2026-09-15 14:07:33
Anonymous:
Rescue draft delivered; single critique working
hold the flood/progress.md ..
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 69 — Rescue under pressure | Systems Designer received the assignment and is working; independent review criteria are saved | Draft **14:30**, range **14:15–15:00**; reviewed proposal **15:15**, range **14:45–16:15** |
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| 69 — Rescue under pressure | Draft delivered 14:03; independent critique in progress | Reviewed proposal **15:15**, range **14:45–16:15** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The next proposal tackles another experience risk: making a short rescue feel like helping a person, with two clear alternatives for death during the crossing.
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| Moving-scan proposal | **Delivered 13:39** | Earlier than 14:15 target | Concrete location, rising fight, build climax, discovery and next trip |
| Reviewed moving-scan proposal | **Completed 14:01** | Earlier than 15:30 target | One critique, one response and verified integration across six articles |
| Outside-edit preservation audit | **Completed 13:47; follow-up corrections 13:52** | Earlier than 14:15 report target | All 58 captured changes inspected with provenance; identified factual/preservation defects corrected |
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| Short-rescue proposal | Today **14:30** | **14:15–15:00** | One personal rescue scene and two comparable failure approaches |
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| Short-rescue proposal | **Delivered 14:03** | Earlier than 14:30 target | One personal rescue scene and two comparable failure approaches |
| Reviewed short-rescue proposal | Today **15:15** | **14:45–16:15** | One critique and response; an understandable owner choice with costs |
| Full detailed campaign design | **24 November** | **3 November–22 December** | Proposed progression, content, mysteries, ending paths and production scope developed across the campaign |
