2026-09-15 12:34:37
Anonymous:
Record completed story and survival packet and combat author correction
hold the flood/design plan.md ..
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- [Build Comparison](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Comparison): three builds with different ordinary play, growth, manual specials, physical costs and discoveries using their parts in the station.
- [Expedition Proposal](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal): three successive outings with fresh growth, meaningful hordes, changing objectives and permanent progress.
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Both proposals completed an independent critique, one response per author and PM checks. They are ready for owner reaction; the new build exceptions still need detailed reconciliation. Systems is now developing a concrete growth rhythm and a renewed route through existing rooms, with independent review criteria saved before its draft. In parallel, a separate reviewer is examining the revised hospital-story and survival proposals on their current sources. Both workstreams continue while the owner chooses which build direction to deepen first. Actual task states and delivery estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
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Both proposals completed an independent critique, one response per author and PM checks. They are ready for owner reaction; the new build exceptions still need detailed reconciliation. Systems has submitted a concrete growth rhythm and renewed route through existing rooms and is making its one response to independent review. In parallel, the [hospital-story](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hospital%20Story%20Directions) and [survival/loadout](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Survival%20And%20Loadout) proposals completed their review and response. They are ready for owner reaction; the alternative story explanations remain revisable. Combat design and its supporting pages continue while the owner chooses which build direction to deepen first. Actual task states and delivery estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
