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2026-09-06 18:47:46 Anonymous: WLD102 r15: PMR002 items 1 and 3 - W1 defines what counts as a beacon (B1, B2, portable module; every other lamp is an indicator) and retarget-before-spread precedence; junction lamp is an indicator; state table checks the three signature routes and the failed experiment (its written outcome does not follow from the rule; coil route never leaves the yard dark); complete tier-three chain (drum, lever, clamp, drain valve R), endings table with dispatch/retreat/colony consequences, ending costs no salvage, Q36 early takeaway; In review, design only

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	# Hold the Flood — World and Mystery
-	**WLD102 · r14 · 2026-09-06 15:27 UTC · In review** — r14 applies PM's PMU002 rulings to this page: the title moves out of "owner requirements" to its D017 status as the owner-supplied working title (Clarity Q37 was right); D016 confirms the routing baseline, so the standing decision request is closed; D015 seats the five further contributors on the Team, so their pages are cited as team work, and REF101's electrofishing reference is cited as research grounding for W1. No rule or chain text changed. r13 aligned two tier-two sentences to [DES102 draft r6 12779dc](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Document?revision=12779dc), which states the critic's REV102-6 on the document's own principle: any current in the joined water energises the junction circuit, so with the valve open the panel lighting the yard is enough to open the junction gate, at the price of a hot yard; with the valve shut, a coil discharge into the pool opens it quietly; the coil buys stealth, not access. Nothing else changed from [r12 23dca93](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=23dca93), which aligned to draft r4, whose r3 topology stands (the lead's r4 note and REV102 issue 1 both settle on this page's r10 choices). r12 re-instated r10's body, undoing [r11 eac7ed8](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=eac7ed8), which had aligned to draft r2 while r3 was aligning to r10. To make a third crossing impossible, this page no longer carries its own map: topology and crowd behaviour are sourced from the Design Document's sections 2 and 4 and only summarised here with a notation key; this page remains the source for W1–W4 and the mystery chain, which the document's section 9 mirrors. Any topology change starts here and is agreed before either page moves, as the lead's r3 note asks. [r10 c6f0598](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=c6f0598), [r9 41681d9](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=41681d9), [r8 ba6f8b8](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=ba6f8b8) and earlier are page history. Author: World and Mystery Designer. Handoff: canonical Lead (D014) for DES102; PM. WLD101 was accepted in PMR001 as a concept contribution (at [r6 4302067](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=4302067)); [r7 fa3eb1b](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=fa3eb1b) and earlier revisions are page history.
+	**WLD102 · r15 · 2026-09-06 15:47 UTC · In review** — the revision PMR002 requested of this role (items 1 and 3): W1 now says what counts as a beacon and the precedence between retargeting and spreading; the junction lamp is an indicator, not a lure; a state table checks the three signature routes and the failed experiment against the rule as written; tier three gets a complete clue → inference → action → consequence chain, an endings table with each ending's dispatch, retreat and colony consequence, no salvage price on the choice itself, and the early takeaway Q36 asked for. r14 applied PMU002's rulings: the title moves out of "owner requirements" to its D017 status as the owner-supplied working title (Clarity Q37 was right); D016 confirms the routing baseline, so the standing decision request is closed; D015 seats the five further contributors on the Team, so their pages are cited as team work, and REF101's electrofishing reference is cited as research grounding for W1. No rule or chain text changed. r13 aligned two tier-two sentences to [DES102 draft r6 12779dc](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Document?revision=12779dc), which states the critic's REV102-6 on the document's own principle: any current in the joined water energises the junction circuit, so with the valve open the panel lighting the yard is enough to open the junction gate, at the price of a hot yard; with the valve shut, a coil discharge into the pool opens it quietly; the coil buys stealth, not access. Nothing else changed from [r12 23dca93](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=23dca93), which aligned to draft r4, whose r3 topology stands (the lead's r4 note and REV102 issue 1 both settle on this page's r10 choices). r12 re-instated r10's body, undoing [r11 eac7ed8](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=eac7ed8), which had aligned to draft r2 while r3 was aligning to r10. To make a third crossing impossible, this page no longer carries its own map: topology and crowd behaviour are sourced from the Design Document's sections 2 and 4 and only summarised here with a notation key; this page remains the source for W1–W4 and the mystery chain, which the document's section 9 mirrors. Any topology change starts here and is agreed before either page moves, as the lead's r3 note asks. [r10 c6f0598](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=c6f0598), [r9 41681d9](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=41681d9), [r8 ba6f8b8](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=ba6f8b8) and earlier are page history. Author: World and Mystery Designer. Handoff: canonical Lead (D014) for DES102; PM. WLD101 was accepted in PMR001 as a concept contribution (at [r6 4302067](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=4302067)); [r7 fa3eb1b](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/World%20and%20Mystery?revision=fa3eb1b) and earlier revisions are page history.
	**Owner requirements.** Survivorlike; exploration, experimentation, mystery; the Flood is massed enemies (Brief D011); Unity; Steam; assume nothing exists. "Hold the Flood" is the owner-supplied working project title, not a recorded requirement; final naming is the owner's and is not locked (Brief D017). Design only until the owner explicitly authorizes development after reviewing the design document (D007). No AI-generated art; prefer verified free assets; purchases and rare authored assets need owner approval. This revision creates no assets, code, prototypes, or tests. Bioelectric enemies, the drowned district, the small colony, and every rule below are proposals, not owner approvals (D013).
-	**Sources.** Reread 15:27 UTC: [Brief 28fb1c2](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Brief?revision=28fb1c2) (D013 provisional A; D014 canonical lead; D015 five owner-added contributors seated; D016 routing baseline confirmed; D017 working title; D018 criterion 11), [Tasks 1370285](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Tasks?revision=1370285) (PMU002: WLD102 In review at r12; DES103 Ready for the lead; this role checks clue/rule changes against the exact integrated revision), [Team cbf8d79](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Team?revision=cbf8d79), [PM Reviews a2beab4](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews?revision=a2beab4), [Design r5 b030c98](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design?revision=b030c98), [Design Review r6 a892274](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=a892274), [Design Review r7 bb68711](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=bb68711) (closes Finding 2 under the sight-limited model; N17), [Clarity Questions b8696cc](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions?revision=b8696cc) (Q28 on the crossed saves; Q29 marked answered at r8 by this role), [PM Reviews 04f3183](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews?revision=04f3183) (PMR001 checkpoint; next review prioritises WLD102), [Glossary f1bf1f4](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Glossary?revision=f1bf1f4), [External Critique 319c975](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/External%20Critique?revision=319c975) (EXT101; the External Critic is a team member since D015; its X9 on the title is answered by D017 and on this page by r14), [Design Document r6 12779dc](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Document?revision=12779dc) (r5 bc134bf states REV102-6 and adds the one-page owner summary; r6 merges owner decisions 4 and 6 with measured market data; r4 46b320b sections 2, 4, 9, 11 and Appendix B read; r3 d35209f aligned to this page's r10), [Design Review REV102 r2 82a96ba](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=82a96ba) (all five r1 issues verified resolved; verdict: ready for owner review as the base of DES103; one residual, REV102-6), [Design Review REV102 r1 4dde90c](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=4dde90c) (verdict: revise, one bounded pass; issue 1 recommends this page's r10 topology; issue 3 the flash observable), [Disagreement Register 8dd233c](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Disagreement%20Register?revision=8dd233c) and [Reference: Survivorlike Market Data 39c95f2](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Reference/Survivorlike%20Market%20Data?revision=39c95f2) (The Troll and the Reference Researcher, team members since D015; Q37 on the title came from the register and is answered here), [Design r6 211106d](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design?revision=211106d) (header note: rules now maintained on the Design Document), [Glossary 86c1c4e](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Glossary?revision=86c1c4e). No comparative research and no asset verification.
+	**Sources.** Reread 15:47 UTC: [Brief 28fb1c2](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Brief?revision=28fb1c2) (D013 provisional A; D014 canonical lead; D015 five owner-added contributors seated; D016 routing baseline confirmed; D017 working title; D018 criterion 11), [Tasks 1370285](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Tasks?revision=1370285) (PMU002: WLD102 In review at r12; DES103 Ready for the lead; this role checks clue/rule changes against the exact integrated revision), [Team cbf8d79](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Team?revision=cbf8d79), [PM Reviews a2beab4](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews?revision=a2beab4), [PMR002 2199471](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews/PMR002?revision=2199471) (verdict: revise before PM recommends owner approval; items 1 and 3 assigned to this role), [Tasks 95db055](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Tasks?revision=95db055) (WLD102 Ready: revision requested), [Design Document r8 d37cbf0](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Document?revision=d37cbf0) (DES103 r2; rule and chain text unchanged from r6 apart from "line" → "cable"), [Design Review REV102 r5 e2db8b9](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=e2db8b9) (revise: the arc; nothing to this role), [Design r5 b030c98](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design?revision=b030c98), [Design Review r6 a892274](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=a892274), [Design Review r7 bb68711](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=bb68711) (closes Finding 2 under the sight-limited model; N17), [Clarity Questions b8696cc](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions?revision=b8696cc) (Q28 on the crossed saves; Q29 marked answered at r8 by this role), [PM Reviews 04f3183](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews?revision=04f3183) (PMR001 checkpoint; next review prioritises WLD102), [Glossary f1bf1f4](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Glossary?revision=f1bf1f4), [External Critique 319c975](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/External%20Critique?revision=319c975) (EXT101; the External Critic is a team member since D015; its X9 on the title is answered by D017 and on this page by r14), [Design Document r6 12779dc](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Document?revision=12779dc) (r5 bc134bf states REV102-6 and adds the one-page owner summary; r6 merges owner decisions 4 and 6 with measured market data; r4 46b320b sections 2, 4, 9, 11 and Appendix B read; r3 d35209f aligned to this page's r10), [Design Review REV102 r2 82a96ba](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=82a96ba) (all five r1 issues verified resolved; verdict: ready for owner review as the base of DES103; one residual, REV102-6), [Design Review REV102 r1 4dde90c](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=4dde90c) (verdict: revise, one bounded pass; issue 1 recommends this page's r10 topology; issue 3 the flash observable), [Disagreement Register 8dd233c](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Disagreement%20Register?revision=8dd233c) and [Reference: Survivorlike Market Data 39c95f2](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Reference/Survivorlike%20Market%20Data?revision=39c95f2) (The Troll and the Reference Researcher, team members since D015; Q37 on the title came from the register and is answered here), [Design r6 211106d](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design?revision=211106d) (header note: rules now maintained on the Design Document), [Glossary 86c1c4e](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Glossary?revision=86c1c4e). No comparative research and no asset verification.
	**What r8 did.** PMR001 chose the simpler routing model over the sight-limited one that r7 and Design r4–r5 had adopted: **the panel alone selects the intake at dispatch; after entry every surge continuously follows the nearest reachable energised beacon, district-wide.** r8 rewrites W1/W2, the map, the chain, the price of the panel, and both required scenes under exactly that model, removing r7's glow-range and split-surge text. It reconciles the culvert account (no pump; item 6), re-derives the dock-choice consequence (item 2), and supplies the motive, tiers, and ending without upkeep and without making the Flood water (item 5). Word definitions stay in [Design's glossary](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Hold%20the%20Flood/Design#words-used-below); the wiki editor's Glossary mirrors it. The sight-limited model is recorded once, at the end, as a set-aside alternative.
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	## World rules — proposal for DES102, PM baseline
-	- **W1 — Attraction.** *Intake:* at each dispatch the relay fires one pulse down the branch the panel selects: *Causeway* (B1 pulses, the surge enters at I1), *Yard* (B2, I2), or *Off* (no pulse; the surge enters at the sluice). Only the relay pulses. A beacon lit by local current (a coil discharge into a channel, or a valve joining the two branches' water) glows steady and lures, but never pulses and never changes the next intake: the relay's output is a separate line from the lamp (the Design Document's thin signal cable beside the thick power cable, both switched by the panel). This is visible, not a hidden rule: at a dispatch the pulse is seen running the thin cable and the beacon flashes; a coil-lit or planted beacon glows steady and never flashes. **Only the beacon that flashes chooses an intake, and nothing the surveyor carries can make a beacon flash.** *Path:* after entry a surge moves continuously toward the nearest reachable energised beacon anywhere in the district, fixed or planted, panel-lit or coil-lit; with none reachable it spreads along the branch it is in (from the sluice, along the interior route and then both branches). The panel needs no item, slot, resource, or notebook flag; what it costs is stated under "The price of the panel".
+	- **W1 — Attraction.** *Intake:* at each dispatch the relay fires one pulse down the branch the panel selects: *Causeway* (B1 pulses, the surge enters at I1), *Yard* (B2, I2), or *Off* (no pulse; the surge enters at the sluice). Only the relay pulses. A beacon lit by local current (a coil discharge into a channel, or a valve joining the two branches' water) glows steady and lures, but never pulses and never changes the next intake: the relay's output is a separate line from the lamp (the Design Document's thin signal cable beside the thick power cable, both switched by the panel). This is visible, not a hidden rule: at a dispatch the pulse is seen running the thin cable and the beacon flashes; a coil-lit or planted beacon glows steady and never flashes. **Only the beacon that flashes chooses an intake, and nothing the surveyor carries can make a beacon flash.** *What counts as a beacon (r15, PMR002 item 1):* exactly three devices lure: the two fixed beacons B1 and B2, and the portable beacon module. Every other lamp, including the junction pool's lamp, the panel's indicators, and any hatch light, is an indicator that shows a circuit's state and draws nothing. *Path:* after entry a surge moves continuously toward the nearest reachable lit beacon anywhere in the district, fixed or planted, panel-lit or coil-lit. *Precedence, stated once:* a crowd keeps its current lit target unless another lit beacon is nearer, or its target goes dark; when its target goes dark it retargets to the nearest reachable lit beacon if there is one, and only with none reachable does it spread along the branch it is in (from the sluice, along the interior route and then both branches). Lighting a beacon farther from a crowd than its current lit target moves nothing. The panel needs no item, slot, resource, or notebook flag; what it costs is stated under "The price of the panel".
	- *Research note (not a rule).* [Reference: Electricity in Water, REF101 r2](https://open-wiki.tail2e4d02.ts.net/Reference/Electricity%20In%20Water?revision=10e0a37), by the team's Reference Researcher, documents real electrofishing response zones: attraction toward the anode at low field strength, forced swimming toward it as the field grows, immobilisation at roughly ten times the attraction threshold. That is the same shape as this page's beacon (lure) and coil (stun): one physics at two intensities, which the Design Document r3 also cites as grounding. It supports the fiction; it does not set any number here, and the game's rule stays W1 as written.
	- **W2 — Commitment (entrance only).** A dispatched surge keeps its intake: nothing changes where it came in, and nothing teleports it. Switching the panel changes which beacons are lit, and therefore where every entered surge walks next. The forecast shows the next dispatch's intake as a map marker that moves the moment the panel changes, a locked marker for a surge already dispatched, and each entered surge's current target beacon.
	- **W3 — Stable evidence.** Wiring, signs, wear marks, and signal behaviour are identical on every expedition. Water states, enemies, loose salvage, and surge timing may vary or reset and can change the best route, never the rule.
	- **W4 — Turned signs.** Every refuge sign that has been turned faces the way the last crew went; first seen in the culvert facing the yard; confirmed by the tally board; thereafter a navigation clue wherever the sign recurs. One sign asset, rotated.
-	**How a surge behaves once it has arrived (item 2).** It gathers around its target beacon and holds there while that beacon stays lit and no lit beacon is nearer; each surge is larger, so the held crowd's radius grows, and by surge 3 the causeway's far end or the channel mouth is full. Two things move organisms besides beacons, in the Design Document's terms: **pursuit range** (any organism within a short range of the surveyor breaks off to chase and drifts back when out of range, which is what the cutter fires at) and **press** (the gathered crowd's edge creeps slowly outward along its branch during the quiet interval, so "quiet" means a moving line you can read, not an empty branch; stragglers roam between surges; the next surge re-concentrates it). A surge whose beacon goes dark spreads along its branch immediately, both ways. What creates survival decisions while a crowd holds: the hatch, the richest deposits, and the motes all sit at the far ends where the crowd is, and the press brings its edge toward the dock ends; harvesting or opening anything means working at the crowd's edge inside its pursuit range, or waiting and losing surge time.
+	**How a surge behaves once it has arrived (item 2).** It gathers around its target beacon and holds there while that beacon stays lit and no lit beacon is nearer; each surge is larger, so the held crowd's radius grows, and by surge 3 the causeway's far end or the channel mouth is full. Two things move organisms besides beacons, in the Design Document's terms: **pursuit range** (any organism within a short range of the surveyor breaks off to chase and drifts back when out of range, which is what the cutter fires at) and **press** (the gathered crowd's edge creeps slowly outward along its branch during the quiet interval, so "quiet" means a moving line you can read, not an empty branch; stragglers roam between surges; the next surge re-concentrates it). A surge whose beacon goes dark retargets to the nearest reachable lit beacon if one exists and otherwise spreads along its branch at once, both ways (W1 precedence). What creates survival decisions while a crowd holds: the hatch, the richest deposits, and the motes all sit at the far ends where the crowd is, and the press brings its edge toward the dock ends; harvesting or opening anything means working at the crowd's edge inside its pursuit range, or waiting and losing surge time.
	## The price of the panel (item 1; replaces "Cost of diversion")
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	4. **The held dock.** A dry dock is never blocked; it is a hard stop. The route to it is what costs, and three things raise that cost: the press of a lit branch's crowd toward the dock end, a dark branch's crowd spreading both ways, and a planted beacon lit near a dock. The two docks have the same bypass, because the culvert joins both dock ends; the asymmetry is water: the yard's crowd stands in a channel, where the coil works and unprotected feet burn. So the branch of the held dock must stay lit whenever a surge is in it, which is also what keeps that branch hot. **Dock-choice consequence (re-derived):** holding the causeway dock means the causeway is your safe default and the yard is where you send trouble; holding the yard dock means the yard must stay lit through any surge you send there, so the hall's crowd is between you and nothing, but Off and Causeway are both dangerous the moment a surge is in the yard. The colony choice decides which branch you can never afford to darken.
	5. **Commitment.** The intake is fixed at dispatch; a switch after dispatch changes where the surge goes after it enters, never where it enters, so the forecast's locked marker stays true.
-	**Where the coil fits.** A coil discharged into the yard channel lights B2 and opens H for a few seconds without touching the panel: a lure and a key, not an intake. Any crowd nearer to B2 than to its own lit beacon starts toward it; the panel's next intake is unchanged. This is the separation PMR001 asked for: lamps can be lit from anywhere the water reaches; only the relay's selected line pulses.
+	**Where the coil fits.** A coil discharged into the yard channel lights B2 steady and opens H for the seconds the charge lasts, without touching the panel: a lure and a key, not an intake. B2 and H share a circuit, so "the yard stays dark" is never true of a coil route: the yard glows, it does not flash. A crowd moves to B2 only if B2 is nearer than its current lit target or its target is dark; the panel's next intake is unchanged, because only the flashing beacon chooses it.
+
+	**The signature routes and the failed experiment, as states (r15; the check PMR002 item 1 asks of this role).** Start of every row: quiet two; panel on Causeway; B1 lit; surge one holding at B1; B2 dark; H shut; next dispatch in ninety seconds, intake causeway.
+
+	| Route | Panel | Powered | Lit beacons | Surge one: position → target | Next intake | H |
+	| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
+	| Panel route: throw to Yard | Yard | yard circuit | B2 only (B1 dark) | at B1 → retargets to B2, the only lit beacon; crosses the junction and comes down the channel | yard (marker jumps) | open while the yard is lit |
+	| Coil route: discharge in the channel, panel untouched | Causeway | causeway circuit; yard water for seconds | B1, and B2 for seconds | at B1 → stays: B1 is lit and nearer | causeway (unchanged) | open for seconds, then shuts |
+	| Electrician: throw to Yard, wait in the channel's edge in insulation, discharge when surge two wades in | Yard | yard circuit | B2 only | surge one crosses to B2; surge two enters at I2 into the water and is stunned there | yard | open while the yard is lit |
+	| The failed experiment as the document wrote it (§8): coil in the channel to open H "while the yard stays dark to the relay", expecting surge one to stay | Causeway | causeway circuit; yard water for seconds | B1, and B2 for seconds | at B1 → **stays**; it does not walk to the yard, because B1 is lit and nearer | causeway | open for seconds; **shuts with the player inside** |
+
+	So the failed experiment's written outcome, surge one crossing to the yard, does not follow from the rule; what does follow is a different and better failure: the yard glows (steady, not dark), the hatch opens for seconds, and closes on the surveyor inside the hall, who cranks out in ten seconds while the yard crowd, if any, presses at the door. The lesson stays the same words: steady means powered, powered means lure for anything nearer, and the coil powers everything the water touches. The lead should rewrite §1's "the yard stays dark" and §8's sequence to these states; nothing in W1 needs an exception to make the scene work.
	## Illustrative design — DESIGNER SPOILERS: the false refuge under the PM baseline
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	## Motive, tiers, ending (item 5; proposals for owner judgment)
-	**Motive, no upkeep.** The colony is a dozen people on the one dock the pump keeps dry. The pump runs on salvage already banked; nothing is charged per expedition, there is no decay between sessions, and repeated failed expeditions lose only their own cargo. What salvage buys is change: a dock held dry instead of the other, a workshop, the forecast relay, and the ending itself. A colony that stops hauling is not drowned; it is stuck. The surveyor goes in because the crew before them went in and did not come back, and because the district's own machinery is what is sending the Flood at the refuge route.
+	**Motive, no upkeep.** The colony is a dozen people on the one dock the pump keeps dry. The pump runs on salvage already banked; nothing is charged per expedition, there is no decay between sessions, and repeated failed expeditions lose only their own cargo. What salvage buys is change: a dock held dry instead of the other, a workshop, and the forecast relay. The ending costs no salvage; it costs reaching the relay room (r15, PMR002 item 3). A colony that stops hauling is not drowned; it is stuck. The surveyor goes in because the crew before them went in and did not come back, and because the district's own machinery is what is sending the Flood at the refuge route.
	**The title.** "Hold the Flood" is the owner-supplied working title and is kept as such; final naming is the owner's and is not locked (D017; this page's earlier revisions wrongly listed it under owner requirements, which Clarity Q37 caught). In A it means holding the enemy mass off the refuge: the dock, the causeway signed as the way out, and eventually the district. The pump holds water; the panel, the beacons, and the surveyor hold the Flood. The Flood is never water.
-	**Three tiers on one district, each a recombination of the same rules.** *Tier 1, the false refuge* (designed above): learn that power is key and lure; the panel is the lever. *Tier 2, the junction and the interior, "what they went in for":* the junction gate GJ is on a circuit the panel never reaches. Evidence: valve V beside it, drawn open on the inked plan and found shut; a lamp on the junction pool that lights whenever the yard channel is energised while V is open. Inference: joined water carries power, and therefore attraction, across the district, so the crew could open GJ from the yard without the panel. Experiment: open V and light the yard at the panel; the pool's lamp lights and GJ opens for as long as the yard is lit, with the yard hot behind you and crowds drawn toward the junction while its lamp is lit. Or leave V shut and discharge the coil into the pool: GJ opens quietly, without lighting a beacon, for the seconds the charge lasts. The coil buys stealth, not access (REV102-6). Consequence: entering tier two needs no module, and every way in has a price the player can read. Behind GJ: the second tally board and the crew's note of the relay room's valve sequence. Keep tier 3 a knowledge gate: the relay room opens by the same current rule and that note, not by a found key item. *Tier 3, the relay room, "what calls the Flood":* the timer itself, at the sluice's head. The final choice, each one an expedition-ending act with a different persistent district: **shut it** (no more dispatches; the Flood enters only by the sluice, unannounced: honest and harder), **fix it** (weld the panel to one branch for good: one dock safe forever, one branch lost), or **hold it** (leave it running and keep steering: the status quo, chosen). Free expeditions continue after any ending. None of this adds a machine family: valves, lamps, beacons, hatches, and the relay already exist.
+	**Three tiers on one district, each a recombination of the same rules.** *Tier 1, the false refuge* (designed above): learn that power is key and lure; the panel is the lever. *Tier 2, the junction and the interior, "what they went in for":* the junction gate GJ is on a circuit the panel never reaches. Evidence: valve V beside it, drawn open on the inked plan and found shut; a lamp on the junction pool that lights whenever the yard channel is energised while V is open. Inference: joined water carries power, and therefore attraction, across the district, so the crew could open GJ from the yard without the panel. Experiment: open V and light the yard at the panel; the pool's lamp (an indicator, not a beacon: it draws nothing) lights and GJ opens for as long as the yard is lit. The price is the hot yard: the next surge enters at I2 and its crowd holds at B2, beside the junction, so the platform is worked at that crowd's edge. Or leave V shut and discharge the coil into the pool: GJ opens quietly, no beacon lights, for the seconds the charge lasts. The coil buys stealth, not access (REV102-6). Consequence: entering tier two needs no module, and every way in has a price the player can read. Behind GJ: the second tally board and the crew's note of the relay room's valve sequence. Keep tier 3 a knowledge gate: the relay room opens by the same current rule and that note, not by a found key item. *Tier 3, the relay room, "what calls the Flood" (r15: the complete chain PMR002 item 3 asked for; designer spoilers).* **Prerequisites:** GJ open (tier two), and the crew's note from behind it, which reads, in the plan's hand: "relay on the head channel; drain it and it stops; clamp it and it holds one line; we chose neither." **Place:** the relay room at the sluice's head, on the interior route; the relay is a device like any other, on its own circuit, fed by the sluice-head channel, which is always wet.
+
+	| Step | Evidence, inference, consequence |
+	| --- | --- |
+	| Notice | On the relay's face a drum turns with three marks per cycle; the forecast countdown on the surveyor's board ticks exactly with it. At a dispatch the drum's mark passes a contact and the thin signal cable leaving the room pulses. The forecast has been this drum all along. |
+	| Compare | Beside the drum a lever with three positions, cabled to the panel at the causeway head: the panel has been a remote for this lever. A clamp hangs beside it, unused; a drain valve **R** sits on the sluice-head channel, shut; the crew's note names both and chose neither. |
+	| Understand | The relay is a device under clause 2: it works only while its channel carries current. The drum decides *when*; the lever decides *where*. Nothing here is new: a drain valve cuts a channel (the field pump did the same in the yard), a clamp fixes a lever, and the relay obeys the same rule as a hatch. |
+	| Infer | Three things can be done with what the player already knows, and each is persistent because it is done to the district, not to the player: open R and the relay loses its water and stops; clamp the lever and every dispatch goes to one branch; leave it, and the panel keeps its remote. |
+	| Act | **Shut:** open R. **Fix:** set the lever, then clamp it. **Hold:** leave the room as found and record the choice at the dock. Each is one interaction; none consumes salvage; the cost was reaching the room. |
+	| Consequence | The district changes for good (table below), the expedition ends at extraction as usual, and the colony's board records which. Free expeditions continue under the new rules. |
+
+	**Each ending, next expedition (proposal):**
+
+	| Ending | Dispatch and forecast | Existing crowds at the moment of the act | Retreat and the docks | Colony |
+	| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
+	| **Shut** | No dispatches; the forecast board is dark. The Flood arrives only by the sluice, in unannounced trickles that grow over the expedition, never as an announced surge. Beacons, hatches and the panel still work: a lit beacon still draws whatever is inside. | Keep their targets; nothing new enters by the branches. | No evacuation window: the expedition ends when the surveyor leaves. Docks stay hard stops. Observation replaces the forecast, which is why this is the honest, harder district. | The held-dock choice matters less (no intake to keep off it); the workshop and the forecast relay repair are spent. |
+	| **Fix** (to Causeway or Yard) | Every dispatch enters by the clamped branch. The panel's *signal* position is dead; its *power* positions still work, so the clamped branch can be lit or darkened at will. | Keep their targets. | Surges never *enter* on the other branch; that branch's crowd can still be drawn there by a lit beacon or spread there when a beacon goes dark, so its dock is safer, not safe: the press bound still applies. | The choice is only good when the clamped branch is the one away from the held dock; a colony that later switches its held dock has clamped the Flood onto its own road. |
+	| **Hold** | Unchanged. | Unchanged. | Unchanged. | The colony knows the relay could have been stopped and was not; the board records it. |
+
+	**What a player who stops early takes away (Q36).** After tier one, expeditions one to three, the player has one complete answer, why the marked refuge is overrun, and one durable ability that is not on any item: choosing where the next surge enters and reading every crowd's target on the forecast. That is a finished small game inside the larger one; tiers two and three add where current can be sent without the panel, and then what the timer is. None of this adds a machine family: valves, lamps, beacons, hatches, a clamp, and the relay already exist.
	**Early, middle, final (illustrative; the expedition count is a proposal, not coverage).** Early: the panel, the culvert, the yard; hauler loadouts; the first colony repair. Middle: G and the interior; valves; the held-dock switch; electrician and shepherd loadouts; the tally board and the inked route. Final: the relay room and the choice. A rough twelve to twenty expeditions is the lead's number to defend in DES102 against the content above; this page supplies the tiers, not the count.
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	## PM report
-	Task WLD102, In review at r12 per Tasks PMU002; artifact World and Mystery r14 (supersedes r13 a8a3f4f and earlier). No canonical decisions changed by this role; D016 applied (no text change needed), D017 applied (title relabelled), D015 applied (citations relabelled). r14 changes no rule and no chain text. r13 aligned the tier-two door to Design Document r6 / REV102-6 (two sentences). r12 aligned to Design Document r4, mirrors its flash observable in W1 and the chain, removes this page's duplicate map in favour of a link and a notation key, records that nothing from REV102 r1 or the r1–r3 checks remains open for this role, and states this role's position on the routing model without changing the applied baseline. r8 delivered: items 1 and 2 (W1/W2 under PM's model; map; crowd behaviour; the five-part price of the panel; re-derived dock-choice consequence; both scenes; hatch-closure and recoverable-exit rule; culvert account unified as a gravity drain, item 6) and item 5 (motive without upkeep; title kept and related to holding enemies off the refuge; three tiers and an ending on the existing district). Evidence: written reasoning against Tasks ee938e6, Brief 3cf14c7, Design b030c98, Design Review a892274; no player data. Risks, unvalidated: a live-lever panel may dominate if the crossing route and shut door are too cheap; crowd thinning and proximity radius are balance levers with no numbers; readable crowd targets on a crowded screen. Handoff: none open to the lead from this page; the Design Document's section 9 may re-lift the Understand row from r12 if it wants the notation to match. Next for this role, per Tasks PMU002: check any DES103 change that affects clues or rules against the exact integrated revision, without reviving older map variants; otherwise post nothing. Q37 is marked answered on the Clarity page at this revision.
+	Task WLD102, revision requested by PMR002 (items 1 and 3); artifact World and Mystery r15 (supersedes r14 e2d4b49 and earlier). No canonical decisions changed by this role. r15 delivers: item 1's check as a state table (the failed experiment's written outcome does not follow from the rule; the correct failure is stated; "the yard stays dark" is false of any coil route), W1's beacon definition and retarget-before-spread precedence, the junction lamp settled as an indicator; item 3's complete tier-three chain, the endings table with dispatch, retreat and colony consequences, the ending's salvage cost removed, and Q36's early takeaway. r14 applied PMU002's rulings; no rule and no chain text changed there. r13 aligned the tier-two door to Design Document r6 / REV102-6 (two sentences). r12 aligned to Design Document r4, mirrors its flash observable in W1 and the chain, removes this page's duplicate map in favour of a link and a notation key, records that nothing from REV102 r1 or the r1–r3 checks remains open for this role, and states this role's position on the routing model without changing the applied baseline. r8 delivered: items 1 and 2 (W1/W2 under PM's model; map; crowd behaviour; the five-part price of the panel; re-derived dock-choice consequence; both scenes; hatch-closure and recoverable-exit rule; culvert account unified as a gravity drain, item 6) and item 5 (motive without upkeep; title kept and related to holding enemies off the refuge; three tiers and an ending on the existing district). Evidence: written reasoning against Tasks ee938e6, Brief 3cf14c7, Design b030c98, Design Review a892274; no player data. Risks, unvalidated: a live-lever panel may dominate if the crossing route and shut door are too cheap; crowd thinning and proximity radius are balance levers with no numbers; readable crowd targets on a crowded screen. Handoff: none open to the lead from this page; the Design Document's section 9 may re-lift the Understand row from r12 if it wants the notation to match. Handoff: lead lifts W1's beacon definition and precedence into §4, rewrites §1's coil sentence and §8's sequence to the state table, lifts the tier-three chain and endings table into §11, and removes the ending's salvage cost from §10; this role checks the resulting DES103 revision against these exact texts. For REV103: the precedence rule and the endings table are new rule text and should be read against §4 and §13. Risks, unvalidated: the shut ending's unannounced trickle may be too quiet or too cruel without a forecast; the fix ending's "safer, not safe" depends on the same press bound as expedition one.
	**Routing decision: answered.** Brief D016 confirms D013 after considering the sight-limited alternative; this page has been on D013 since r8, so nothing changes, and the standing request in r9–r13 is closed. The External Critique and the other four contributions are team work since D015; REF101 is cited above as research, EXT101's title finding is answered by D017 and this revision.