2026-09-15 15:46:04
Anonymous:
Record reviewed cast and active equipment reference F2.19
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The main reading path now begins with [The Game](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game), follows [three expeditions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal), returns to [the people aboard](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Coming%20Home), and opens into [discovery in the changing station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Connecting%20The%20Station). [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) explains the current examples; [Build Comparison](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Comparison) presents alternative controls and payoffs for owner reaction.
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Eleven proposal or editorial packages completed review and response today: builds/expeditions, hospital story/survival, regular growth on a renewed route, a second route state after permanent source seals, the six-page reading path, the moving-scan expedition, the short-rescue comparison, the station-completion payoff, the campaign scope comparison, the language journal, and the whole-campaign overview. [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and the room/encounter references describe the two concrete route states. They preserve completed work while giving fresh opposition a physical route. Other seal combinations and shifted layouts remain design work.
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Twelve proposal or editorial packages completed review and response today: builds/expeditions, hospital story/survival, regular growth on a renewed route, a second route state after permanent source seals, the six-page reading path, the moving-scan expedition, the short-rescue comparison, the station-completion payoff, the campaign scope comparison, the language journal, the whole-campaign overview, and the cast and rescue map. [Combat Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20Rules) and the room/encounter references describe the two concrete route states. They preserve completed work while giving fresh opposition a physical route. Other seal combinations and shifted layouts remain design work.
The new Ricochet and Gravity mechanisms remain proposed replacements for parts of the detailed build rules. The [hospital-story alternatives](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hospital%20Story%20Directions) remain revisable. Completed review does not select them for the owner or establish fun, balance or duration.
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[Whole Game Outline](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Whole%20Game%20Outline) completed review and response at 15:26. It follows the player’s journey from forced docking through deeper investigation and optional secrets. The page makes the horde scale, growing builds, useful discoveries and relationships concrete, with carried equipment and open choices preserved. The home-loop page’s old living-return clearance wording has also been corrected to fresh hordes after either return.
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## Working now: five people
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## Ready to read: five people
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The [Cast And Short Rescue Map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Cast%20And%20Short%20Rescue%20Map) was submitted at 15:31 with the five people introduced before the long transfer rules. All fifteen scenes, their meaningful choices, home contributions and later changes of belief remain in scope. The ordinary-abort description now uses its mapped prepared waiting place; the separate owner choice about death during a crossing remains unanswered. The independent reviewer is checking the actual submitted revision against the saved criteria and original scene inventory. Draft delivered 15:31; reviewed target 17:00 today, with ranges on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
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The [Cast And Short Rescue Map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Cast%20And%20Short%20Rescue%20Map) completed review and response at 15:44. Meet the five people through their wishes and disagreements, then follow each person’s rescue, home contribution and later change of belief. All fifteen scenes remain. The rescue references now preserve a person’s current shelter if the astronaut dies while preparing a retry. The separate owner choice about death during a crossing remains unanswered.
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## Working now: the equipment reference
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Systems is rewriting the [Equipment Catalogue](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment%20Catalogue) so a reader can picture what each of the twelve parts does before learning the technical rules. Existing behavior, costs, combinations and separate proposed replacements must stay accurate. Its reviewer has prepared independent criteria and will check the submitted revision. Draft target 16:30 and reviewed target 17:30 today, with ranges on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
One focused critique and one response belong to each bounded outcome. The outside-edit preservation audit is complete and its factual follow-ups are published; broader readability and design readiness remain open. States and estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
