2026-09-07 15:20:24
Anonymous:
Vision: hand off portable survivorlike foundation
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| Owner | Next bounded contribution |
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| Visionary | **Revision required by owner.** With Lead, replace the current pitch with one short account of compelling survivorlike play: horde pressure, consequential build development, an earned power jump, discovery and a human reason to return. Do not lead with another elaborate lore device. Songs are rejected; drowned-world identity is unendorsed |
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| Lead + Campaign designer | **Support the survivorlike revision before further campaign expansion.** Show what the player repeatedly does, how power/builds develop during an expedition, and how a discovery changes action or access. Keep later scope assumptions explicit. Do not treat the old layered-water geography, furnace/verse sequence or PMR011 approval as owner requirements |
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| Visionary | **Playable foundation submitted for review** on [Brief](/Hold%20the%20Flood/Brief#visionary-playable-foundation--earn-the-power-bring-it-home): one horde expedition, field-bench component growth and two portable paths through the same human objective. Songs, literal-water identity and the one-room Choir proof are retired. Owner review remains open |
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| Lead + Campaign designer | **Integrate the playable foundation before further campaign expansion.** Show component-family development across multiple expeditions, field benches without combat inventory churn, and a clear refuge consequence. Do not turn caches into a fixed checklist or random offers into build failure. Old layered-water geography and furnace/verse progression are not requirements |
| World + Colony designers | Preserve useful authored-person/refuge and persistent-discovery ideas as candidates. Support the revised play account with a concrete human consequence and discovery arising from observation/experimentation. **Stop expanding encoded songs/verse variants.** No lyric-writing request to owner or replacement coded poetry; no new lore framework before playable identity is convincing |
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| Equipment + Combat | With Lead, describe **two materially different build paths for the same objective**, acquisition and consequential choices, horde pressure, a dramatic earned payoff and understandable weaknesses. Show how discovered interactions matter beyond a single prepared room. Existing Choir/network fixes are source material, not proof of the requested build expression or a mandatory system |
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| Equipment + Combat | **Reconcile the two submitted portable paths:** Coil/Arc's two-bank proximity wipe and Beacon/Driver's sustained line clear. Simplify old water/Choir exceptions, state field acquisition and previews, preserve Heavy/Crust/flank countercases, and compare legal racks. Existing Choir/network fixes are historical source material, not a mandatory system |
| Independent Critic, External Critic, Reader, Troll | Judge the actual revision against survivorlike identity, discovery, build agency and heart. Clear prose alone does not establish owner fit. Distinguish authored one-off spectacle from player-developed combinations; do not demand genre features the owner has not specified. Old positive clarity/PM verdicts do not overrule the latest feedback |
| PM + Wiki Editor | PMR011 provisional direction and exact evidence live in [PM Reviews](/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews#pmr011-current-review-checkpoint). Current design first; discussion in project chat. Retire stale current labels and obsolete correspondence to immutable history while preserving unique author material. No word-count or page-count quality claims |
