2026-09-09 18:53:39
Anonymous:
Record both proposal submissions and active review; link the new reading path
hold the flood/progress.md ..
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# Hold The Horde — Progress
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**Work resumed on 9 September 2026. Updated 18:45 Jerusalem.** The team is correcting the game direction following the owner's review. Automatic PM checks are active.
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**Work resumed on 9 September 2026. Updated 18:53 Jerusalem.** The team is correcting the game direction following the owner's review. Automatic PM checks are active.
The next owner delivery is a revised pitch, an expedition with convincing horde pressure and discovery, and three spectacular build examples. It must address all three blockers: survivorslike scale and urgency, human-readable explanations, and concrete reasons for fun, challenge and emotional payoff.
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| Task | Owner | Status | Target, Jerusalem |
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| 41 — Hordes and three builds | Systems | Working; receipt confirmed | Today 19:15; range 18:55–19:45 |
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| 42 — Revised pitch and expedition | Design Lead | Submitted at 18:40; PM read, corrections needed | First draft delivered early; response follows combined review |
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| 43 — Independent review | Reviewer | Criteria saved; ready to review both drafts | Combined critique 20:15, range 19:40–20:45; 45–75 minutes after both submissions |
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| 41 — [Hordes and three builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) | Systems | Submitted at 18:48; PM read | In combined review |
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| 42 — [Revised pitch and expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game) | Design Lead | Submitted at 18:40; PM read, corrections needed | First draft delivered early; response follows combined review |
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| 43 — Independent review | Reviewer | Reviewing both drafts; start confirmed at 18:52 | Today 19:50; range 19:35–20:10 |
| 39–40 — Earlier mechanism/discovery details | Systems / Lead | Parked, unaccepted drafts | Reassess after the new direction |
| Clear wiki navigation and current reports | PM | In progress; reading map prepared | Alongside the corrected proposal |
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**43 tracked design outcomes: 37 preparation-closed, 1 reopened readiness outcome, 2 parked drafts, 3 assigned correction outcomes.** All three roles have confirmed receipt: Systems is drafting; Lead has submitted and stopped; the Reviewer has saved independent criteria and awaits both submissions. These counts describe writing and review outcomes, not the percentage of the game complete. The temporary wiki assistant's reading map is PM support, not another design outcome or permanent role.
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**43 tracked design outcomes: 37 preparation-closed, 1 reopened readiness outcome, 2 parked drafts, 3 assigned correction outcomes.** All three roles have confirmed receipt: Both authors have submitted and stopped; the Reviewer is examining the two drafts against independently saved criteria. Both proposals remain unaccepted. These counts describe writing and review outcomes, not the percentage of the game complete. The temporary wiki assistant's reading map is PM support, not another design outcome or permanent role.
## Forecast
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| Rewrite the main reading path | Structure | Begin after direction | Revise / integrate | |
**What changed:** the earlier 9 September readiness declaration was withdrawn after the owner's three critical objections. The old 10 November detailed-design target has moved to a provisional 17 November and its range widened to allow for mechanical and content rework. This extra allowance is a planning judgment, not measured remaining effort. Previous forecasts remain in page history and the PM forecast checkpoint.
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**What changed:** the earlier 9 September readiness declaration was withdrawn after the owner's three critical objections. Both first drafts arrived ahead of the 19:15 target; the review target has moved from20:15 to19:50. The old 10 November detailed-design target has moved to a provisional 17 November and its range widened to allow for mechanical and content rework. This extra allowance is a planning judgment, not measured remaining effort. Previous forecasts remain in page history and the PM forecast checkpoint.
Read the [Design Plan](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Plan) for the correction's acceptance criteria and [Design Coverage](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Coverage) for the affected areas. [Design readiness](/Hold%20The%20Flood/V1%20Readiness) remains open. The five earlier unanswered owner choices remain unresolved; they do not prevent this correction work.
