2026-09-15 15:55:33
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Record early equipment draft and working review F2.20
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 75 — Equipment reference | Systems is rewriting the twelve-part catalogue around visible behavior, useful combinations and meaningful carrying choices. Its reviewer has saved independent criteria and is ready for the submitted page | Draft **16:30**, range **16:00–17:15**; reviewed page **17:30**, range **16:45–18:30** |
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| 75 — Equipment reference | Draft submitted at 15:48; independent review is working through the twelve parts, combinations and rules | Draft **delivered 15:48**; reviewed page **16:30**, range **16:00–17:00** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The current proposals tackle two experience risks: making a short rescue feel like helping a person, and making the final station connection produce a lasting, perceptible payoff.
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## Delivery forecast
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Forecast **F2.19**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
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Forecast **F2.20**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
| Milestone | Target | Plausible range | Completion means |
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| Readable language journal | **Completed 15:06** | Earlier than 16:15 target | Existing journal explanation leads with player use and discovery, with current rules preserved through review |
| Readable campaign overview | **Completed 15:26** | Earlier than 16:00 target | Opening through deeper and optional play shows horde growth, discoveries and people, with current proposals distinguished |
| Readable cast and rescue map | **Completed 15:44** | Earlier than 17:00 target | Five people and fifteen scenes lead with their choices and changing relationships; current waiting places and unresolved rescue choices remain clear |
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| Readable equipment reference | Today **17:30** | **16:45–18:30** | A reader can picture the twelve parts and their combinations, find actual costs and distinguish current mechanisms from proposed alternatives |
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| Readable equipment reference | Today **16:30** | **16:00–17:00** | A reader can picture the twelve parts and their combinations, find actual costs and distinguish current mechanisms from proposed alternatives |
| Full detailed campaign design | **24 November** | **3 November–22 December** | Proposed progression, content, mysteries, ending paths and production scope developed across the campaign |
Near-term estimates have moderate confidence. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.19 records the campaign overview completed at 15:26 and the cast page at 15:44. The equipment reference is now being rewritten; its review target is 17:30. The cast review found that death before a rescue retry must preserve the current shelter, and the relevant pages now agree. The home-loop page also now correctly says that either return brings fresh hordes next expedition. The journal finished at 15:06. The reviewed scope comparison and factual reference alignment finished at 14:56. The station-completion comparison finished at 14:36. The rescue comparison was completed at 14:20. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.20 records the campaign overview completed at 15:26 and the cast page at 15:44. The equipment draft arrived at 15:48, ahead of its 16:30 target. Review is working; with the draft available early, the reviewed-page target moves from 17:30 to 16:30. The critique and single author response still need completion. The cast review found that death before a rescue retry must preserve the current shelter, and the relevant pages now agree. The home-loop page also now correctly says that either return brings fresh hordes next expedition. The journal finished at 15:06. The reviewed scope comparison and factual reference alignment finished at 14:56. The station-completion comparison finished at 14:36. The rescue comparison was completed at 14:20. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
