configuration. The already selected journal pause remains unchanged. That default needs owner reaction.
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Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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**Journal sections — five.** *Records* holds committed captures, each carrying its place, its arrangement and life, its source kind and its factual limit. *Comparison* pins records side by side for zoom and hand-highlighting; every link says player-linked, and an on-request lookalike suggestion is labelled software-generated. *Notes* is freeform, revision-preserving and never parsed, graded or scored. *Testimony* holds attributed statements with speaker, stated basis and what is that person's interpretation. *Places* lists rooms actually entered, and for each: what was completed there, what is installed there, which joins are known, and the routes recorded to and from it — every route stamped with its arrangement.
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*Places* is a list, not a map. It has no spatial layout, because a layout would draw geography the astronaut has not walked.
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**Navigation and the working flow.** One list, one detail, and every entry reachable from the place it concerns and back again. The flow is capture → note → comparison → revisit: the player commits a still in world time, annotates it in the pause, pins it against another record, and later returns and captures a **new** state beside the old one. A revisit never overwrites an earlier record; the earlier one becomes historical evidence rather than a corrected fact.
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**Live versus stored.** Worn tank, condition and capacity instruments keep sensing while worn. The breadcrumb records personally traversed passages this life; it is not a fresh reading of their safety. Ship and other fixed instruments — a pressure receiver, face test pulse, gallery roster or coupling tell — show a live value only while inspected there. A committed copy, including a ship-anchored bearing carried into the field, remains a time-stamped record in the stored band and never refreshes itself. Walking away ends the fixed instrument's live view; unchanged arrangement alone cannot keep its signal or value current. Recording is still a world-time action.
e972d0 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:41:37
Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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**Provenance and the player's own hand.** Every item says which of four things it is — direct observation, the player's own record, attributed testimony, or an instrument/software report — and carries that source's known limit. The player's annotation is visibly theirs and is never mixed into the evidence it sits beside.
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7d7413 Anonymous 2026-09-09 10:51:40
Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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**The manifest — four sections.** *Worn* sits outside both figures: tank, navigation, journal, cutter. *Active rig* charges each part its own stated cost once — one carrying unit and one rig space for the opening parts, two and two for Arc Emitter, Salvage Cycler and Vector Nozzle. *Inactive cargo* charges carrying capacity only. *Elsewhere* lists what is installed at a named place, dropped at a recorded place, or seated in a home project — **and shows no capacity at all, because it is not carried.** Each entry names what it is, where it came from, and what it costs of each figure. Used and free are shown for capacity and for area separately, never merged into one number.
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Outcome 34: 38-state main cue/action/refusal inventory with provenance and non-colour/non-audio forms, cue priority and one clutter cut, journal and manifest structure in prose, proposed controls/options/defaults, four paper walkthroughs
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**Refusal and commit preview.** Capacity or area overflow refuses before commitment and leaves the object visibly where it was; nothing is ever silently dropped or absorbed. Unloading is always an explicit one-instance transition the player performs. A commit that consumes, hands over, installs or puts something out of reach names that consequence in words on the preview.
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## Proposed controls, options and defaults
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Proposals. Bindings and values are first-pass choices, not balanced or validated, and nothing here is an accessibility certification.
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| Option | Proposed default | Information and action rule it preserves | Presentation cost accepted | Owner reaction |
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| Full remap; no required three-input combination | On | Every action stays reachable, so no cue is informative but unusable | More states to keep legible per control path | No |
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| Hold or toggle for staged work and oxygen coupling | Hold | Same stages, same interruption rules either way | Toggle weakens the felt tension of holding under pressure | No |
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| Text scale and contrast | Medium scale, high contrast available | No essential fact exists only as a small painted in-world label | Larger text crowds a compact suit display | No |
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| Colour-independent A/B/R and flow forms | On, always | Family is carried by mark count and outline shape; direction by arrowheads | Busier faces; every new signature must be authored with a form | No |
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| Subtitles for speech and named non-speech sounds | On | Survivor speech and warnings remain readable as attributed statements | Text volume during an encounter | No |
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| Directional markers for essential audio | On | A locked wind-up and an answering entrance keep their bearing | Risks giving more spatial certainty than the sound does; tuned to match, not exceed | **Yes** |
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| Flash, shake and effects intensity | Medium | The underlying state cues are unchanged at any setting | A damped build reads as less spectacular | **Yes** |
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| Horde visual density damping | Off | Enemy count, behaviour and difficulty are untouched | Plausibly reduces the build payoff for players who need it | **Yes** |
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| Target marker emphasis | Persistent outline | The selected-target marker remains visible in band 4 at every setting; optional detail can be shown on inspection | Stronger emphasis adds clutter in a crowd | No |
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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| Field display density (the clutter cut) | Reduced | Bands 1–5 always present, readiness included; only the branch explanation moves to the pause | At reduced density the reason a ready part did nothing is diagnosed after, not during | **Yes** |
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**1. The Fork, installed or carried, at the noisy stage.** On arriving at Cargo Turn, four opening parts plus one canister use 6 of 10 carrying units and all 4 rig spaces. Picking up the loose Fork raises carrying use to 7; installing that same carried Fork moves it to *Elsewhere* and returns use to 6, with rig area still 4. Keeping it packed uses 7. On installation, the board's own source supplies the power, and the Fork passes that one board pulse to both compatible outputs so the rack and the patient-bay shutter hold together. Keeping it packed leaves the lane open. At the final fastener four things go live at once: the stage's completed marks, the Caller's brace, a Presser's locked strike, and the tank reaching its labelled reserve notch. **The priority decision:** the reserve notch takes its anchored position and does not flash over anything; the locked strike takes the single direction marker because it alone has a bearing; the brace stays visible at its source without a second arrow. Nothing is suppressed and nothing is merged. Barrier's own readiness is visible throughout, at reduced density as at full. What reduced density withholds is why a ready Barrier still did nothing on a given wave — the branch explanation — and that is one pause away. This four-cue case needs no new creature: the Caller and Pressers are the placement's existing population.
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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**2. A spend, then a refusal downstream.** The player selects conductive scrap for the Cycler, which is linked through Fork to Arc Emitter and Capacitor. The commit preview states one thing in words: *this consumes the selected scrap permanently.* It does **not** say which branches will accept, because that would be predicting an assembled rig's outcome, which the parent forbids. What the player has instead is individually observed: Arc Emitter shows its own readiness on itself, Capacitor shows its own saturation, and the links were validated one at a time when drawn. Reading them is the player's work, and the reduced-density display keeps exactly those readings.
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The confirm control is not coloured to suggest approval. On confirmation the scrap is spent and each receiver checks locally as the wave arrives: Arc refuses because it is not ready, Capacitor accepts. **Acceptance and refusal are shown on resolution, at each part, not forecast beforehand** — and a later refusal rewinds nothing and refunds no consumed material. The failure is legible as *that receiver refused*, not as salvage vanishing, because the spend was named before commitment and the refusal is attributed to the part that made it.
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**3. An old route, and a transformer that refuses.** After a death the arrangement advances. In *Places*, the route captured in the previous arrangement is drawn in historical weight and says so; the roster reports joined, discovered-unjoined and anonymous counts and names nothing. The player walks to a seam where two faces are now adjacent, and the latch preview draws two arrowheads meeting head to head: both are outputs. No pulse is spent and no existing join changes. Inspecting the reversible gallery shows its current mode and its two named sides as a **present** local reading, in the live band, which cannot be filed as evidence without a capture. The player may change the mode; walking joins are untouched, which the three separate readings state plainly.
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**4. A crossing that ends unconfirmed, and a bench that is not ready.** The rescue reads *prepared* — travel air confirmed **by the survivor**, abort place stocked, route walked this life — and the display keeps that "by the survivor" attached. The door opens: *in transfer*. The astronaut dies mid-crossing. The display holds the last confirmed state and marks present location and outcome **unconfirmed**; it asserts no abort, no delivery, no loss and no reunion, because the ordering rule that would decide it is unresolved. Aboard, the packing bench shows *setup incomplete*: one contribution is complete and the other is not, so no prepared-full canister exists and none appears in the manifest. Postponing costs nothing and no state changes because time passed.
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**Counts after this revision.** 41 inventoried states in 9 bands (6 body/supply, 6 equipment/capacity/rig, 3 rewire/eligibility, 4 work/commitment/withdrawal, 3 threat, 7 place/evidence, 5 station joining, 5 people/home, 2 story/late); 5 journal sections; 4 manifest sections; 10 proposed options; 4 walkthroughs; 6 cue-priority bands. Three states were added — the tether and its radius, capture-in-progress, and the ship instrument report.
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**Checked.** No cue is shaped like a conclusion: the reserve mark is a level, not a route cost, and band 2 fires on named observations rather than on a forecast. No preview evaluates an assembled rig; acceptance and refusal are shown at each part on resolution. Conservation: no cue implies one object in two places, *Elsewhere* shows no capacity, and each part is charged its own stated cost once. Pause: nothing reachable in the journal completes a world-time process. Provenance: every state names its source and limit, and survivor confirmation is never promoted to direct observation. Actions: every row's action exists in a named source article rather than being invented here. Accessibility: every band 1–5 state has a stated non-colour and non-audio form.
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**Strongest case.** The player can act under pressure from bands 1–4 without opening anything, and can reconstruct *why* afterwards from provenance that was never merged away. **Its cost:** a busy display with a hand-authored priority ladder, and a real risk that four simultaneous cues is three too many.
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**One credible simpler alternative.** A single context line: show only the most relevant action and one state, chosen by context. It is far cheaper, has no ladder to author, and is calmer to read. Its cost is exactly the moment this design exists for — the return margin and a locked strike cannot co-present, so the player cannot weigh a survival cost against a threat while acting, and provenance collapses into a prompt. Worth adopting if the ladder proves unreadable, and I would want that observed rather than argued.
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**Gaps, left open rather than invented.** Target override or reselection is unchosen. General menu pause is proposed only. Rescue-versus-shift ordering, survivor loss, save policy, the final joining mechanism and whole-station completion behaviour remain owner or design decisions; hosted warning and reset needs use preparation-closed Encounter33, with its design proposals still distinct from owner selections. Specific mapping deltas belong to the global-04 and placement alignments. A complete cast dialogue, glyph, string and full state-transition inventory is later work, not this article.
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Author response to review 502 / PM 504: reserve level not route cost, observed commitment triggers, ship instrument and tether and capture-progress states added, At abort refuge vocabulary, worn instruments always live, per-item C/A costs, preview states spend without predicting propagation, Fork passes the board pulse, options-pause cost, scope split
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**Scope note — what this delivers and what remains.** This is the parent inventory's **first component**: the finite state list with provenance, non-colour and non-audio forms and refusals, plus the journal/manifest structure and the option set with defaults. It is **not** a new envelope and no hours are subtracted on the strength of it, because a first-pass list is not the exhaustive one the estimate covers. What remains inside that 35–59 role-hours: a cue-by-cue form specification for every authored creature, mechanism, face and fixture rather than the 41 representative states here; the per-screen structure below section level; option interactions with each other; and the failure-message wording. Those must be deduplicated against survival cue work rather than added to it. No implementation, prototype, simulation, playtest, asset, framework or platform decision is proposed or performed here, and nothing above establishes that any of it is legible, usable or enjoyable.