2026-09-15 15:13:09
Anonymous:
Record campaign overview submitted and earlier review forecast F2.17
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 73 — Whole-campaign overview | Systems is rewriting the existing overview as a player journey; independent review criteria and sources are prepared | Draft **16:00**, range **15:40–16:40**; reviewed page **17:00**, range **16:15–18:00** |
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| 73 — Whole-campaign overview | Draft submitted at 15:10; independent review is now working | Draft **delivered 15:10**; reviewed page **16:00**, range **15:30–17:00** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The current proposals tackle two experience risks: making a short rescue feel like helping a person, and making the final station connection produce a lasting, perceptible payoff.
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## Delivery forecast
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Forecast **F2.16**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
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Forecast **F2.17**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
| Milestone | Target | Plausible range | Completion means |
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| Station-completion comparison | **Completed 14:36** | Earlier than 16:00 target | Two reviewed consequences of the last connection, with the next home visit and expedition |
| Costed campaign comparison | **Completed 14:56** | Earlier than 17:00 target | Named retained, moved and removed experiences; current counts and historical allowance distinguished |
| Readable language journal | **Completed 15:06** | Earlier than 16:15 target | Existing journal explanation leads with player use and discovery, with current rules preserved through review |
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| Readable campaign overview | Today **17:00** | **16:15–18:00** | Opening through deeper and optional play shows horde growth, discoveries and people, with current proposals distinguished |
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| Readable campaign overview | Today **16:00** | **15:30–17:00** | Opening through deeper and optional play shows horde growth, discoveries and people, with current proposals distinguished |
| Full detailed campaign design | **24 November** | **3 November–22 December** | Proposed progression, content, mysteries, ending paths and production scope developed across the campaign |
Near-term estimates have moderate confidence. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.16 records the journal completed at 15:06 and starts the whole-campaign overview. The reviewed scope comparison and factual reference alignment finished at 14:56. The station-completion comparison finished at 14:36. The rescue comparison was completed at 14:20. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.17 records the journal completed at 15:06 and the campaign overview submitted at 15:10. Its draft arrived early, so the reviewed-version target moves from 17:00 to 16:00; review and the single response remain to be completed. The reviewed scope comparison and factual reference alignment finished at 14:56. The station-completion comparison finished at 14:36. The rescue comparison was completed at 14:20. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
