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Record astronaut draft in review and advance delivery forecast
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## Ready to read
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**Twenty proposal or editorial packages have been completed today.** The latest finished at **19:23 Jerusalem time**: [Open Decisions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Open%20Decisions). It gives one current account of the remaining concerns, with concrete examples and alternatives. Real criticism remains visible; stale reference questions and the missing original shift-comparison link are repaired. The next proposal gives the astronaut two contrasting personalities through the same existing scenes. The separate short-rescue choice remains open.
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**Twenty proposal or editorial packages have been completed today.** The latest finished at **19:23 Jerusalem time**: [Open Decisions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Open%20Decisions). It gives one current account of the remaining concerns, with concrete examples and alternatives. Real criticism remains visible; stale reference questions and the missing original shift-comparison link are repaired. The new [astronaut comparison](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Who%20Is%20the%20Astronaut) arrived at **19:37** and is in independent review: two contrasting personalities through the same existing scenes, alongside a mostly silent alternative. The separate short-rescue choice remains open.
Start with [The Game](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game), continue through [three expeditions into the observation ward](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal), then [Coming Home](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Coming%20Home) and [Discovery in a Changing Station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Connecting%20The%20Station). For combat, follow [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) into [Three Ways to Break a Horde](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Comparison).
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 83 — Who is the astronaut? | Character writer working; independent review criteria ready, awaiting draft | Draft **20:30**, range **20:15–21:00**; reviewed **21:30**, range **21:00–22:30** |
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| 83 — Who is the astronaut? | Draft submitted; author stopped; independent reviewer working | Draft delivered **19:37**; reviewed **20:30**, range **20:00–21:15** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The new Receiver Vault proposal tackles a different risk: a later expedition must deliver growing power and a horde climax before its quiet discovery. It uses the existing vault rooms, enemies and machinery; the new reward opportunity remains a proposal. Earlier rescue and station-completion comparisons are ready for owner reaction.
The tracker contains **83 outcomes: 79 preparation outcomes closed, 1 current outcome, 1 readiness assessment reopened and 2 parked**. The completed preservation audit and its corrections belong within outcome 38; they do not close overall readiness. These counts are not a percentage of the finished game. Outcomes 39–40 remain parked and unaccepted pending the core corrections.
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The messaging directory did not list either original Claude task at **19:18**. Temporary GPT support is writing the character comparison, with independent review criteria ready for the draft. Systems has completed the hospital pass. This is a messaging observation, not a judgment about the apps' health. No new permanent agent or manual forwarding is needed for this work.
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The messaging directory did not list either original Claude task at **19:18**. The temporary GPT writer has submitted the character comparison and stopped; its separate reviewer is working from independently saved criteria. Systems has completed the hospital pass. This is a messaging observation, not a judgment about the apps' health. No new permanent agent or manual forwarding is needed for this work.
## Delivery forecast
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Forecast **F2.35**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
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Forecast **F2.36**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
| Milestone | Target | Plausible range | Completion means |
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| Your first useful invention | **Completed 18:28** | Earlier than revised 19:10 target | A newcomer can picture a useful first equipment discovery, the same part's station tradeoff, crowd pressure, relief and the next human mystery |
| A hospital worth remembering | **Completed 18:55** | Earlier than revised 19:30 target | Four existing [clinical spaces](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Station%20Room%20And%20Module%20Inventory#region-2-clinical-exchange-r11r20) become memorable places of care, crowd pressure and disturbing discovery while preserving their current rules |
| A current decision guide | **Completed 19:23** | Earlier than revised 20:00 target | Current proposals and choices explained, substantive objections retained, routine reference repairs verified |
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| Who is the astronaut? | Draft **20:30**; reviewed **21:30** | Draft **20:15–21:00**; reviewed **21:00–22:30** | Two contrasting personalities in the same three existing scenes, plus a simpler alternative; one critique and response |
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| Who is the astronaut? | Draft delivered **19:37**; reviewed **20:30** | Reviewed **20:00–21:15** | Two contrasting personalities in the same three existing scenes, plus a simpler alternative; one critique and response |
| Full detailed campaign design | **24 November** | **3 November–22 December** | Proposed progression, content, mysteries, ending paths and production scope developed across the campaign |
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The character-comparison estimate has moderate confidence. Its writer and reviewer have acknowledged work; differences in motivation and voice still need writing and review. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
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The character-comparison estimate has moderate confidence: the draft is complete and its single independent critique is underway. Any response and final integration remain. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. F2.35 records the decision guide completed at 19:23, ahead of its revised 20:00 target, and adds the astronaut comparison. That proposal addresses a gap left by more detailed machines and survivor scenes: what this person wanted before docking, what they enjoy and what could challenge their values. It uses existing events and leaves the revival mystery and pending owner choices open. The overall dates remain unchanged because broader experience coverage, supporting clarity and consequential creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates and reasons remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. F2.36 records the astronaut draft delivered at 19:37, earlier than its 20:30 target, and advances the reviewed comparison from 21:30 to 20:30. The decision guide completed at 19:23, ahead of its revised 20:00 target. The astronaut comparison addresses a gap left by more detailed machines and survivor scenes: what this person wanted before docking, what they enjoy and what could challenge their values. It uses existing events and leaves the revival mystery and pending owner choices open. The overall dates remain unchanged because broader experience coverage, supporting clarity and consequential creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates and reasons remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
