2026-09-10 10:49:29
Anonymous:
Add reviewed discovery and home pages to human reading route
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## Read the design
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The two revised proposals are **ready for your reaction**. Start with the game overview, then the build examples:
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Read these four pages in order, or start with the subject you want to explore:
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1. [The game and an expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game) — what you want, what happens on an outing, and the discoveries and payoffs it can lead to.
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2. [Hordes and builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) — crowd pressure, power growth, and three contrasting equipment combinations.
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3. [Owner Brief](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Brief) — the premise and selected directions that guide the proposals.
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1. [The game and an expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game) — your immediate goal, a dangerous outing, and its discoveries and payoffs.
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2. [Hordes and builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) — crowd pressure, growing power, and three contrasting equipment combinations.
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3. [Discovery in a changing station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Connecting%20The%20Station) — recognize a room, test a clue, and make a connection that survives the next shift.
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4. [Home and the people you bring back](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Home%20And%20Colony%20Loop) — a short rescue, people worth knowing, and reasons to leave home again.
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The intended reading order is: **an expedition → combat and builds → discovery and the changing station → people, home and story → detailed reference**.
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The [Owner Brief](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Brief) records the premise and selected directions. Detailed references are linked from the relevant subject pages.
The project is in design. These entry pages present the current proposal; the broader wiki rewrite follows feedback on this direction.
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The project is in design. These four pages present the current proposal and its intended player experience. The broader wiki correction is underway; older combat, equipment and encounter references are the next priority. Open creative choices are identified in their owning pages.
