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- # Hold The Horde — Expedition Proposal
+ # Hold The Horde — Three expeditions into the observation ward
- *A proposal for the owner to react to. It shows how three successive trips from the ship can each be worth taking. The rooms follow Arrangement A of the [Station Room And Module Inventory](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Station%20Room%20And%20Module%20Inventory); the people, fiction and details are examples and remain revisable.*
+ You come home carrying a useful machine part and a photograph you cannot explain. Your spectacular combat upgrades are gone. The part is still yours, the door you unlocked is still open, and the next expedition has fresh hordes to fight. This time you know something worth going back for.
- ## The problem with coming back
+ These proposed scenes begin after the opening, once you have expanded the rig enough to experiment with linked parts and someone is living aboard the ship. Yeva provides the survivor's perspective here; the choice of first survivor remains open. The [Owner Brief](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Brief) sets the expedition rules; the ward and its discovery are a direction to develop.
- Every return home ends your temporary power, which gives each trip its own rise from vulnerable to dominant. Under current rules, a living return preserves the current arrangement and population: defeated creatures stay defeated, releases you resolved stay spent and no source refills merely because you went home. Surviving creatures can still move. That is what makes the station yours. The grille you shut, the cap you closed and the canister you dropped are all still there.
+ ## First trip — something is wrong with the window
- Together those rules create a problem for a careful player. The ship's dock never moves, so every trip starts from the same door. Within one life, pushing the same route deeper can leave more cleared ground between that door and the next unresolved frontier. A death reshuffles the unjoined station and brings new crowds, but at the cost of position, known routes and unfinished work, so dying must not become the way to shorten a walk. By the third trip into a region you can walk out at starting strength across rooms you already emptied, and the first thing that can grow your build may be the climax itself.
+ **You want a pressure component from the hospital's observation ward.** At home you pack an automatic weapon, a defensive special, linked electrical parts and spare air. That leaves room for the component, but taking another bulky find will force a choice.
- Both directions below keep the rules above (see the [Owner Brief](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Brief)); changing them would be a different proposal.
+ The concourse is full of former patients. They pour around abandoned beds while faster creatures use a side gallery. Your automatic fire opens a narrow path. Fighting begins growing the build before the concourse is cleared: the first upgrade makes the electrical attack branch across nearby bodies. You start choosing dense lines because those are where your new power works best. A crowd that made you retreat now tempts you forward.
- ## Two ways to keep returns worth taking
+ A heavier procession enters behind the first mass. Breaking its leading push is a proposed major milestone, earning a transformation while the remaining horde is still arriving. Your branches become a storm crossing the packed ranks. You deliberately draw two streams together, hold your defensive special until their fronts meet, and turn the bottleneck into a bright, sustained collapse. The pleasure is reversal: the crowd's density has become your advantage. An attack from the side can still force you out of position.
- ### 1. Plan the station you leave behind — current rules
+ The ward door is now reachable. You shut the side-gallery grille and clear the last bodies near the component rack. The noise falls away. That earns a pocket of quiet in which to work; further arrivals must give a visible or audible warning. You photograph an oddity you noticed during the fight: a point in the ward's star-filled observation window blinked when the room's bedside call lights flashed.
- Nothing new is added. Each trip shapes the next.
+ With the room quiet, you try the call switch. The same point blinks again. You take a second photograph, free the pressure component and return through the concourse. The grille remains shut for later trips. A tempting extra part stays on its rack because your pack is full.
- - **Close the road, fight the frontier.** Shutting a source before its release commits buys lasting safety and access but no upgrade, which suits a route you will walk many times. Letting a release commit, then clearing or sealing it, earns a choice, which suits the trip you mean to push.
- - **Reach further.** Canisters packed at a working bench carry more air in the same space, and a dropped canister waits where you left it. Real shortcuts shorten real walks where they exist: a cut crawl that comes out past a jammed door, an opened hoist, or rooms you have joined so their route survives later deaths.
- - **Push on, or leave it.** Growth reaches a climax if you push on in the same trip, which costs the air for the walk back. Alternatively, a source you never wake stays occupied, so a transfer bay's corrective test can wait for a trip that needs a climb. That asks a horde-game player to walk past a fight they want now, and some releases, like a hall whose wards open as you cross it, cannot be left.
+ **At home**, the component improves the ship. Yeva studies your photographs and remembers that this ward was buried inside the station: it should not have had an outside window. She does not tell you what it is. You now have a contradiction you can investigate. Bringing home an answer to the repair problem has opened a much more interesting question.
- [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and [Build Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Rules) own releases and upgrades; [Survival And Loadout](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Survival%20And%20Loadout) owns canisters and dropped objects; [Connecting The Station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Connecting%20The%20Station) owns joins.
+ ## Second trip — use the hospital as an instrument
- **Cost.** No rule changes, but the station must show clearly which sources are occupied, sealed or spent. Shortcuts can bypass cleared rooms and substantially shorten particular walks.
+ **You want to test whether the window depicts the station itself.** You take a Fork Relay because it can send one input along two compatible paths. It already helps your rig; now you have a reason to try it in hospital machinery.
- ### 2. Ride a carriage line — new rule
+ The concourse contains fresh enemies. The grille you shut is still shut: that route supplies no attackers. The encounter uses the open ward doors and the farther gallery instead. Your old work changes the fight rather than cancelling your next rise in power.
- A *carriage line* is a service carriage running between two *carriage stations*.
+ You try a different combat plan. Movement-driven pulses gather pursuers behind you, so you curve around the beds instead of holding yesterday's bottleneck. Regular growth strengthens that behavior through the approach. A manual outward burst can release the crowd to save you, or you can keep it gathered for a more dangerous payoff. Familiar ground is useful because you know where a broad turn ends in an obstruction.
- - **Endpoints.** One station is aboard the ship, inside the airlock's inner door. The other is a forward station in a room you have reached on foot. Only one forward link exists at a time; linking another moves it.
- - **Activation.** A forward station is found dead. Restoring it takes time while the game runs and is done while its room is quiet or separated; then you commit the link. The carriage runs in the service conduit along the rooms you walked to get there, never through space you have not walked.
- - **Riding out.** From the ship the ride is much shorter than the walk, and you breathe suit air throughout. You arrive at starting strength and look through the carriage's port before its door opens. The room is as it now is, not as you remember it: bodies you left alive may have moved, and nothing promises the platform is clear. If something waits in the ring, you can stay shut in and ride back, which ends the trip aboard. This sealed turn-back is allowed without opening the door or clearing the ring; the exposed boarding guard below applies only once the door has opened.
- - **Riding home.** A forward station's start-up takes a few exposed seconds. It refuses while any creature stands inside its marked ring and stops if one enters, so pursuers must be cleared or shut out first. Room hazards, such as a vessel still drawing across a lane, do not stop it; you time them. Arriving at the ship station is arriving aboard: your temporary upgrades end.
- - **Shifts.** A living return changes nothing. After a death the line survives only if persistent joins still hold every room between its endpoints together; otherwise it goes dark until you rebuild that route.
- - **Survivors still walk.** A rescue works because the person opens their own door and crosses under their own power on a short route you prepared. A carriage would make any linked room a rescue route without that preparation, send someone away from you mid-transfer, and raise the question of a death during their crossing.
+ At the ward, you clear space and connect the Fork Relay to the call-light circuit and a service lamp on the movable examination rail. One press lights both. One point in the window stays still; another follows the lamp's changing position. You move it again and predict which point will move before pressing. It does.
- **What it buys.** The line replaces walking as far as its one current forward station; later frontiers can still lie farther away. Joined rooms pay off on repeated trips, and a short ride home lets a trip spend its air pushing into a climax instead of saving it for the walk back. Dying breaks unjoined lines, so death stays costly.
+ The apparent stars are a representation of spaces inside the station. The ship's berth has a point too. Several others lie beyond the rooms you have reached. The discovery changes the scale of the place: you have been treating an alien instrument as a hospital window, and part of the station is missing from the human plan.
- **Cost.** A new fixture with link, carriage and interrupted-ride state, conduit presentation in every room a line follows, and station placement in every region. The rooms between endpoints stop being revisited, along with their oxygen pressure.
+ Testing the rail also wakes a neighboring source. The tide arrives while you are away from your preferred turn. Now the discovery has a combat consequence: you know the rail's movement and can use the open lane it leaves. You earn a transformation from the next major push, gather the pursuers into the broad ward entrance, and choose when to release your special. The payoff is surviving through a piece of the room you have just learned to understand.
- **Separate option: sending cargo home.** The carriage could also take one carried object home without you. That frees space mid-trip, so you can carry more finds. It also weakens the shared-carrying tension, because full packs stop forcing a choice. It is not needed for the outings below, and the line can be taken without it.
+ You stop the experiment, clear or separate the remaining attackers, and record the instrument with the journal paused. You have enough air either to investigate the next unknown point or to carry the extra part left last time. You take the part home. You have learned where to search next; leaving that question open makes returning a choice, not a failure.
- ### Which to take
+ ## Third trip — follow a prediction
- | | 1. Plan the station | 2. Ride a carriage line |
- |---|---|---|
- | Rule changes | None | Carriage stations and riding; cargo home is separate |
- | Quiet travel before the frontier | Grows within a long life; shortcuts trim some routes | A short ride, plus the rooms past the forward station |
- | Growth reaching a climax | Push on and pay for the walk back, or leave sources unfought | Push on; the ride home is short |
- | Authoring and state | Readable source states | Station placement, link and carriage state, conduits |
- | Main risk | Long walks for careful players | Rooms become a lobby; oxygen pressure fades on linked ground |
+ **You want to reach the space that the human map omits.** The ship's repair and the recovered part remain useful. Your temporary combat power starts over, and fresh fighting on the approach supplies another climb.
- **Recommendation: ride a carriage line,** with direction 1's closing, reach and shortcuts kept as ordinary play. For a careful player on a long life, current rules make successive pushes along the same route longer, and pushing into a climax means paying twice for the same walk. A line lets the station you connected shorten your trips and gives the joining puzzle a felt benefit. Neither direction creates a new climb once a route's ordinary releases are spent: outing 3 below still fights at starting strength.
+ This time the opened ward route lets you approach the concourse from another angle. You can repeat a reliable build or use your new part to experiment. The path to the instrument includes ordinary combat before the major challenge; choosing a shorter route should change that preparation rather than secretly assume you already have a transformation.
- ## Three outings
+ At the instrument, you repeat the call-light test to orient the displayed spaces. The point you want sits beyond a partition marked as a blank service wall on the human plan. You investigate the physical partition and find an older access mechanism beneath its hospital covering. Recognizing the same connection behavior lets you operate it with a part from your rig. Temporarily giving up that part weakens your combat setup while the mechanism works.
- Your rig throughout is the four starter parts: Threat Sensor and Pulse Projector firing automatically, and Manual Trigger raising the Barrier Plate.
+ Opening the passage wakes the crowded gallery beyond. This is the trip's climax: hold enough ground for access to finish, or disconnect and retreat with the discovery already recorded. Regular growth and the preceding major fight have given you a build worth trusting. If it is exceptionally strong, it can overwhelm the gallery; the game does not add tougher bodies merely to cancel your success.
- The shield and disc launcher share power. Raising the shield can briefly delay the next disc, and a disc already launching can briefly prevent the shield from starting. The [build reference](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanical%20Interfaces%20And%20Opening%20Quantities) explains this tradeoff.
+ Once the passage is usable, you close a bulkhead behind you and hear something answer from the far side of a refuge window. Two knocks. You answer; two knocks return. The impossible point on the map has become a place with someone in it. Reaching and talking to them is this trip's reward. Their rescue would be a separate, short cooperative action with its own preparation, not an escort added to an already long return.
- ### Outing 1 — the knocking ward
+ **At home**, you have a reachable new place, a possible person to help and a reason to show Yeva what you found. The three trips have moved from repairing a ship, to reinterpreting the station, to making a human connection. Combat power resets each time; that chain of discoveries does not.
- **Goal:** reach the woman behind the green-lit window. **Preparation:** the starter rig and one spare canister, leaving space for what the ward holds. On the way you photograph the label painted on her window.
+ ## What makes the return loop worthwhile
- The junction past the dock is the only way in, and a grille in its side wall shows where the crowd will come from. It comes: a river of bodies from the quarantine wing, splitting round the central bollard while fast flankers take the far leg. You hold the dock mouth as a funnel, push to the grille's wheel and shut it mid-flood, then clear what already came through. In the journal's pause you choose Rebound Disc: your shots become discs that bank off the bollard and walls through the bodies. The junction goes still with the refuge door in view: *relief*.
+ | Renews each expedition | Carries the journey forward |
+ |---|---|
+ | Crowds in combat areas and opportunities for regular combat growth | Recovered parts, learned interactions and completed repairs |
+ | Temporary upgrade choices and larger transformations | Opened routes, permanent seals and joined rooms |
+ | Decisions about how to fight and how far to push this time | New questions, survivor relationships and access to previously hidden places |
- Yeva wants her grease-pencil wall photographed, and you spend the time. You stock the abort vestibule and pass her travel air through the sleeve. You walk the short crossing and confirm it is quiet; she opens her own door and follows under her own power. Before leaving you lift the arc grid from her ward's service edge: an Arc Emitter.
+ A living return keeps the room arrangement. Death changes the unjoined station, so the next approach can differ more radically; observations attached to a particular room remain useful when that room moves. Either return brings physically carried property home and ends temporary combat upgrades. Spent air and consumed material remain spent.
- **Home.** Rebound Disc is gone. Yeva is aboard; the Arc Emitter sits in storage, too large for your four-space rig and with nothing yet to charge it. Shown your window photograph, she says the painted hand is Dorn's, her work partner, who sealed a section she has not seen since. *Attachment* starts here.
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- ### Outing 2 — the long hall, the loop and the gallery
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- **Goal:** the pressure regulator core, one of the ship's missing assemblies, in the sampling loop beyond the long pressure hall, plus a photograph of the loop's pressure counter for Yeva. **Preparation:** the starter rig and a spare canister.
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- The junction is silent, the grille still shut. The long hall is not. A flanker pack comes down the side gallery first; then, halfway along, both ward doors open. Their locks sit mid-hall, where the release commits, so you can only seal it early. You fight pillar to pillar, throw both locks and clear the bodies inside. You take Rebound Disc again. *Mastery* is remembering that a seal counts as much as a clear, and reading which walls will bank a disc.
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- The loop has no release of its own, but paired vessels draw on a three-beat frost warning and a Glass Siphon waits at the valve. You learn the rhythm and hand-close one vessel's cap. You photograph the counter, work the core free and unclamp the Impact Dynamo from the loop's impact plate. With the Siphon down, you find a dead carriage station on the dry outer arc, restore it and link it to the ship.
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- **The gallery.** From the loop's far threshold you see broad floor, two feeding mouths, a heavy creature behind the fixed shelter rib and vessels frosting on the loop's three beats: *anticipation*. Because the ride home will be short, you spend your air going in. When the release commits, both mouths pour. Your discs bank off the fixed rib and the gallery walls and cut lines through the packed ranks, up to three in flight at once until heat makes the Projector pause. You shut the nearer mouth mid-flood, hold the rib and seal the far mouth. The stage resolves, and you choose Fragment Wake: each disc now ends in a fan of fragments through the front ranks. For a minute the build does what you built it for. But the heavy creature and half a floor of bodies remain, and your air is low. You fall back to the loop; two bodies follow you into the ring, you put them down, the start-up cycle completes, and you ride home.
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- **Home.** Both upgrades are gone. The core goes into the ship, and the Arc Emitter and Dynamo sit together in storage: an arc build waiting for more rig space, which only the still-missing navigation coupler provides. Yeva lays your counter photograph beside her wall. Her tally follows the counter beat for beat until one date, then doubles: something else began drawing on that line. The gallery's vessels are the obvious suspect. She wants to know, and so do you. *Curiosity* survives the reset because it belongs to a place and a person, not to your power.
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- ### Outing 3 — back to an unfinished gallery
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- This is the second living return after the route's ordinary releases were spent. Nothing between the ship and the gallery can grow your build, so instead of a long walk you ride.
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- Through the carriage port the loop looks almost as you left it: one body you missed stands by the valve. You clear it before stepping far, and the uncapped vessel warns and draws again. In the gallery, the heavy creature and the bodies you left are waiting, and no release remains to pay for fighting them.
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- It is won with what you know. On the loop's rhythm you close the vessel drawing across the cap control. You drive bodies onto both plates so the chamber holds near neutral while you work one moving rib, using the handrail when the balance slips. You make both cutter releases and seat the pin, fixing that rib; the other still swings, and the fixed shelter rib stays where it always was. That completes the gallery's checkpoint toward the exchanger core. In the exchanger room you free the core, then carry it back to the loop and ride home.
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- **What this trip is.** A short ride to a starting-strength fight is not a renewed build climb. What is enjoyable is mastery: a room you understand, a threat you can read, and earlier work — the capped vessel, the knowledge of the plates — paying off. What is missing is the survivorslike rise. Regular growth from defeated enemies, if the owner chooses it, might add some growth from those leftover bodies.
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- **Home.** Three of the ship's four assemblies are aboard: the isolation bridge from the station's opening, the regulator core and the exchanger core. The fourth, the navigation coupler, would also give the rig the space to mount the Arc and Dynamo waiting in storage. That is the next trip's reason. Mara's refuge lies past the gallery, but her walk to the ship is still too long for a short crossing, so she waits. Yeva has part of an answer and a sharper question for Dorn, wherever the station has put him.
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- ## How this could fail
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- The line turns the station into a lobby. Players ride past the rooms they changed and stop feeling oxygen until the last room, and every trip becomes "find the next carriage station". The one-link limit and station placement are what hold that back, and both are guesses. Outing 3's fight at starting strength may feel like a chore rather than mastery under either direction.
+ Walking home keeps a known arrangement and lets you choose a stopping point. Dying may still be an attractive return in some situations, and no new penalty is added to prevent it. The design must judge whether that convenience supports exploration or makes the return journey pointless.
## Open questions
- - How long a ride should take.
- - How many stations a region holds.
- - Whether sending cargo home is worth its cost.
- - Under direction 1, whether shortcut placement keeps each new frontier close enough during a long life.
- - Whether survivors may ride a carriage line (the proposal says they walk); if they do, the rescue rules change.
- - Whether there is regular growth from defeated enemies (the growth rhythm is the owner's choice), and how much outing 3's leftover bodies would then give.
- - Whether players enjoy a climax won by knowledge after the growth has gone (only learnable in play).
- - These rules are untested; numbers are proposals.
+ - How much ordinary growth and how many choices make a familiar approach exciting without turning it into a compulsory warm-up? New approaches need to offer growth before their climaxes.
+ - How should renewed populations use a room after permanent closures? A sealed entry cannot be silently reopened, and an enclosed safe room cannot receive bodies without a credible route.
+ - Which major horde events grant transformations early enough to enjoy them against substantial opposition?
+ - How much combat can surround an experiment before curiosity feels constantly interrupted? Earned quiet, warnings and the paused journal protect different parts of that attention.
+ - The window instrument needs a coherent visual and causal design, clues and a place in the actual room plan. The scenes propose its meaning; they do not settle the hospital's deeper story.
+ - Passenger carriage travel and cargo shipping remain separate, unselected options. These outings use walking routes and do not depend on either.
+ - These scenes and their pacing are proposals; their fun and practical duration await later testing.
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