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Record actual Story30 submission463 and preauthorised focused review status
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| Combat and contested work | Usable [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and [combat-state contract27](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20And%20Enemy%20Roster), prepared443 | Remaining interface/edge-case matrix for controllers, target assistance, combined attacks, oxygen actions and recovery | Shared first-pass state sheet prepared19:34 atf1fe0d9a. Target assistance, multiple ordinary controllers and field healing remain proposals; exact timing and readability are unvalidated. |
| Enemies, encounters and traps | Usable [roster/pressure contract27](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20And%20Enemy%20Roster), prepared443, alongside five [trap families](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Traps%20And%20Encounter%20Progression) | Ten encounter-placement and twelve placed-mechanism v1 briefs: actual geometry/populations, cue variants, warning/work stages, reset/rearm/persistence and recovery; exhaustive variants remain M4 | Six ordinary/three special roles and two setpieces are prepared within ten encounters; ten of twelve mechanism slots allocated. Full inventories are still partial, and counts/origins remain replaceable proposals. |
| Two alien languages and discovery | Usable [Two Language Discovery Map29](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map), preparation-closed459 atdf0f48f5, alongside existing journal/utterance examples | Actual clue/string and physical-state variants, placed-room inputs/controls and both-order missed-evidence recovery briefs; final language origins and story remain unselected | Four proposed chains and two-language/two-register classification prepared20:23:52 after one focused critique/response. One local iris plate/input/state variant counted within the existing mechanism. Complete room placements, every clue permutation and comprehension validation remain unfinished. |
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| Story, endings and corruption | Partial: existing story/corruption alternatives; [Story And Ending Map30](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map) authoring461 | Proposed causal spine and four mystery/personal chains; evidence/action map across apparent, deeper and optional-secret layers; visible choices, human consequences, both regional orders and unique-scope ledger | Systems sole writer; receiving20:24:58.675 verified. Criteriab1a66b77 registered460 before draft; reviewer actively listening under462, with one critique pre-authorized on actual source/hash and author STOP; no draft review started. Draft21:15(20:50–21:45), reviewed22:15(21:30–23:00), today8Sep Jerusalem. Final canon, ending count, mortality/corruption and full-station payoff remain unselected; no owner answer is inferred. |
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| Story, endings and corruption | Partial: existing story/corruption alternatives; [Story And Ending Map30](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map) submitted463, review under462 | Proposed causal spine and four mystery/personal chains; evidence/action map across apparent, deeper and optional-secret layers; visible choices, human consequences, both regional orders and unique-scope ledger | Systems STOPPED after draft463 at20:30:02, sourcee902a631; one review underway under462 against unchanged pre-draft criteriab1a66b77. Draft21:15 target achieved early; reviewed22:15(21:30–23:00) remains forecast, today8Sep Jerusalem. Final canon, ending count, mortality/corruption and full-station payoff remain unselected; no owner answer is inferred. |
| Authored cast and short rescue | Two [first-survivor alternatives](/Hold%20The%20Flood/First%20Survivor) and local examples | Five SMALL cast briefs: motives, disagreements, bounded knowledge, home contribution, three-scene arc and short rescue outcomes | The first-survivor choice and global mortality affect specific branches. Other characters and living crossings can proceed. |
| Colony and home projects | Usable [Home And Colony Loop28](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Home%20And%20Colony%20Loop), preparation-closed450 at5bff3436, alongside Coming Home/Home Projects | Exact fixture/control and cue briefs, participant/facility state integration and owner-dependent management/economy branches; five final cast arcs/15scenes remain in the separate cast inventory | Closed20:01:12 Jerusalem after one focused critique/response. Living/death return, deliberate storage/sharing, refill, five optional projects and loan/reclaim are prepared, with two reused/three new projects and three new fixed ship fixtures. Counts/names/benefits remain proposed; first-survivor selection and gameplay validation remain open. |
| Information, controls and accessibility | Usable [first-pass contract](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Player%20Information) | Cue/interaction inventory, journal/manifest structure and option/default interactions, including non-colour/non-audio equivalents | Most work can proceed. Mechanical uncertainties affect their particular displays. Full journal pause is settled. Existing article ownership must be respected. |
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| Window, Jerusalem dates | Planned result | Staffing/dependency |
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| 8 Sep | Language29 prepared459; home-parent compatibility456 complete; Story30 authoring461 | PM and GPT Systems work continues; one native Story30 send and receiving20:24:58.675 verified. Independent criteria registered460; reviewer actively listening under462; one critique starts only on actual source/hash and author STOP, not yet reviewing a draft. Both original Claude roles stay paused; specialist setup9–10Sep remains planned, not active. |
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| 8 Sep | Language29 prepared459; home-parent compatibility456 complete; Story30 submitted463 | PM and GPT review work continues; Systems STOPPED after the20:30:02 draft. One focused review underway under462 against unchanged criteria registered460; no acceptance yet. Both original Claude roles stay paused; specialist setup9–10Sep remains planned, not active. |
| 9–11 Sep, core buffer to 14 Sep | Shared core rules and identity requirements; start region, cast, language and production work | Two additional specialist setups planned 9–10 Sep. Ready scopes, not provider availability alone, determine assignments. |
| 14–18 Sep | Domain designs and finite inventories sufficiently concrete for cross-domain review | Content counts and major story/mechanism choices must be dispositioned or visibly provisional. |
| Target 22 Sep; likely 18–29 Sep | Complete first-pass wiki with integrated interfaces and a development handoff outline | PM integration and review are on the critical path; more writers do not remove that work. |
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Track deliverable and depth separately: first-pass rule set, finite content inventory, and later implementation. Count a shared survivor scene/colony project/clue/region objective once, then estimate only its distinct additional work. Keep package review/response, PM cross-page integration and whole-game coherence review separate without double counting. Production24's response explicitly assigns the24module/40room/12mechanism v1 brief minimums to one20–34author-hour package, beyond objective allocation. This retains the placed-mechanism obligation rather than silently deferring it. Detailed campaign authoring extends these briefs; do not charge both full depths. See [Production Scope](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Production%20Scope) for the proposed revised144–247role-hour v1 allowance and separate review/response/integration; it is the dated8Sep planning estimate, not logged labor or an automatically current remaining balance; subtract accepted scope before recomputing the remainder.
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This map is based on the current owner brief, Whole Game Outline revised through narrow alignment432 at2d6de3c0, the linked owning articles and a source-by-source PM coverage audit. The catalogue was subsequently read at submission396, received one focused review/response397/399 and was preparation-closed400 at revision737b3cfd. Outcome21 trap/encounter and22 handoff first passes were closed410;23 save/content-state closed417 at18:09:56 Jerusalem, final438cdf35. Production24 closed423 after scoped response421/422; Regional Discovery Map25 closed426 after response425 at3acda018. Its objective map leaves the domain partial pending24module/40room briefs. Acquisition26 closed434 at18:57:01, finalf5f6d768, after actual429, one focused critique431, the verified author response and PM’s paragraph-only maintenance433. Late notice436 records pre-maintenancef7ede725 rather than a rollback. PM now classifies equipment/acquisition as a usable first-pass contract, with source-fixture detail and exceptions still required. Combat And Enemy Roster27 closed443 at19:34, finalf1fe0d9a, after one focused critique and the442 response. PM now classifies the existing enemy/encounter/trap category as usable first-pass; the already usable combat category is not counted again. Exact40room/ten-encounter/twelve-mechanism inventories remain incomplete. Home And Colony Loop28 closed450 at20:01:12, final5bff3436, after one focused critique and449response. Home/colony was thereby classified usable first-pass; five final cast arcs/15scenes and exact fixture/control details remain unfinished. Two Language Discovery Map29 closed459 at20:23:52, finaldf0f48f5, after one focused critique and458response. Only the existing language/discovery category now advances, bringing the current total to11usable/4partial. Story And Ending Map30 is authoring461 with pre-assignment criteriab1a66b77 registered460; assignment is not a prepared story contract. Narrow legacy04 Discovery114e9267/Expedition836ab2ae integration is verified443; global04 remains open. Scope estimates are reviewed planning assumptions, not validated labor or adopted content counts. The separately found Rescue Shift Proposal and Station Assembly Example remain unadopted intake407, not completed shared integration. The management checkpoint retains the exact inspected source revisions. No page count, model agreement or desk review establishes fun, balance, usability, performance or campaign duration.
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This map is based on the current owner brief, Whole Game Outline revised through narrow alignment432 at2d6de3c0, the linked owning articles and a source-by-source PM coverage audit. The catalogue was subsequently read at submission396, received one focused review/response397/399 and was preparation-closed400 at revision737b3cfd. Outcome21 trap/encounter and22 handoff first passes were closed410;23 save/content-state closed417 at18:09:56 Jerusalem, final438cdf35. Production24 closed423 after scoped response421/422; Regional Discovery Map25 closed426 after response425 at3acda018. Its objective map leaves the domain partial pending24module/40room briefs. Acquisition26 closed434 at18:57:01, finalf5f6d768, after actual429, one focused critique431, the verified author response and PM’s paragraph-only maintenance433. Late notice436 records pre-maintenancef7ede725 rather than a rollback. PM now classifies equipment/acquisition as a usable first-pass contract, with source-fixture detail and exceptions still required. Combat And Enemy Roster27 closed443 at19:34, finalf1fe0d9a, after one focused critique and the442 response. PM now classifies the existing enemy/encounter/trap category as usable first-pass; the already usable combat category is not counted again. Exact40room/ten-encounter/twelve-mechanism inventories remain incomplete. Home And Colony Loop28 closed450 at20:01:12, final5bff3436, after one focused critique and449response. Home/colony was thereby classified usable first-pass; five final cast arcs/15scenes and exact fixture/control details remain unfinished. Two Language Discovery Map29 closed459 at20:23:52, finaldf0f48f5, after one focused critique and458response. Only the existing language/discovery category now advances, bringing the current total to11usable/4partial. Story And Ending Map30 was submitted463 at20:30:02, sourcee902a631, with pre-assignment criteriab1a66b77 registered460; one review is underway under462 and Systems STOPPED. Submission is not a prepared story contract. Narrow legacy04 Discovery114e9267/Expedition836ab2ae integration is verified443; global04 remains open. Scope estimates are reviewed planning assumptions, not validated labor or adopted content counts. The separately found Rescue Shift Proposal and Station Assembly Example remain unadopted intake407, not completed shared integration. The management checkpoint retains the exact inspected source revisions. No page count, model agreement or desk review establishes fun, balance, usability, performance or campaign duration.
