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2026-09-15 16:23:14 Anonymous: Record submitted vault expedition and earlier review forecast F2.23
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
|---|---|---|
- | 76 — Receiver Vault expedition | Author working; reviewer has independently prepared criteria and is ready for the submitted proposal | Draft **17:15**, range **16:45–18:15**; reviewed proposal **18:00**, range **17:15–19:00** |
+ | 76 — Receiver Vault expedition | Draft submitted at 16:18; independent review is working | Draft **delivered 16:18**; reviewed proposal **17:15**, range **16:45–18:00** |
| 77 — Enemy guide | Systems working; reviewer has prepared independent criteria and is ready for submission | Draft **17:15**, range **16:45–18:00**; reviewed guide **18:00**, range **17:15–19:00** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
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## Delivery forecast
- Forecast **F2.22**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
+ Forecast **F2.23**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
| Milestone | Target | Plausible range | Completion means |
|---|---|---|---|
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| Readable campaign overview | **Completed 15:26** | Earlier than 16:00 target | Opening through deeper and optional play shows horde growth, discoveries and people, with current proposals distinguished |
| Readable cast and rescue map | **Completed 15:44** | Earlier than 17:00 target | Five people and fifteen scenes lead with their choices and changing relationships; current waiting places and unresolved rescue choices remain clear |
| Readable equipment reference | **Completed 16:05** | Earlier than revised 16:30 target | A reader can picture the twelve parts and their combinations, find actual costs and distinguish current mechanisms from proposed alternatives |
- | Reviewed Receiver Vault expedition | Today **18:00** | **17:15–19:00** | A complete later expedition, ordinary growth and a major transformation used during the fight, a meaningful climax and a discovery that changes the next trip; one critique and response |
+ | Reviewed Receiver Vault expedition | Today **17:15** | **16:45–18:00** | A complete later expedition, ordinary growth and a major transformation used during the fight, a meaningful climax and a discovery that changes the next trip; one critique and response |
| Readable enemy guide | Today **18:00** | **17:15–19:00** | The nine creatures, their horde roles and two setpieces are explained through what the player sees, chooses and overcomes, with actual behaviors retained through review |
| Coherent revised design wiki | **23 September** | **21–28 September** | Readable core and supporting rules aligned; consequential choices explicit |
| Full detailed campaign design | **24 November** | **3 November–22 December** | Proposed progression, content, mysteries, ending paths and production scope developed across the campaign |
Near-term estimates have moderate confidence. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
- The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. F2.22 records the equipment guide completed at 16:05, ahead of its revised 16:30 target. The new Receiver Vault expedition and a separate enemy-guide rewrite each have a draft target of 17:15 and a reviewed target of 18:00. They can proceed independently. The overall dates remain unchanged because broader experience coverage, supporting clarity and consequential creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates and reasons remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
+ The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. F2.23 records the equipment guide completed at 16:05, ahead of its revised 16:30 target. The Receiver Vault draft arrived at 16:18, ahead of its 17:15 target; its reviewed target moves from 18:00 to 17:15. The enemy-guide rewrite continues independently toward a 17:15 draft and 18:00 reviewed version. The overall dates remain unchanged because broader experience coverage, supporting clarity and consequential creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates and reasons remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
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