2026-09-15 19:31:43
Anonymous:
Record independent character-review criteria ready
hold the flood/progress.md ..
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 83 — Who is the astronaut? | Character writer working; separate reviewer preparing criteria before the new alternatives | Draft **20:30**, range **20:15–21:00**; reviewed **21:30**, range **21:00–22:30** |
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| 83 — Who is the astronaut? | Character writer working; independent review criteria ready, awaiting draft | Draft **20:30**, range **20:15–21:00**; reviewed **21:30**, range **21:00–22:30** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The new Receiver Vault proposal tackles a different risk: a later expedition must deliver growing power and a horde climax before its quiet discovery. It uses the existing vault rooms, enemies and machinery; the new reward opportunity remains a proposal. Earlier rescue and station-completion comparisons are ready for owner reaction.
The tracker contains **83 outcomes: 79 preparation outcomes closed, 1 current outcome, 1 readiness assessment reopened and 2 parked**. The completed preservation audit and its corrections belong within outcome 38; they do not close overall readiness. These counts are not a percentage of the finished game. Outcomes 39–40 remain parked and unaccepted pending the core corrections.
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The messaging directory did not list either original Claude task at **19:18**. Temporary GPT support is writing the character comparison, with a separate reviewer preparing independent criteria. Systems has completed the hospital pass. This is a messaging observation, not a judgment about the apps' health. No new permanent agent or manual forwarding is needed for this work.
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The messaging directory did not list either original Claude task at **19:18**. Temporary GPT support is writing the character comparison, with independent review criteria ready for the draft. Systems has completed the hospital pass. This is a messaging observation, not a judgment about the apps' health. No new permanent agent or manual forwarding is needed for this work.
