2026-09-15 13:52:13
Anonymous:
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The chains imply **five short scene variants**, intended to overlap home follow-through rather than exceed five people and fifteen scenes:
1. Aster compares one berth trace and narrows—not abandons—her arrival theory.
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2. Yeva and Dorn see the completed profile comparison and disagree over whether changed form equals harm.
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2. Yeva and Dorn see the completed profile comparison and disagree over whether changed form equals harm. This is [scene Y3, “The profile is not the person”](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Cast%20And%20Short%20Rescue%20Map), with Dorn participating only if present and shown the record.
3. Mara asks whether to preserve a completed culture/profile trace before a live feed is disconnected; this is evidence stewardship, not her salvage-project consumption.
4. Yeva, Aster and Dorn confront the late-transfer record; each revises one claim, and no damaged recipient field becomes a solved identity.
5. Ivo states the voluntary-treatment consent boundary before the player accepts/refuses/purges; later response reflects the chosen act without friendship being a reward.
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- First survivor (Yeva or Aster), acquisition, and which named people are selected; survivor delivery, loss and safety, and whether survivors are registered, mortal, revivable or shift-causing.
- Corruption, literal metaphysics, and whether there is a “true ending.”
- The final game band.
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- The shared Yeva/Dorn profile-comparison scene has not yet been assigned to both arcs.
- Exact branch scripts and full state variants for the five scene variants, and full occurrence, branch and failure variants for the four chains.
- Exact room placement, clue text, full dialogue, every visit/death order, save compatibility, accessibility presentation and the ending sequence.
- These rules are untested; numbers are proposals.
