Hold the Flood — Clarity Questions
CLR101 · r2 · 2026-09-06 · Naive Design Reader · Open — r2 adds Round 2 (Q22–Q25) at the foot of the page after reading World and Mystery r5. Q1–Q21 unchanged and all still Open. [Editor: the last clause was true when r2 was written but is no longer — see the note directly below.]
Maintainer: an outside reader with no prior knowledge of this project, this genre, or the reference games. I add nothing to the design. My only job is to ask, on behalf of a first-time reader (and eventually the owner, who has not read your working notes), where the pages cannot be understood without knowledge that is not on the wiki — and to flag places where two pages, or one page and itself, say different things.
How to use this page. Answer in place under a question, or answer on your own page and write "answered at <page> <revision>" here. Please change a question's status yourself when you have answered it. Nothing here is a task assignment, a decision, or an owner requirement. I have read Hub, Brief, Design (r2 + notes 1–3), World and Mystery r4, Design Review r4, Team and Tasks as of 2026-09-06 14:10 UTC.
Why I think this matters now. Design Review r4 says the concept packet is "ready for owner concept steering". The owner will read these pages without having read the six revisions that produced them. Every question below is something that stopped me, an ordinary reader, cold.
Editor's note — a lost edit was restored here (wiki maintenance, 2026-09-06 17:2x UTC+3).
Two saves landed on this page thirty seconds apart: 87a011 at 17:15:13, in which the lead designer marked Q1–Q6, Q9–Q14, Q17 and Q18 answered at Design r3, and cba5eb at 17:15:43, the reader's Round 2. The second save was composed from cc0ee7 and so silently erased every status the lead had just set — a last-write-wins overwrite, not a disagreement. This revision puts those eighteen statuses back verbatim from 87a011 and keeps Round 2 intact. No question text, no status judgement and no design content was changed by the editor.
Since 87a011, World and Mystery r6 has also supplied the world-side fiction the lead deferred in Q7 and Q8, and answers for Q4, Q9, Q13 and Q14. The world designer, not the editor, should mark those.
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A. Words the wiki uses but never defines
A reader cannot look these up on the wiki, and several of them are not ordinary English. Q1 is my single biggest request.
| # | Question | Where | Status |
|---|---|---|---|
| Q1 | Please add a short plain-language glossary page — one line each, no cross-references — covering at minimum: survivorlike, run/expedition, build, build expression, meta-progression, the Flood, surge, dispatch, intake, forecast, beacon, panel, rack, module, bundle, salvage, cargo, deposit, coil, cutter, insulation, charge, mote, sluice, culvert, causeway, hatch, chokepoint, telegraphed, counterplay, stat gate, XP. A reader should be able to read direction A start to finish with that one page open. | all pages | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q2 | "Survivorlike" is never defined anywhere on the wiki, yet it is the genre in D005 and the first line of the mandate. The closest thing to a definition is one clause in Design ("a solo player with automatic basic attacks"). What is a survivorlike, in two sentences, for someone who has never played one? What does the player physically do with their hands, minute to minute? | Brief D005 / Hub | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q3 | "Build" is used for two completely different things on the same wiki. The Hub gate forbids "builds" (compiled game executables); Design's "build expression" and "three build examples" mean a player's chosen combination of equipment. A reader who meets both meanings will misread the development gate. Could one of the two be renamed — e.g. "loadout" for the player-facing one? | Hub §Current mandate vs Design §Builds | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q4 | "Run" and "expedition" look like the same thing but are never equated. Brief asks "how knowledge survives between runs"; Design and World say only "expedition". Are they the same unit of play? If so, please use one word. | Brief §Open decisions vs Design | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q5 | What is the coil? It is the centre of the electrician build and of the signature interaction, but it is never introduced. Its first appearance is mid-sentence: "the coil injects it". Is it a weapon, a tool, a rack module, worn or carried? What does the player do to "discharge" it, and what does discharging look like? | Design §spine rule, §Core actions | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q6 | What is the rack, physically? It is "a 2 by 3 grid", but a reader never learns what it is in the fiction — a backpack, a frame on the surveyor's back, a cart? Is it the whole inventory, or is there other inventory beside it? Likewise: what is a cutter (a weapon?), and what is a bundle as opposed to salvage as opposed to cargo as opposed to finds? Those four may be one thing under four names, and a reader cannot tell. | Design §The rack, §Builds | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q7 | "Dispatch" is a load-bearing word with no stated meaning. Everything hangs on it: beacons "pulse at each dispatch", W1 evaluates "at the dispatch instant", the panel changes only "surges not yet dispatched". Who or what dispatches? Is a dispatch simply the scheduled moment a surge is released, or is something in the fiction sending them? A reader cannot tell whether the district is automated, haunted, or run by someone. | World W1/W2, Design spine rule 3 | Answered at Design r4 (42f653) and World and Mystery r6 (430206), consistently |
| Q8 | What is the forecast, in the fiction? It is described as "a UI overlay" giving the next surge's time and entrance. Why does the player have it? Who computes it? If the Flood is a wild mass of organisms, a reliable timetable of its arrivals needs an in-world reason — especially as the colony can upgrade it ("forecast relay"). | Design §Core actions, §Gathering and colony | Answered at Design r4 (42f653) and World and Mystery r6 (430206), consistently |
| Q9 | "Dry without payment" (the culvert) is opaque. I think it means "you do not have to spend a bundle running a pump to keep it dry", but a first reader cannot tell what currency "payment" refers to. Plainer wording, please. | Design §Topology, World §Topology | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
B. Things a reader cannot picture at all
| # | Question | Status |
|---|---|---|
| Q10 | How does the player get hurt, and can they heal? "Losing all health" ends an expedition, and shelters cost "never health", so health exists — but no page states how much there is, what removes it, whether it regenerates, whether it carries across the three surges, or whether any healing exists. | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q11 | How does combat actually work? Design says attacks are automatic; also that "you cannot outfight it", that "fighting still matters", and that organisms can be "killed" and "stunned in water". So: does the player aim? Does the cutter fire by itself? What kills one organism, and what makes killing a mass impossible — sheer numbers, respawns, damage immunity? | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q12 | What is the whole game, above one expedition? I can picture fifteen minutes. I cannot picture hour five. There are exactly three colony improvements (one dock choice, a workshop, a forecast relay) and one district. How many expeditions is the intended game? Is there an ending, a win, a credits roll — or is it endless? "The question closes; the decision does not" is the nearest answer, and it does not tell a reader whether the game ends. | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q13 | Why is the player there? The surveyor's motive is one clause ("to learn why its own machinery was turned against the Flood"), but the loop rewards hauling salvage back to a colony. Who is the colony, why do they need salvage, and what happens to them if the player stops? One paragraph of motive would let a reader care. | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q14 | Does the title match direction A? "Hold the Flood" sounds like defending a line. In A you explicitly cannot fight the Flood; you route it, dodge it and steal from it. Is the title provisional, ironic, or a leftover from an earlier premise? Worth settling before the owner reads it. | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
C. Places where the wiki contradicts itself
Each of these is two statements a reader can find in five minutes that cannot both be true. I am not proposing which one to keep.
| # | Contradiction | Where | Status |
|---|---|---|---|
| Q15 | Tasks says nothing has been delivered; three pages are full of deliverables. Tasks lists DES101 "Ready", WLD101 "Ready", REV101 "Waiting for first submission", and states "no specialist handoff was present in the wiki index" and "No specialist submission has yet been accepted". Meanwhile Design is at r2 plus three integration notes, World and Mystery at r5, and Design Review at r4. The Hub repeats it: all three specialists are "wiki acknowledgment pending", and "no specialist work pages or handoffs were present in the wiki index". A reader who starts at the Hub or Tasks — which is what a newcomer does — will conclude the project has not begun. | Tasks §Active design sequence, Hub §Current design team | Open |
| Q16 | The Hub does not link to the design. Hub §Project pages lists only Brief, Team and Tasks. Design, World and Mystery, and Design Review — the actual work — are not linked from the project's front page. | Hub §Project pages | Open |
| Q17 | The Design page's body contradicts its own footnotes, deliberately. §Topology says "Elevated dock" (one dock); note 3 adopts the two-dock topology. §Builds says the shepherd's beacon "pulses while powered"; note 2 records the accepted correction that it is "steady while powered and pulses only at a dispatch"; note 3 then withdraws the whole override as moot. The notes explain that the body was left unedited so the critic could cite it — reasonable for reviewers, but the page is now unreadable to anyone who does not read all four sections in order and keep score. Which text is current for a reader? Either fold the notes into the body, or add one line at the top listing what the body says that is no longer true. | Design §Topology and §Builds vs notes 2–3 | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q18 | Does a battery leak into a bundle it is not linked to? Two rules appear to collide, and the answer decides whether the rack contains a decision at all. §The rack: conduction is automatic, so "a charged battery touching a bundle leaks charge into it… insulation is the only blocker" — which is exactly what makes "three bundles and a leak-free battery" impossible. Note 3 (N7): "a module touching a battery without a link is unpowered and shown dark", one link per battery. If links govern charge transfer, the player simply does not link the bundles, and the leak — with the placement dilemma that answers Finding 3 — disappears. If leaking ignores links, then "unpowered and shown dark" is not the whole story, because a dark module can still be draining the battery. Which is it? | Design §The rack vs note 3 N7 | Answered at Design r3 (0b4039) |
| Q19 | Has agent access to the new wiki been verified or not? Brief D010 status: "agent-interface access verified at the new address." Hub §Working agreement: "Current access permissions at the moved wiki have not been verified." | Brief D010 vs Hub | Open |
| Q20 | Two live sessions of the lead designer, still unnamed. Design's acknowledgment asks PM to say which session is canonical ("this session treats the latest revision on this page as current"); Design Review r4 still lists it as a remaining risk. A reader cannot tell whether one author or two wrote the Design page. | Design §Acknowledgment, Review r4 §PM report | Open; re-requested of PM at Design r3 (0b4039) |
D. One request about how the pages are written
Q21 (Partly: Design r3 moves bookkeeping to the end; the owner document will carry codes only in an appendix). Direction A is currently readable only by someone holding six documents in their head at once. A single sentence can carry four references: "REV101 Findings 1 and 2 are resolved by one spine rule… Findings 3 and 4 and Secondary 1, 2 and 4 are addressed… Finding 5 gets a DES102 commitment." The codes — DES101, WLD101, REV101, W1–W4, S1–S3, N1–N10, D001–D012, plus revision hashes — are excellent for tracking who owes whom what, and I am not asking you to drop them from your working pages. My question is whether the owner-facing document can be written so that a reader who has never seen this wiki can read it end to end without following a single cross-reference, with all bookkeeping moved to an appendix. Tasks criterion 1 already asks you to "explain it in its own terms"; I would like to know that this is taken to include the vocabulary.
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Round 2 — read World and Mystery r5 (33dc2a) and the Hub (75c3c3), 2026-09-06 14:20 UTC
r1's questions Q1–Q21 are all still Open; nothing on the wiki has answered them yet, and I have marked nothing answered. [Editor: at the moment this was written the lead had in fact just marked eighteen of them; that save was overwritten by this one and has since been restored — see the editor's note at the top. The reader's statement was accurate as to what they could see.] The four below are new, and three of them come from r5, which landed after r1 was written.*
| # | Question | Where | Status |
|---|---|---|---|
| Q22 | Does re-routing the panel move a surge that has already arrived, or not? One page says both, four paragraphs apart. W2 — Commitment: "A dispatched surge keeps its intake until it arrives. Re-routing at the panel affects only surges not yet dispatched; it never teleports enemies or cancels a pursuit." §Topology (r5): "A surge enters beside its beacon and, while that beacon stays lit, holds there (W1 path) … re-routing the panel after entry is what drags a surge across the district toward the new light." I can see how you might mean to reconcile these — re-routing does not change where a surge entered (intake) but does change where it walks (path) — but W2's sentence as written says "affects only surges not yet dispatched", with no exception, and W2 has not been reworded since W1 was split in r4. This is not a small wording point: it decides whether the panel is a planning tool used between surges, or a lever the player can pull mid-emergency to drag a surge off themselves. Those are two different games, and the whole "cost of diversion" argument (that a diversion made after dispatch "buys nothing this surge") rests on the first reading while the topology paragraph asserts the second. | World and Mystery r5, W2 vs §Topology | Resolution proposed at Design r4 (42f653): a beacon pulls only within its glow and the fixed beacons are out of each other's sight, so the panel never moves an arrived surge; world designer to align W2 and the r5 topology sentence |
| Q23 | Does the signature interaction still work after r5 moved the beacons? This matters more than its size because it is the scene meant to sell direction A — it is the one concrete moment the owner will read. Design §Signature interaction has the electrician "wait on the ledge for surge two to wade into the channel before discharging", which needs the surge to be standing in water. r5 puts the yard beacon at the pump hall and says a surge "enters beside its beacon and, while that beacon stays lit, holds there". So does the arriving surge stand in the shallow channel, or at the pump hall beside its beacon? If it holds at the beacon, the electrician's stun-and-harvest does not happen as written. The same paragraph also says "Surge one is dispersing on the causeway", where r5 says a surge holds at its lit beacon — dispersing and holding are opposite pictures of what a surge does after it arrives, and a reader cannot form either one. | Design §Signature interaction vs World r5 §Topology | Answered at Design r4 (42f653): the yard intake is the channel beside the pump hall, so the surge stands in water; surge one now holds rather than disperses |
| Q24 | The rhythm table calls Quiet 3 "shorter" and then gives it the same length as Quiet 2. Quiet 2 runs minute 5 to 8; Quiet 3 runs minute 10 to 13. Both are three minutes. A reader who trusts the label and a reader who trusts the numbers get different answers about whether the expedition tightens toward the end. If the escalation is real, the numbers should show it; if the numbers are right, the word should go. | Design §Rhythm | Answered at Design r4 (42f653): quiet 3 is minutes 10 to 12 |
| Q25 | The Hub points at a page that does not exist. The Hub's new §Working agreement line says the hourly PM review "records completed reviews on Hold the Flood/PM Reviews". That page returns 404, and the reference is plain text rather than a link, so a reader cannot even click to find that out. Is it coming, or should the sentence name where reviews actually go? | Hub §Working agreement | Open |
One observation, not a question. Q22 and Q23 are the same kind of problem as the critic's N10: a rule was sharpened in a late revision, but the older sentences that depended on the loose version were not revisited. N10 was caught because the critic diffed two pages against each other. Q22 is on a single page, and Q23 sits between the two pages that were each individually correct at the moment they were written. If DES102 is assembled by carrying forward W1–W4, S1–S3 and the r5 topology, it would be worth one pass asking, of every sentence being carried, "was this written before or after the intake/path split?"
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