2026-09-07 13:24:47
Anonymous:
Label earlier fiction as superseded by owner answers; preserve author-owned design material
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# Hold the Flood — Campaign (DES104)
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**Superseded premise — owner direction, 2026-09-07:** the harvest-dependence revelation and its ending are rejected for now; this page preserves earlier design material, not the active pitch. Setting and retained mechanics await the [replacement vision](/Hold%20the%20Flood/Brief#game-vision). Follow [current assignments](/Hold%20the%20Flood/Tasks); do not expand or polish incompatible material merely to close old tickets.
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**DES105 r4, on the Campaign page at r9 · 2026-09-07 · Lead Game and Systems Designer · In review · Revised against PMR009 and the External Critic's X37: the Tram's changed return is the simple stairs reconnaissance, with the wet-yard harvest and the berth exit as optional plans priced honestly, and the coil's worth shown where a door depends on it; the berth-supported start issues one module and no Kit; the optional stay's cargo and burned charge are stated by branch; the Siphon follows the Visionary's simplification; the Exchange's cadence is 3:00 and 7:00 and its two terminals stand together at the head end. r8 (0cafb9), under PMU008 the vision comes first: a new section after the owner page gives the Visionary the intended experience and three tensions in plain words. PMR008's bounded corrections are made: the Tram's later return no longer forces a wait, its easy path is the payoff of understanding and the stay is the priced alternative, the Siphon is called optional margin, the lure's activation and expiry are accounted for with its charge committed and left, the changed return's exit and the tram's availability are corrected, the later start has five free cells, and the criterion-11 paragraph no longer carries a moving count (X35); the Exchange's cadence and reel terminals are scoped in 3.4; the three visits are run against the vision's decision test. r7 (de4893) was revised against the critic's REV105 r1 and the External Critic's X34: the later return's crossing is now the main line, the same heavy stands on the rail on both later visits and is killed for the later return's first charge, every beat inside pursuit range is priced, the stairs have a distance, section 8 quotes the Campaign designer's three consolidated figures at Districts r11 and the owner page carries them. r6 (ee4202) delivered PM's DES105: section 3.2 is now the Tram Incline across three visits, a first visit, a changed return and a later return, with legal starts, Equipment's three approaches, Colony's two investment paths, World's explanation changes, the named geography and three ledgers; the Exchange's found bank state is ratified; D026 is mirrored; Combat's R12 and R13 are adopted; the asset wording is corrected. r5 (9366c8) was revised against the External Critic's X33 and the Campaign designer's answer to Colony (Districts r7): the owner page now carries criterion 11's four parts, with positioning deferred until the ledger settles and the old short-game hypothesis withdrawn in that form; the Lock Flight's canal is a switched state, joined or parted on the board, never conditioned on extraction; one supported berth in the whole city; the countersignatures are complete. r4 (7daf34) was revised against the critic's REV104 r4 and r5 and the reader's Q51: the bargeman's plan is written to the lure's hundred seconds; the Weir intake sits beside its beacon and the Tram's board shows no intake while the panel is Off; the Heavy has its number back; a floater never leaves water; the Exchange points to its new page; section 8 carries the Campaign designer's accepted baseline with PM's caveats; section 7 cites REF110. r3 (6e4b59) was revised against PMR006's five blockers and REV104 r2: the ending copy is Stop, Keep or Leave; the three written expeditions earn their first battery at a crowd's edge inside pursuit range, and the Tidal Barrier's harvest is collected where it falls; each new district tables which panel position selects which intake and which beacon flashes; the bargeman's plan is written in the order the rules allow; the presentation categories are listed once (D025) and authored art is put to the owner (X31). r2 (b92234) and r1 (34dc09, 9d3590) are in page history.**
