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# Language Design Evidence
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This comparison uses primary accounts of two shipped language-decipherment games. It separates described mechanics, design intentions, developer-reported observations and proposals for Hold The Horde. It does not establish that our version will be enjoyable, readable, affordable or long enough.
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This comparison uses primary accounts of two shipped language-decipherment games. It separates described mechanics, design intentions, developer-reported observations and proposals for Hold The Horde.
## Heaven's Vault
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The player chooses English candidate meanings for unfamiliar words. Glyphs contain smaller elements that can suggest relationships; subsequent inscriptions are selected or generated with the player's vocabulary progress and location in mind. The developers describe translation choices that can advance the story without waiting for a correctness gate. Guesses affect interpretation and narrative consequences; further context can expose a mistaken reading. This is not evidence that every guess is consequence-free or impossible to test. The interviews do not document every later dictionary-confirmation or companion-hint rule. [Developer interview, Game Developer, 17 April 2019](https://www.gamedeveloper.com/design/how-inkle-developed-its-own-ancient-language-for-i-heaven-s-vault-i-), [Ingold and Humfrey interview, MCV, 16 April 2019](https://mcvuk.com/development-news/heavens-vault-how-inkle-wrote-its-own-herstory/), [inkle's official description](https://www.inklestudios.com/heavensvault/).
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The player chooses English candidate meanings for unfamiliar words. Glyphs contain smaller elements that can suggest relationships; subsequent inscriptions are selected or generated with the player's vocabulary progress and location in mind. The developers describe translation choices that can advance the story without waiting for a correctness gate. Guesses affect interpretation and narrative consequences; further context can expose a mistaken reading. [Developer interview, Game Developer, 17 April 2019](https://www.gamedeveloper.com/design/how-inkle-developed-its-own-ancient-language-for-i-heaven-s-vault-i-), [Ingold and Humfrey interview, MCV, 16 April 2019](https://mcvuk.com/development-news/heavens-vault-how-inkle-wrote-its-own-herstory/), [inkle's official description](https://www.inklestudios.com/heavensvault/).
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These accounts describe a goal of making the player feel they are translating and forming their own understanding. The MCV interview includes a developer impression that players' guesses are often good; that is not a published accuracy dataset. Its account of lengthy mechanic development indicates authoring burden, without measuring the cost of our proposal. [MCV interview](https://mcvuk.com/development-news/heavens-vault-how-inkle-wrote-its-own-herstory/).
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These accounts describe a goal of making the player feel they are translating and forming their own understanding. The MCV interview includes a developer impression that players' guesses are often good. Its account of lengthy mechanic development indicates authoring burden. [MCV interview](https://mcvuk.com/development-news/heavens-vault-how-inkle-wrote-its-own-herstory/).
For our design, candidate meanings and useful feedback need not eliminate interpretation or application. A static station layout also does not logically rule out adaptive content selection. The relevant constraint is that previously recorded evidence and established world state remain coherent. We should not silently rewrite an inscription already observed in order to correct the player's vocabulary.
## Chants of Sennaar
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Moya describes a design rule that each word appears in at least two different situations, alongside notes, hypotheses and further exploration. He names validation inspired by Return of the Obra Dinn and automatic translation of complete sentences. That interview does not specify the exact validation triggers, batch policy or uncertainty that remains after confirmation; those details cannot be supplied by assumption. [Moya interview, Game Developer, 29 February 2024](https://www.gamedeveloper.com/design/immersing-players-in-the-culture-of-a-people-with-language-puzzler-chants-of-sennaar).
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Moya describes a design rule that each word appears in at least two different situations, alongside notes, hypotheses and further exploration. He names validation inspired by Return of the Obra Dinn and automatic translation of complete sentences. [Moya interview, Game Developer, 29 February 2024](https://www.gamedeveloper.com/design/immersing-players-in-the-culture-of-a-people-with-language-puzzler-chants-of-sennaar).
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The same interview reports substantial playtesting, difficult words or sections, and additional occurrences, clues, locations or characters introduced in response. This is qualitative developer-reported evidence of an iterative process. The cited material provides no public dataset that validates a particular redundancy rule for Hold The Horde. Moya's separate account connects word introduction, culture, grammar, puzzles and level layout, describing a progression from more concrete language toward abstraction. [Moya interview](https://www.gamedeveloper.com/design/immersing-players-in-the-culture-of-a-people-with-language-puzzler-chants-of-sennaar), [Moya's authored Deep Dive, 23 November 2023](https://www.gamedeveloper.com/design/deep-dive-the-visual-tapestry-of-i-chants-of-sennaar-i-).
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The same interview reports substantial playtesting, difficult words or sections, and additional occurrences, clues, locations or characters introduced in response. Moya's separate account connects word introduction, culture, grammar, puzzles and level layout, describing a progression from more concrete language toward abstraction. [Moya interview](https://www.gamedeveloper.com/design/immersing-players-in-the-culture-of-a-people-with-language-puzzler-chants-of-sennaar), [Moya's authored Deep Dive, 23 November 2023](https://www.gamedeveloper.com/design/deep-dive-the-visual-tapestry-of-i-chants-of-sennaar-i-).
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The per-word rule is a useful precedent, not a proven minimum per sign or a guarantee that every missed clue can be recovered. Our survivors can supply testimony and context; whether any speak an alien language is still a design question. Gathering and applying information can happen under oxygen and horde pressure, while reading the journal pauses the world. The sources do not establish that observation in the comparison games is always safe.
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The per-word rule is a useful precedent. Our survivors can supply testimony and context. Gathering and applying information can happen under oxygen and horde pressure, while reading the journal pauses the world.
## Implications for this project
- **Testability is broader than machine feedback.** Later inscriptions, testimony and environmental consequences can challenge a reading. A small set of examples can support an inference without proving a unique grammar.
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- **Plan further learning opportunities.** The developers describe repeated contexts and adaptive content intended to support learning. Neither account guarantees recovery for every player or establishes that any two examples plus an exception are sufficient.
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- **Plan further learning opportunities.** The developers describe repeated contexts and adaptive content intended to support learning.
- **Define exactly what assistance confirms.** Candidate meanings, visual comparisons, attributed survivor help and factual outcome records can leave substantial interpretation and action to the player. Withholding a correctness label does not uniquely create discovery or ownership.
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- **Keep evidence limits visible.** The existing games' mechanics and development experiences inform alternatives; they do not validate this game's fun, balance, content burden or campaign duration. The rejected death-count-to-creature example cannot be inherited as a settled mechanism.
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- **Keep evidence limits visible.** The existing games' mechanics and development experiences inform alternatives. The rejected death-count-to-creature example is not a settled mechanism.
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The practical choice is what feedback appears, when it appears, and which decisions remain. Bounded factual confirmation can coexist with uncertain interpretation. [Language and Journal](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Language%20and%20Journal) proposes recording an observed destination or incomplete attempt without grading arbitrary notes; [Language Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Language%20Expedition) supplies a written use case. Their precise rules remain proposals, subject to the owner brief and the focused review process.
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The practical choice is what feedback appears, when it appears, and which decisions remain. Limited factual confirmation can coexist with uncertain interpretation. [Language and Journal](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Language%20and%20Journal) proposes recording an observed destination or incomplete attempt without grading arbitrary notes; [Language Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Language%20Expedition) supplies a written use case. Owner decisions are recorded in the [Owner Brief](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Brief).
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## Open questions
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- Whether any survivor speaks an alien language.
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- Whether any two examples plus an exception are sufficient, and whether every player can recover a missed clue.
