2026-09-09 18:45:18
Anonymous:
Record early pitch submission and current review dependency
hold the flood/progress.md ..
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# Hold The Horde — Progress
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**Work resumed on 9 September 2026. Updated 18:39 Jerusalem.** The team is correcting the game direction following the owner's review. Automatic PM checks are active.
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**Work resumed on 9 September 2026. Updated 18:45 Jerusalem.** The team is correcting the game direction following the owner's review. Automatic PM checks are active.
The next owner delivery is a revised pitch, an expedition with convincing horde pressure and discovery, and three spectacular build examples. It must address all three blockers: survivorslike scale and urgency, human-readable explanations, and concrete reasons for fun, challenge and emotional payoff.
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| Task | Owner | Status | Target, Jerusalem |
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| 41 — Hordes and three builds | Systems | Working; receipt confirmed | Today 19:15; range 18:55–19:45 |
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| 42 — Revised pitch and expedition | Design Lead | Working; receipt confirmed | Today 19:15; range 18:55–19:45 |
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| 42 — Revised pitch and expedition | Design Lead | Submitted at 18:40; PM read, corrections needed | First draft delivered early; response follows combined review |
| 43 — Independent review | Reviewer | Criteria saved; ready to review both drafts | Combined critique 20:15, range 19:40–20:45; 45–75 minutes after both submissions |
| 39–40 — Earlier mechanism/discovery details | Systems / Lead | Parked, unaccepted drafts | Reassess after the new direction |
| Clear wiki navigation and current reports | PM | In progress; reading map prepared | Alongside the corrected proposal |
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**43 tracked design outcomes: 37 preparation-closed, 1 reopened readiness outcome, 2 parked drafts, 3 assigned correction outcomes.** All three roles have confirmed receipt: Systems and Lead are drafting; the Reviewer has saved independent criteria and awaits the drafts. These counts describe writing and review outcomes, not the percentage of the game complete. The temporary wiki assistant's reading map is PM support, not another design outcome or permanent role.
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**43 tracked design outcomes: 37 preparation-closed, 1 reopened readiness outcome, 2 parked drafts, 3 assigned correction outcomes.** All three roles have confirmed receipt: Systems is drafting; Lead has submitted and stopped; the Reviewer has saved independent criteria and awaits both submissions. These counts describe writing and review outcomes, not the percentage of the game complete. The temporary wiki assistant's reading map is PM support, not another design outcome or permanent role.
