2026-09-15 18:33:14
Anonymous:
Hospital-place independent review criteria ready; author working
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 81 — A hospital worth remembering | Systems is working; independent reviewer preparing criteria | Draft **20:00**, range **19:15–20:45**; reviewed proposal **21:00**, range **20:00–22:00** |
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| 81 — A hospital worth remembering | Systems is working; independent review criteria ready | Draft **20:00**, range **19:15–20:45**; reviewed proposal **21:00**, range **20:00–22:00** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The new Receiver Vault proposal tackles a different risk: a later expedition must deliver growing power and a horde climax before its quiet discovery. It uses the existing vault rooms, enemies and machinery; the new reward opportunity remains a proposal. Earlier rescue and station-completion comparisons are ready for owner reaction.
