2026-09-15 12:22:46
Anonymous:
Resume story and survival review alongside combat design; forecast F2.3
hold the flood/design plan.md ..
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- [Build Comparison](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Comparison): three builds with different ordinary play, growth, manual specials, physical costs and discoveries using their parts in the station.
- [Expedition Proposal](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal): three successive outings with fresh growth, meaningful hordes, changing objectives and permanent progress.
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Both proposals completed an independent critique, one response per author and PM checks. They are ready for owner reaction; the new build exceptions still need detailed reconciliation. Systems is now developing a concrete growth rhythm and a renewed route through existing rooms, with independent review criteria saved before its draft. This work continues while the owner chooses which build direction to deepen first. Actual task states and delivery estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
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Both proposals completed an independent critique, one response per author and PM checks. They are ready for owner reaction; the new build exceptions still need detailed reconciliation. Systems is now developing a concrete growth rhythm and a renewed route through existing rooms, with independent review criteria saved before its draft. In parallel, a separate reviewer is examining the revised hospital-story and survival proposals on their current sources. Both workstreams continue while the owner chooses which build direction to deepen first. Actual task states and delivery estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
## What makes a proposal ready
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## After the core proposal
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The selected renewal and regular-growth rules are aligned in the main combat, persistence, equipment and encounter references. Next, map that growth onto real routes and reconcile the selected build directions with their detailed mechanics. Then develop the hospital and alien setting, characters, short rescues, language discoveries and story consequences through concrete scenes. Present the owner with consequential creative alternatives; handle routine consistency and readability within the team.
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The selected renewal and regular-growth rules are aligned in the main combat, persistence, equipment and encounter references. Next, map that growth onto real routes and reconcile the selected build directions with their detailed mechanics. Develop the hospital and alien setting, characters, short rescues, language discoveries and story consequences through concrete scenes alongside that combat work. Present the owner with consequential creative alternatives; handle routine consistency and readability within the team.
Use [Open Decisions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Open%20Decisions) as the issue index. Its recommendations remain proposals, and its categories overlap. The team should not wait for fourteen separate owner answers or assume that every criticized rule needs wholesale replacement.
