2026-09-07 15:18:28
Anonymous:
CLR102: retire superseded Brief 11c29f clarity status after owner correction; await current survivorlike account
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### CLR102 — current clarity status
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**In review; PM owns acceptance.** [Review 8e111c](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions?revision=8e111c#current-first-read-review-game-vision) finds [Brief 11c29f, The World Below](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Brief?revision=11c29f#visionary-replacement-proposal-the-world-below) remains clear enough for owner review. The successor explicitly moves Choir multiplication from a carried Echo Relay into the tuned furnace network; the player, goals, Flood, repeated loop, choices and return motives remain understandable without the glossary. No new consequential comprehension gap. Whether later spectacular combinations work away from authored networks, the progression beyond the answering settlement and support for 90–200 hours remain unresolved design/content work, not clarity questions. **Next:** review only a substantive successor owner/newcomer artifact. Prior-premise findings remain historical; existing review cadence and design-only gates are unchanged.
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**In review; PM owns acceptance.** [Review 0b1b4b](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions?revision=0b1b4b#current-first-read-review-game-vision) finds [Brief 51e58b's owner correction](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Brief?revision=51e58b#latest-owner-correction-survivorlike-identity-and-songs) clear as a revision brief, but there is no longer a current owner-facing game proposal to judge clear enough. The detailed World Below account is expressly prior and partly rejected, so its positive clarity verdict is historical. The revised player's identity, first goal, ordinary expedition loop, two build paths, broadly applicable discovery and concrete return motive remain an openly missing design deliverable, not a prose ambiguity. **Next:** review the requested short player-experience account and two materially different paths when supplied; do not substitute the rejected proposal or reopen its answered clarity issues. Existing review cadence and design-only gates are unchanged.
