2026-09-15 15:34:43
Anonymous:
Record completed campaign overview and active cast rewrite F2.18
hold the flood/design plan.md ..
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The main reading path now begins with [The Game](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game), follows [three expeditions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal), returns to [the people aboard](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Coming%20Home), and opens into [discovery in the changing station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Connecting%20The%20Station). [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) explains the current examples; [Build Comparison](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Comparison) presents alternative controls and payoffs for owner reaction.
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Ten proposal or editorial packages completed review and response today: builds/expeditions, hospital story/survival, regular growth on a renewed route, a second route state after permanent source seals, the six-page reading path, the moving-scan expedition, the short-rescue comparison, the station-completion payoff, the campaign scope comparison, and the language journal. [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and the room/encounter references describe the two concrete route states. They preserve completed work while giving fresh opposition a physical route. Other seal combinations and shifted layouts remain design work.
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Eleven proposal or editorial packages completed review and response today: builds/expeditions, hospital story/survival, regular growth on a renewed route, a second route state after permanent source seals, the six-page reading path, the moving-scan expedition, the short-rescue comparison, the station-completion payoff, the campaign scope comparison, the language journal, and the whole-campaign overview. [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and the room/encounter references describe the two concrete route states. They preserve completed work while giving fresh opposition a physical route. Other seal combinations and shifted layouts remain design work.
The new Ricochet and Gravity mechanisms remain proposed replacements for parts of the detailed build rules. The [hospital-story alternatives](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hospital%20Story%20Directions) remain revisable. Completed review does not select them for the owner or establish fun, balance or duration.
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The existing [Language And Journal](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Language%20And%20Journal) page has been rewritten around what the player does: capture a clue during an expedition, pause to compare records, make a prediction and try it. The revision preserves the current observation, testimony and historical-route rules while making the pleasure and cost of discovery easier to understand. The rewrite completed its independent critique and reasoned response at 15:06. No material correction was needed; its longer visitor and scan examples retain the reasoning behind those discoveries.
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## Working now: the whole campaign
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## Ready to read: the whole campaign
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Systems submitted the rewritten [Whole Game Outline](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Whole%20Game%20Outline) at 15:10. It follows the player’s journey from the first expedition through deeper investigation and optional secrets. The page explains how fresh hordes, growing builds, useful discoveries and relationships develop together. Existing mechanics and unresolved creative choices must remain accurately represented. Its independent reviewer is now checking the full article and source preservation. The reviewed target is now 16:00 today, with its range on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
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[Whole Game Outline](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Whole%20Game%20Outline) completed review and response at 15:26. It follows the player’s journey from forced docking through deeper investigation and optional secrets. The page makes the horde scale, growing builds, useful discoveries and relationships concrete, with carried equipment and open choices preserved. The home-loop page’s old living-return clearance wording has also been corrected to fresh hordes after either return.
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## Working now: five people
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The [Cast And Short Rescue Map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Cast%20And%20Short%20Rescue%20Map) was submitted at 15:31 with the five people introduced before the long transfer rules. All fifteen scenes, their meaningful choices, home contributions and later changes of belief remain in scope. The ordinary-abort description now uses its mapped prepared waiting place; the separate owner choice about death during a crossing remains unanswered. The independent reviewer is checking the actual submitted revision against the saved criteria and original scene inventory. Draft delivered 15:31; reviewed target 17:00 today, with ranges on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
One focused critique and one response belong to each bounded outcome. The outside-edit preservation audit is complete and its factual follow-ups are published; broader readability and design readiness remain open. States and estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
