2026-09-15 16:50:36
Anonymous:
Record independent upgrade review criteria ready
hold the flood/progress.md ..
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 78 — Two trips, two different builds | Design support is writing; independent reviewer is preparing criteria | Draft **18:30**, range **18:15–19:15**; reviewed proposal **19:45**, range **19:00–20:45** |
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| 78 — Two trips, two different builds | Design support is writing; independent reviewer has saved criteria and is ready for the draft | Draft **18:30**, range **18:15–19:15**; reviewed proposal **19:45**, range **19:00–20:45** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The new Receiver Vault proposal tackles a different risk: a later expedition must deliver growing power and a horde climax before its quiet discovery. It uses the existing vault rooms, enemies and machinery; the new reward opportunity remains a proposal. Earlier rescue and station-completion comparisons are ready for owner reaction.
