| **Campaign — DES104 r3** | 6e4b59 | 19:18 | Diffed against b92234 in full; the three written expeditions' changed beats re-tallied; the three new panel tables and the bargeman's rewritten plan checked against the contract |

The lead's two revisions close most of what r2 asked, and close it with the method this role uses: the Tidal Barrier's harvest is now collected where it falls, inside the stun, and the ledger's fade column is right (REV104-6 closed); pursuit range has a value and a landmark per district, every first battery is earned at a crowd's edge and priced in hits, and collection is walking over a mote where it fell (REV104-8 closed, one residual clause on the Floater); each new district tables its panel — position, powered branch, intake, flashing beacon — and the tram's lamp is a lure that never flashes (REV104-9 closed in form, two cells wrong); both precedence sentences are corrected (REV104-10 closed); lines conduct when dry and loose cargo does not, the leak rate and the pickup rule are in the contract (the r2 notes closed); the owner page and §10 read Stop, Keep or Leave (PMR006 5 closed); the contract carries PMR006 1–4 as rules, with Combat's table and Colony's mirror pending. All three ledgers still close on eight cells under the priority rule.

What remains, at 29f5b0 and 6e4b59: the contract's §9 now states in its own words that "Stop is the empty flash everywhere, for good", while its §3 makes a flash need the trunk's time and its own table lists Stop under what changes trunk permission, and World r22 says the brake leaves "no district… permitted" — REV104-12 is now a contradiction inside the contract as well as between accepted pages; the cable reel is still two items under one name (REV104-11, unchanged text); the Campaign's Heavy row and beat still carry the wording the contract itself has now dropped (REV104-13, half closed); the bargeman's rewritten plan holds a crowd with a lure that the contract's own §5 drains in one hundred seconds, against a climb the lockkeeper's beats price at four minutes (REV104-14, new); the Lock Flight's Weir intake is placed at a dock, which the frame makes a hard stop, and the Tram's forecast at 0:00 shows an intake its Off row says does not exist (two cells); the Floater needs one clause for the scene that now depends on it. None is a rule change; two are decisions the contract must make in one sentence each.

| Item | At 6e4b59 / 29f5b0 | Status |

| **REV104-6** — the Tidal Barrier's harvest | §3.3, 3:30: "The surveyor wades out in insulation, shin-deep, thirty seconds to the crowd's edge at the flats beacon, and works the edge with the cutter inside pursuit range: ten walkers, ten kills, ten motes walked over as they fall; two hits taken." 4:30: "Standing at the crowd's edge in insulation the surveyor discharges: the fifty organisms in the water are stunned for eight seconds; five large motes fall among them, twenty-five units; the surveyor walks over the two nearest during the stun, ten units into the battery the discharge just emptied, and the other three fade where they fell." Ledger: "15, fade"; totals "fifteen lost to fade where they fell and ten at the dock" | **Closed.** Ledger re-tallied: dropped 35, collected 20, spent 10, lost 15 fade + 10 dock ✓. One residual, below |

- **Where:** §3: "A district dispatches when its drum's contact closes and the trunk is carrying time… either alone stops announced surges." §9, the table: trunk permission is changed by "the governor's Stop, Keep or Leave". §9, the paragraph: "The drums keep turning on flow, so timing survives Stop; supply does not… Stop is the empty flash everywhere, for good." World r22's table, which the contract says "carries the same table with the fiction": trunk permission after Stop, "Gone everywhere: the brake stops the shaft; no district is permitted"; local timing, "without permission they make no pulse". The Head-works r4 §4 has the contract's paragraph; its r3 had World's.

Unchanged text at both revisions; as in r3. Contract §1 has "a laid conductor between two wet points across dry ground"; the owner §10 names, Equipment, has U6: "clamp one end to an exposed **power** terminal… at most six metres… a second power terminal", and asks that the two not be "integrated… under one name"; Combat and Enemies have already corrected to U6. Campaign §3.4's dry hall conducts "by the cable reel" and has no wet points. **Minimal change:** clause 1 adopts U6's sentence; §3.4 names the Exchange's terminals in one line.

- **Where:** §3.1, the two loadouts: "the bargeman has already planted the portable beacon, armed and lit, on the Tail's far bank… then the bargeman throws the panel to Weir from the dock. The quay beacon dies, the crowd retargets to… the lure… and crosses to the far bank and holds there; the direct road is clear and the door at the top is live. The price is the beacon and its battery, draining a unit every ten seconds and left on a bank the crowd now stands on, and the second dispatch, which under Weir enters at the weir dock beyond the house, so the bargeman must be out and down before it." Contract §5: the portable beacon "drains a unit every ten seconds while lit"; U3: "a full battery gives at most one hundred lit seconds… At empty it darkens". The lockkeeper's beats, same district: foot of the stairs at 4:00, lock house at 5:00, out at 7:00, quay at 8:10 — the round trip from the Tail to the house and back is about four minutes.

The contract r4 restores the number ("the Heavy's hit count stays a number"); the Campaign's diff row still reads "cannot be cleared by the cutter in useful time… (Combat's wording)" — a wording Combat r4 and Enemies r5 have withdrawn — and the 3:30 beat reads "kills it in the seconds the cutter needs". The beat's cost ("the stop cost the lead", the crowd "twenty metres behind") needs the number: ten hits, about five seconds. One row, one clause.

- §3.1, Weir, intake selected: "The weir dock, at the far end of the weir road beyond the house." Contract §6: "docks are hard stops for the Flood"; §3.1's own consequences make the weir dock the one the colony may later hold ("refitting the held dock there reverses which end of the flight is hot"). A surge cannot enter at a dock, held or not; the intake is beside the weir beacon.

"the ten walkers come out one and two at a time… the floaters stay in the water, held by the beacon." Under R1 pursuit outranks everything but the stun, and the Floater's own line applies only "while water flows"; a floater within ten metres of a surveyor at the foot of the stairs chases like any body unless a rule keeps it in water. The Floater's definition is "attributed on the Campaign page until transferred" (§7) and there is no Floater page (404); the Campaign's diff says only "carried by flowing water, unable to climb locks or ladders". One clause — "a floater does not leave water" — makes the beat true and is consistent with 8:10's survivors walking back through the Tail. **Also,** §3.3 between 3:30 and 4:30: the surveyor stands at the crowd's edge, inside pursuit range, for a minute after the tenth kill; say where they stand (a step back out of range, then in again at 4:30 — the whole flats are one body, so the discharge does not need the edge).

- Contract §9 "the harvest that drives its gates" → *lift* (Collector r4 §2); World r22 the same.

The lead's r3 is the method applied to its own scenes: each first battery is now a beat with a place, a range and a cost; the harvest is where the motes are; the panels are tabled the way the pumping district's was; the dark-beacon flash is a clean rule that makes the Tram's Rail row consistent with clause 3; the presentation list in §7 counts what each element costs rather than how many names there are, and puts authored art to the owner as the Brief requires. The contract r4's persistence rule (§6) and intensity rule (§4) are the two clauses the specialists most needed and both are stated once. Three ledgers close.

The ten-metre range, which every scene now leans on (the contract says so); the cascade's cadence; whether a hundred lit seconds is the right price for a lure; the presentation count against the Reference audit.

Superseded reviews: [REV104 r3](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/REV104#rev104-r3-retained-verbatim-superseded-by-rev104-r4) · [r2](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/REV104#rev104-r2-retained-verbatim-superseded-by-rev104-r3) · [r1](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/REV104#rev104-r1-retained-verbatim-superseded-by-rev104-r2) · [REV103 r5](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/REV103#rev103-r5-retained-verbatim-superseded-by-rev104-r1) and earlier on the REV103 archive · [REV102 r6](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/REV102#rev102-r6-retained-verbatim-superseded-by-rev103-r1) and earlier on the REV102 archive · [REV101 r8](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive#rev101-r8-retained-verbatim-superseded-by-rev102-r1) and earlier on the REV101 archive.

| Finding | Raised in | Status at 6e4b59 / 29f5b0 |

| REV101 Findings 1–5, Secondary 1–5, N1–N17; REV102-1 to -13; REV103-1 to -9 | REV101–REV103 | Resolved, closed, or delivered |