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PMR006 checkpoint: record processed revisions, verified writes and next review baseline
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# Hold the Flood — PM Reviews
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## Last completed integrated review — PMR006, expanded campaign skeleton
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Completed 2026-09-06. [Findings and bounded handoffs](/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews/PMR006). Compared actual current sources with PMR005's exact baseline and PMR004's broader campaign assignments. Read Hub, Brief, Tasks, Team, index/log/feed and the changed specialist artifacts; verified the listed revisions against immutable raw sources by exact content equality rather than feed order or timestamps. Team and the independent Design Review were unchanged; Tasks contained new author submission notes that were preserved.
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**Verdict:** the first coherent expanded-campaign skeleton now exists: seven external districts plus refuge, a shared power/mystery explanation, concrete cross-district Collector/Head-Works consequences, campaign-facing colony choices and corrected combat examples. WLD103's targeted response, CAM101's PMR004 corrections and COL101's structural direction are accepted as delivered contributions. CMB101's PMR005 corrections are credited. Overall design acceptance is withheld: Coil duration, Spark effect, switched-state persistence, refuge Stop timing, stale ending copy and presentation-category counts still conflict; the independent critic has not reviewed Campaign r2/current package.
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Districts r4 replaces the withdrawn 3–4 hour claim with 34 baseline expeditions / 492 minutes (8.2 hours) of authored expedition beats plus eight optional expeditions / 120 minutes. PM records that as a content-backed, unmeasured drafting hypothesis—not sufficient-scope proof, measured playtime or an owner-approved commitment. The Exchange remains outline-level. EXT X31's need for an explicit asset strategy is accepted, but its three-silhouette count is not: current sources alternately say three, six and eight. D025 requires one category list and a bounded free-source/licence audit before any owner asset request.
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Q49 is accepted and corrected on the Hub: the obsolete “start here / 91 minutes” GDD instruction was removed while the legacy draft remains linked as mechanical provenance. No additional agent is needed. No owner relay, creative decision or asset approval is currently required; development remains gated.
Individual enemy and district pages were read where needed to verify interface changes. Unchanged Equipment sources remain governed by PMR004/PMR005; no new acceptance is inferred. The report does not certify Campaign's claimed ledgers, outside asset availability, game feel, balance, readability, performance or enjoyment.
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### Verified coordination writes before checkpoint
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Each target was freshly read immediately before its narrow transformation, author-owned submission blocks were preserved, and the resulting raw Markdown was fetched and compared exactly. These hashes identify PM output, not new specialist progress.
**Next review:** compare actual author responses with these exact snapshots. Prioritize a single countersigned effect table, persistence/Stop reconciliation, corrected ending copy, completed Exchange, one presentation-category list and a revision-specific independent critique. Do not repeat this review for unchanged status text or assume that posting assignments wakes specialist chats. Design only; no code, build, prototype, implementation, simulation, playtest, asset creation, purchase or agent creation occurred.
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## Last completed focused review — PMR005, combat reconciliation
Completed 2026-09-06. [Findings and dispositions](/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews/PMR005). Compared actual source snapshots to PMR004's scoped review plus PMU005's verified repair baseline. Hub, Brief, Tasks and Team were unchanged on intake; index/log/feed revealed changed combat/role pages and reported editor resumption. Read actual changes, Walker and relevant surrounding rules; confirmed the revisions below by exact immutable-source equality, not feed order or timestamps. Current Campaign, World, Equipment, Colony and Independent Review sources were unchanged; no new acceptance of those artifacts is inferred.
