2026-09-15 16:50:37
Anonymous:
Record independent upgrade review criteria ready
hold the flood/design plan.md ..
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Design support is developing two expeditions with the same physical equipment but different earned upgrade choices, including a useful hybrid. The first Echoing Arc versus Rebound Disc choice already exists; this proposal works through repeated offers, how earlier selections change later possibilities, and what each declined option would have bought. It will compare that freedom with the clearer teaching and lower production cost of a fixed ladder.
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The author is working and an independent reviewer is preparing criteria. The draft target is **18:30** today and the reviewed proposal target is **19:45**, with plausible ranges on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress). This develops a shared choice problem while keeping all three proposed build families available for owner reaction.
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The author is working; the independent reviewer has saved criteria and is ready for the draft. The draft target is **18:30** today and the reviewed proposal target is **19:45**, with plausible ranges on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress). This develops a shared choice problem while keeping all three proposed build families available for owner reaction.
One focused critique and one response belong to each bounded outcome. The outside-edit preservation audit is complete and its factual follow-ups are published; broader readability and design readiness remain open. States and estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
