2026-09-10 17:26:47
Anonymous:
Remove review history and align superseded prose with current design rules
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On success, the player removes the Impact Dynamo from the sampling loop and frees the pressure regulator core. If both will not fit, they choose between immediate build change and ship readiness, drop another carried object deliberately, or return for the remaining item; death would bring everything still carried home but shift the station. Back aboard, the regulator advances objective 10's visible checklist, while Dynamo enables local impacts to feed storage rather than merely increasing damage. A present survivor may revise one attributed claim after seeing the ledger; without that cast choice, the journal still records that the named transfer happened later than an earlier dated record. The expedition changes a build, a ship action, and one historical question without declaring why the transfer occurred.
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## Reuse, scope, and self-check
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## Reuse and scope
The twelve objectives are cross-listed content, not twelve isolated production stacks. Objective 6 reuses the Language Expedition's runs/pairs, Traps' Breath Bank, a route crowd, the catalogue's Dynamo, one ship assembly, and a conditional survivor consequence. Objective 9 is the existing regulator-gallery chain rather than a new second-language system. Its five A/B occurrences and three address-slot comparisons are room-level clue placements counted in the objective 5/7 language-chain and room ledgers, not a hidden thirteenth objective or free learned state. Objectives 3 and 12 reuse the same face/join vocabulary at different depth. A room, scene, chain, encounter, reward, or assembly hosted by one objective is counted once in its owning inventory.
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Self-check: all twelve rows name a player action, entry/defer rule, useful return/later use, pressure or capacity tradeoff, and durable state versus knowledge. Both orders contain all twelve objectives without a circular gate. Builders' runs and visitor pairs each support a physical prediction and correction path; the second-language utterance register remains a relationship to settle, not a third guaranteed language. Fork, Stride, Dynamo, Nozzle, Barrier, Capacitor, and Arc behavior stays within current catalogue rules. At least Fork, Stride, Dynamo, and Nozzle change possible actions rather than add a stat tier. Carried property returns on death; consumed or installed state does not duplicate. Rescue is one short crossing; no person, treatment, whole-station connection, final departure, or story interpretation is mandatory here.
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**Coverage.** all twelve rows name a player action, entry/defer rule, useful return/later use, pressure or capacity tradeoff, and durable state versus knowledge. Both orders contain all twelve objectives without a circular gate. Builders' runs and visitor pairs each support a physical prediction and correction path; the second-language utterance register remains a relationship to settle, not a third guaranteed language. Fork, Stride, Dynamo, Nozzle, Barrier, Capacitor, and Arc behavior stays within current catalogue rules. At least Fork, Stride, Dynamo, and Nozzle change possible actions rather than add a stat tier. Carried property returns on death; consumed or installed state does not duplicate. Rescue is one short crossing; no person, treatment, whole-station connection, final departure, or story interpretation is mandatory here.
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**First-pass planning envelope:** Systems authoring **10–16 role-hours**, focused review **3–5**, response **2–4**; **15–25 total**. The author range is a deliberate **2-hour increase at each bound** over the outline's 8–14 topology allowance because this bounded version adds two complete dependency orders, explicit source-required evidence placement, and an actual later-expedition trace. It advances that same row; PM should subtract accepted depth rather than add both author envelopes. Existing language, equipment, trap, rescue, and connection contracts are reused rather than charged again. A later detailed SMALL regional specification—actual placed objective variants, access constraints, state combinations, rewards, and cross-order checks—needs **40–68 author hours**, **8–14 review**, and **4–7 response; 52–89 total**. It excludes room-layout production, full cast/scenes, language-chain prose already owned elsewhere, equipment/trap definition, UI, implementation, assets, simulation, testing, and TARGET/STRETCH expansion.
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Remaining detailed regional work covers placed objective variants, access constraints, state combinations, rewards and cross-order checks. [Production Scope](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Production%20Scope) owns workload estimates.
Remaining dependencies are the actual shift/placement constraints; selected cast and survivor outcome rules; acquisition model; final content band; exact ship functions and departure/credits behavior; leading story/corruption direction; final connection mechanism and full-station consequence; oxygen/capacity tuning; and evidence that the sequence is readable, varied, feasible, or supports any playtime ambition. None is answered by this paper map.
