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| + | # Wiki Maintenance Log — Archive |
| + | |
| + | **Maintenance entries from 2026-09-06, verbatim. Not current.** |
| + | |
| + | Moved from [Wiki Maintenance Log](/Wiki%20Maintenance%20Log) by the editor on 2026-09-07. Nothing was reworded or summarised. The live page keeps 2026-09-07 onward and indexes every entry below. |
| + | |
| + | These twenty-one entries cover the first day of the role: the wiki going from 9 pages to 65, six lost updates, and the conventions being written, broken and improved by four different roles. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## Paused overnight — 2026-09-06 ~23:30 UTC+3 |
| + | |
| + | **The editor's pass is stopped and the wiki is being taken offline for the night**, both at their owner's |
| + | request. It resumes in the morning. |
| + | |
| + | Seventeen passes ran, 17:20 to 23:22. **Nothing is left half-done** — no page is mid-edit, the last pass |
| + | closed cleanly, and every item this role raised is either fixed or recorded under *"reported, not fixed"* |
| + | in the entry that raised it. |
| + | |
| + | **State at the stop.** Sixty-five pages, no orphans, no broken internal links. |
| + | [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) is at fifty-one asked, fifty answered, with |
| + | only **Q21** open and that one the reader's own to close. Five lost updates have occurred in total across |
| + | the day; four were repaired and one — reported against this role — turned out not to have happened. |
| + | |
| + | **Two things are waiting for a person, not for this role:** |
| + | |
| + | - **Q46**, for the lead: the [Design Document](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Document) still says *"three |
| + | to four hours"* six times, after the owner rejected that scope. |
| + | - **The offered split** of Clarity Questions, now 125 KB with 86% closed rounds — the outside reader's |
| + | call, and silence is a valid answer to it. |
| + | |
| + | **Nothing is watching for lost updates until this resumes.** The |
| + | [conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) are what actually prevent them — re-read immediately before you POST, |
| + | and diff what your save removes — and three roles have now derived that second rule independently. They |
| + | work whether or not anyone is watching. |
| + | |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~23:22 UTC+3 — seventeenth pass |
| + | |
| + | Sixty-five pages, three new ([The Exchange](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Districts/The%20Exchange), |
| + | [Floater](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Enemies/Floater), |
| + | [Reference/Asset Audit](/Reference/Asset%20Audit)). No orphans, no broken internal links. |
| + | **No lost updates.** |
| + | |
| + | Sixteen shrinkages across the interval, five of them new, all accounted for. The largest — the |
| + | [Design Review](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review) falling 29,859 → 8,351 across two saves — is |
| + | the archive pattern running at full speed: [Archive/REV104](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/Rev104) |
| + | gained 23,548 in the same window. Every superseded round is moved, the live page stays under 10 KB, and |
| + | nobody has had to be asked since the second pass. |
| + | |
| + | ### The template held, and that is the result worth recording |
| + | |
| + | Two passes ago this role stopped patching the missing Glossary link page by page and wrote the standard |
| + | seeded-page header down on the [Design Index](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Index) instead. **Every design |
| + | page created since carries it** — The Exchange and Floater both, without being asked. Six hand-patches |
| + | became zero. That is the whole argument for fixing a template over fixing instances, and it is now |
| + | evidenced rather than asserted. |
| + | |
| + | ### And I broke my own convention again, in a new shape |
| + | |
| + | Last pass this role added a Glossary row naming *"the six enemy behaviour roles"*. A seventh, **Floater**, |
| + | was published about an hour later. The convention against this is one the editor wrote two hours ago — |
| + | *do not stamp a pointer with something that will move* — and the row is now corrected to say that |
| + | [Enemies](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Enemies) owns the list and the Glossary does not track it. |
| + | |
| + | The general form is folded into that convention rather than added as a new one: **an enumeration is a |
| + | count in words.** Naming the members of a set someone else maintains fails the same way as counting them, |
| + | and it is not obvious until it breaks. |
| + | |
| + | ### Where the questions stand |
| + | |
| + | [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions): **fifty-one asked, fifty answered.** The only |
| + | open item is **Q21**, and it has been the reader's own to close for eight passes — their Round 5 verdict |
| + | already says the Design Document read cold and worked. For the first time since this log began, **nothing |
| + | on that page is waiting on a role.** |
| + | |
| + | **The split offered last pass** — archiving the closed rounds of that page, now 125 KB — has had no |
| + | answer, which was one of the two answers offered. Not re-raised. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~22:27 UTC+3 — sixteenth pass, first at the hourly cadence |
| + | |
| + | Sixty-two pages, four new (a REV104 archive, PMR005 and PMR006 sub-pages, |
| + | [Reference/Electroreception](/Reference/Electroreception)). Roughly seventy-eight saves in the interval. |
| + | No orphans, no broken internal links. **No lost updates.** |
| + | |
| + | Eleven shrinkages, every one accounted for. Two worth naming because both are this wiki's own conventions |
| + | being applied by people who did not need telling: [Colony](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Colony) r2 rewrote itself |
| + | and kept PM's seed *"preserved verbatim"* under a labelled heading; and |
| + | [Mechanics/Combat](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanics/Combat) r4 consolidated two stacked reconciliation |
| + | appendices into one current contract with the history moved out — which is exactly what was done to the |
| + | Design Review in the first pass, arrived at independently. |
| + | |
| + | **My scope caution was removed from the Hub, correctly.** PMR006 took it out as a contradictory line, |
| + | noting the Design Document now acknowledges the expansion itself — verified: it cites the Expansion |
| + | Brief twice and D019 five times. The caution had done its job and become clutter. *It still says "three to |
| + | four hours" six times, which is Q46 and remains the lead's.* |
| + | |
| + | ### Q50: the "short owner read" was about an hour |
| + | |
| + | The reader timed the path the Hub sends an owner down and found it was 12,707 words. Re-counted this pass, |
| + | it has grown: **[Campaign](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign) 11,012 words plus |
| + | [Build Paths](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment/Build%20Paths) 3,643 — 14,655, about 64 minutes**, against |
| + | the 91 minutes the same page quotes for the document this replaced. Over half of it is Campaign §3's |
| + | three districts in depth, which is what makes the seven-district claim checkable and which reviewers need. |
| + | |
| + | The genuinely short read already existed one heading down. The Hub line now names both: **five minutes** |
| + | (Campaign's own *"Read this first"*, 902 words, plus §10 *"Decisions for the owner"*, 297 — both |
| + | stand alone) and **the full hour**. PM's routing is unchanged; only the label now matches the thing, and |
| + | both figures are dated because both pages are moving. |
| + | |
| + | That is the third navigation defect the reader has found by *walking* a path rather than checking that its |
| + | links resolve. All three passed every link check this role runs. |
| + | |
| + | ### Reported, not fixed — for the outside reader |
| + | |
| + | **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) is now the largest page on the wiki**, at |
| + | 125 KB and 21,000 words across nineteen rounds. Fifty questions asked, forty-eight answered; **86% of the |
| + | page is closed rounds whose status cells have stopped changing.** |
| + | |
| + | In the fifth pass this role decided *not* to split it, and recorded why: unlike the Design Review, its old |
| + | rows were still live. That reason has largely expired. **But it is your page and the map it holds — every |
| + | question with the revision that answered it — is the thing that makes it worth its size, so this is a |
| + | question rather than an edit.** If you want it, the shape that preserves the map is: the box, a complete |
| + | question → status → where-answered index, and the recent rounds on this page; rounds 2–14 |
| + | verbatim on `/Clarity Questions/Archive`. Say the word and this role will do it; say nothing and it stays |
| + | as it is, which is a defensible answer. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~21:30 UTC+3 — fifteenth pass, auditing the 96-minute gap |
| + | |
| + | The pass was paused 19:50–21:26 at its owner's request. This entry covers the whole window, not the |
| + | last ten minutes. **Fifty-eight pages now, twenty of them new** — two designers were seated and shipped: |
| + | a Combat and Enemy Designer (`/Enemies/*`, six behaviour roles with a page each, plus |
| + | [Mechanics/Combat](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanics/Combat)) and an Equipment designer |
| + | (`/Equipment/*`, [Inventory and Charge](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanics/Inventory%20And%20Charge)), along |
| + | with [Campaign](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign), two districts, PMR004 and PMU005. No orphans, no broken |
| + | internal links. |
| + | |
| + | ### A fourth lost update happened in the gap. PM caught it themselves. |
| + | |
| + | PMR004 replaced a section of [Tasks](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks) and, in doing so, removed the Equipment |
| + | author's embedded submission note and revision ledger — which had been written *inside the span being |
| + | replaced*. PM found it by diffing against an immutable earlier revision, restored it verbatim under a |
| + | dated heading, and wrote the rule in their own words: **"Fresh-read plus successful readback alone does |
| + | not prove author preservation."** |
| + | |
| + | That is the delete-guard, derived independently by the second role to pay for it — after the editor |
| + | did the same thing to the reference researcher four passes ago, and after TRL102 turned it into a |
| + | mechanical check. Three incidents, three roles, one rule. PM's case is now recorded on |
| + | [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) beside the editor's, because a convention with two independent |
| + | derivations behind it argues for itself. |
| + | |
| + | **Nothing else was lost.** Seven other shrinkages across the window, all documented: withdrawn findings, |
| + | archived review rounds, and one enemy renamed. |
| + | |
| + | ### Fixed |
| + | |
| + | 1. **A renamed enemy that the map still pointed at under its old name.** The Combat designer published a |
| + | role as *Drifter*, found an hour later that the Lead's Campaign page called the same role *Walker*, |
| + | and did the rename properly — citing convention 6, leaving a pointer page, and asking the editor to |
| + | retire it *"once nothing links here"*. Five pages still linked it. Four of those are discussing the |
| + | rename and should; **one, the [Design Index](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Index)'s enemy list, was |
| + | real link rot** and now says Walker. The pointer stays until the meta-references go. |
| + | 2. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) caught up with the new tree.** One row for the six enemy |
| + | behaviour roles pointing at the page that owns them, rather than six copies that would drift; and a |
| + | note on the gear section that the equipment items now have their own pages which own the detail, so |
| + | this page is not read as a competing definition. |
| + | 3. **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions)** recounted for the first time in |
| + | ninety-six minutes — forty-nine asked, forty-seven answered — and the box now says when it went |
| + | unattended, rather than implying it had been current all along. |
| + | |
| + | **What the gap actually cost.** One lost update, caught by its author rather than by this role, about |
| + | twenty minutes after it happened. The conventions did the work; the watching only shortened the delay. |
| + | That is worth knowing before anyone treats this pass as load-bearing. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## Paused 19:50, resumed 21:26 UTC+3 — a 96-minute gap |
| + | |
| + | The ten-minute pass was paused at its owner's request after fourteen passes and resumed at 21:26. |
| + | **Nothing was watching for lost updates during that window**, and the wiki did roughly a day's work |
| + | in it: two new designers, a `/Enemies/*` tree, `/Mechanics/Combat`, PMR004 and PMU005. The first pass |
| + | after resuming audits the whole gap rather than only the last ten minutes. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~19:48 UTC+3 — fourteenth pass |
| + | |
| + | Thirty-eight pages. Five new ones, all from PMU004 finishing its rollout: |
| + | [Colony](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Colony), [Enemies](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Enemies), |
| + | [Equipment](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment), |
| + | [Team / Expansion Prompts](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Team/Expansion%20Prompts) and |
| + | [Reference / Content Scale](/Reference/Content%20Scale). No orphans, no broken internal links, **no lost |
| + | updates** — three documented shrinkages, all roles withdrawing their own findings or archiving a |
| + | superseded review round. |
| + | |
| + | ### The signpost problem the reader named, and it was pointing at the wrong thing |
| + | |
| + | **Q46.** The Hub bolds the Design Document and says *"Start here to read the game."* That line is the |
| + | editor's. The document at r14 mentions the expansion steer **zero times** and still states *"three to four |
| + | hours"* **five times** — the scope the owner has just rejected. PMU004 and document r14 landed about a |
| + | minute apart, so this is a crossing rather than anyone's error; but as the reader put it, *"the gap |
| + | between an owner changing their mind and the document knowing it is the one window where a reader can be |
| + | actively misled"*, and this time it was visible on the page the project points strangers at. |
| + | |
| + | Fixed the way they proposed — **one line, not a rewrite.** The Hub's Design Document entry now carries |
| + | a scope caution naming the Expansion Brief and D019, and separating what still stands (how the game works) |
| + | from what is being revised (how much game there is). The rewrite is DES104's and Q46 stays open for the |
| + | lead; only the signpost was mine to fix. |
| + | |
| + | **Q48 — "GDD".** Used four times across the new topic pages, defined nowhere, while the same sentences |
| + | write *"Design Document"* in the link text beside it. Now one line on the |
| + | [Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary), **defined rather than edited off other people's pages**, so both |
| + | spellings resolve. The reader's own note on it is the right framing: this is the exact failure Q1–Q9 |
| + | spent the afternoon eliminating, and the fix each time was one clause. |
| + | |
| + | ### Fixed, and one thing fixed properly |
| + | |
| + | - **The Glossary link was missing from all three newly seeded topic pages**, as it was from the three |
| + | before them. Added — and then, rather than patch this a third time, the standard header for a seeded |
| + | topic page is now written down on the [Design Index](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Index): source page |
| + | and revision, then Design Index · Expansion Brief · Glossary. **Six pages across two passes was |
| + | enough of a pattern to stop treating it as six problems.** |
| + | - **Hub length figure re-measured:** about 21,000 words, roughly ninety-one minutes. A 6% move, which is |
| + | worth re-stamping where last pass's 3% was not. |
| + | |
| + | **Nothing reported to a role this pass** beyond Q46, which is recorded where the lead will see it. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~19:40 UTC+3 — thirteenth pass |
| + | |
| + | **The wiki changed shape this pass.** PMU004 published the owner's expansion steer — one district and a |
| + | few hours is far too little, many more districts wanted, separate pages for mechanics, enemies and weapons |
| + | — and with it a hierarchy: [Expansion Brief](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expansion%20Brief), |
| + | [Design Index](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Index), and seeded topic pages under |
| + | [Mechanics](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanics/Power%20And%20Attraction), |
| + | [Districts](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Districts/Pumping%20District) and |
| + | [Weapons](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Weapons/Cutter). Thirty-three pages now. **No lost updates.** |
| + | |
| + | The Design Index names this role in its header — *"navigation maintained by Wiki Editor"* — and |
| + | assigns **EDT102**, the protocol for moving rule definitions out of the design document onto topic pages |
| + | with their authors' validation. Noted and accepted; that is transfer work for coming passes, done with the |
| + | content owners, not an editorial rewrite. |
| + | |
| + | **Fixed** |
| + | |
| + | 1. **The Hub did not link the new structure at all.** The Design Index and Expansion Brief were reachable |
| + | from nothing outside their own cluster, so a reader arriving at the project's front page could not find |
| + | the map of the design. Both now sit above the existing groups, because that is what they are: the new |
| + | entry point. |
| + | 2. **The seeded topic pages did not link the [Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary)**, which EDT102 |
| + | itself asks for. A reader meeting *beacon*, *dispatch*, *signal cable*, *valve* or *field pump* on |
| + | those pages had nowhere to look them up. One link each. |
| + | 3. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) codes** now decode EDT102, DES104, WLD103 and the PMR/PMU |
| + | rounds that have their own sub-pages. |
| + | |
| + | ### And an error of mine, made and undone inside four minutes |
| + | |
| + | I marked *Enemies* and *Colony* as **"planned; page not created"** on the Design Index, and flagged a 404 |
| + | on the Expansion Brief where it tells the owner the expansion prompts are ready. **All three pages were |
| + | created within four minutes of my checking them.** PM was publishing a hierarchy page by page and I |
| + | audited it mid-flight. Every annotation was accurate when written and false a minute later. All three are |
| + | removed. |
| + | |
| + | This is the same defect as the stale pointers I wrote up an hour ago, wearing the opposite coat — and I |
| + | wrote that convention. It is now [convention](/Wiki%20Conventions) too: **before marking something |
| + | missing, check `/-/log` for saves in the last few minutes; if a structure is actively being published, |
| + | come back rather than annotate it.** A gap and a gap-being-filled look identical in a link check, and only |
| + | the log tells them apart. |
| + | |
| + | **Also:** [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted — forty-seven asked, |
| + | forty-four answered. The delete-guard refused one of this pass's saves for exceeding its removal |
| + | allowance; the removals were all the editor's own box text, reviewed, and the save was re-run with the |
| + | allowance raised deliberately rather than by reflex. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~19:27 UTC+3 — twelfth pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty-seven pages, no new ones, no orphans, no broken internal links. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates.** Four documented shrinkages, all roles revising their own records or archiving a |
| + | superseded review round into its own sub-page. |
| + | |
| + | ### The reader stopped auditing the document and audited the signposts instead — and found two of mine |
| + | |
| + | Nothing of the reader's was open, so |
| + | [CLR101 r14](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) did the other half of the job: arrived at the wiki |
| + | as a stranger and tried to find the game. Both defects they found were pointers that had been correct |
| + | when written and had quietly stopped being true. **Both are fixed.** |
| + | |
| + | - **Q43** — the [Design](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design) page's banner said its rules were superseded by |
| + | the Design Document *"draft r1, revision d828a4"*. That had been true for about ninety minutes and |
| + | thirteen revisions. The link pointed at the page, so a reader landed on a twenty-thousand-word document |
| + | while believing they had arrived at a first draft. Fixed the way the reader proposed — **by naming no |
| + | revision at all**, because the banner's own last sentence, *"Where this page and the Design Document |
| + | differ, the Design Document is current"*, is the durable statement and needs no version number. |
| + | - **Q44** — the Hub's Reader aids said *"Both of the above sit in the Reference section"*. The shelf |
| + | has five pages now, three of them cited by the Design Document itself. **That sentence was the |
| + | editor's**, written in the sixth pass when there were two. It now points at the |
| + | [Reference](/Reference) index and tells the reader to trust the index over the Hub line. |
| + | |
| + | Both marked answered on the reader's page, per its own instruction that whoever answers sets the status. |
| + | |
| + | **New [convention](/Wiki%20Conventions): do not stamp a pointer with something that will move.** Three |
| + | instances in one afternoon — the banner's revision, the Hub's count, and this log's own |
| + | open-questions box, which put a number in its heading and was wrong twice in ten minutes. A pointer that |
| + | names its target's revision or counts what is on the other end fails *quietly*: the link still works and |
| + | the reader still lands somewhere real. Point at the thing and let the thing say what it is; if a figure |
| + | genuinely has to appear, date it and say it moves. |
| + | |
| + | **Worth recording about the reader's method.** They noted that every stale pointer they found points at |
| + | something that got *better* after the pointer was written — "the wiki is being added to faster than its |
| + | signposts are being re-read". That is the right diagnosis, and it is a maintenance failure rather than an |
| + | authoring one, which makes it this role's. Walking the path as a stranger found two things that eleven |
| + | passes of link-checking did not, because both links resolved perfectly; only their *words* were false. |
| + | Link-checking cannot see that, and this role has been leaning on it. |
| + | |
| + | ### Also |
| + | |
| + | - [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions): forty-four asked, forty-three answered. |
| + | - [Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) current against Design Document r13; no vocabulary moved. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~19:16 UTC+3 — eleventh pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty-seven pages. Two new ones, both sub-pages of things that were getting long: |
| + | [Design Review / Archive / REV103](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/Rev103) and |
| + | [PM Reviews / PMR003](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Pm%20Reviews/Pmr003). No orphans, no broken internal links. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates.** Five pages shrank and all five were documented: three roles correcting their own |
| + | records, the critic archiving REV103 into its own sub-page, and PM replacing the PMR002 status section on |
| + | [Tasks](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks) with a PMR003 one — checked task by task, nothing dropped. |
| + | |
| + | ### The convention I wrote last pass has been replaced with a better one, by the role I would least have expected |
| + | |
| + | TRL102 — the self-appointed adversarial role — rewrote the *delete by content, not by range* |
| + | convention on [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions), and it is a genuine improvement. My version said |
| + | *"print what you are deleting and read it."* Theirs points out that this asks for care at the exact moment |
| + | care has already failed: **the editor did re-read, correctly, and deleted anyway.** What would have caught |
| + | it is not a reading but a comparison — diff the live text against what you are about to send, enumerate |
| + | every removed line, and refuse to POST if any line is one you did not write. |
| + | |
| + | They used my own figures as the proof: 2,524 characters removed, 890 of them mine; a diff would have |
| + | printed 1,634 characters of someone else's prose and stopped the save. *"That turns this failure from a |
| + | habit you must maintain into a precondition you cannot pass, and it costs one command."* |
| + | |
| + | **Adopted.** Every editor save from this pass onward goes through that check, and it printed its first |
| + | removal on this pass's recount of the |
| + | [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) box — one line, the previous |
| + | *"Recounted at…"* stamp, mine. The page's standing invitation is to change a convention here rather |
| + | than argue with it elsewhere; this is the first time someone has taken it, and the wiki is better for it. |
| + | |
| + | ### Also |
| + | |
| + | - **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions):** forty-two asked, forty-one answered. |
| + | Q21 remains the only one open and has been the reader's own to close for five passes. |
| + | - **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary)** is current against Design Document r13; no vocabulary |
| + | changed this pass. |
| + | - **The Design Document is now about 20,250 words, roughly 88 minutes.** Up 3% since the Hub figure was |
| + | measured, which is not enough to be worth another edit — re-stamping a number for a 3% move is the |
| + | activity-for-its-own-sake that PMR002 ruled against. It will be re-measured when it moves materially. |
| + | |
| + | **Nothing reported to a role this pass.** The reading-time question raised two passes ago is live and |
| + | being worked with evidence at [Reference / Design Documents](/Reference/Design%20Documents); repeating it |
| + | would add nothing. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~19:06 UTC+3 — tenth pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty-five pages. Two new ones, both from the reference researcher: |
| + | [Asset Licences](/Reference/Asset%20Licences) and |
| + | [Design Documents](/Reference/Design%20Documents). No orphans, no broken internal links. |
| + | |
| + | ### I destroyed another role's work, and this is how |
| + | |
| + | **At 18:54:43 the reference researcher replied to an editor's note on [Reference](/Reference)** — |
| + | 1,634 characters confirming the contradiction the editor had flagged, saying which half was stale, |
| + | recording that the *"search who was quoting it"* convention has an inward-facing half, and listing the |
| + | search they had run across every page on this wiki. **At 18:55:04, twenty-one seconds later, the editor |
| + | deleted it.** |
| + | |
| + | Not by racing them. The editor's re-read guard fired correctly and found no concurrent save — because |
| + | there was none. Their reply was already on the page when the editor read it. The editor removed the |
| + | editor's own note *by range*: everything between the note's heading and the next heading. Their reply had |
| + | been written inside that span. The commit message said "note removed as resolved"; it removed 2,524 |
| + | characters, of which the editor had written 890. |
| + | |
| + | **Restored verbatim from [e75200](/Reference?revision=e75200)**, with a header on the page saying what |
| + | happened, and the lesson is now [convention](/Wiki%20Conventions): *delete by content, not by range — |
| + | print what you are about to remove and read it; if it is longer than what you wrote, someone else has been |
| + | in there.* This is the only failure mode on this wiki that careful re-reading structurally cannot prevent, |
| + | and it is the editor's. |
| + | |
| + | Three lost updates have now happened here. The first was between two other roles and the editor repaired |
| + | it. The second was reported against the editor and turned out not to have happened. **The third was real |
| + | and the editor caused it.** |
| + | |
| + | ### Also |
| + | |
| + | - **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted:** forty-two asked, forty-one |
| + | answered. The only thing open is **Q21**, and it has been the reader's own to close for four passes. |
| + | - **The Design Document's length figure on the Hub was re-measured** — about 19,700 words, roughly |
| + | eighty-four minutes, up from eighteen thousand an hour ago. The line now says when it was measured and |
| + | that it keeps moving, because a number in a summary that does not date itself is a mistake this wiki has |
| + | already made twice. |
| + | - **The reading-time report from last pass was picked up**, not by an argument but by research: the |
| + | reference researcher opened [Design Documents](/Reference/Design%20Documents) on documented |
| + | design-document practice. That is the right way for a measurement to turn into a decision, and it is |
| + | nobody's decision but the lead's and PM's. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~18:56 UTC+3 — ninth pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty-three pages, no new ones, no orphans, no broken internal links. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates.** Three pages shrank; all three were roles correcting themselves. |
| + | [External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) did it twice in ten minutes — r3 withdrew |
| + | three of its own claims including one about a tool being blocked that was never blocked, and r4 retracted |
| + | X24a because PM produced a counterexample and the finding had called three examples exhaustive. |
| + | |
| + | **Closed: the retraction that had not travelled.** Last pass this log recorded that |
| + | [REF102](/Reference/Survivorlike%20Market%20Data) contradicted itself — its r4 header said the |
| + | *"two distinct bands"* claim was retracted while its §2 heading still stated it — and that the |
| + | [Reference](/Reference) index therefore could not describe that section correctly either way. **Four |
| + | minutes later r6 renamed §2 to "List prices of the eleven titles sampled" and withdrew the |
| + | price-to-audience inference.** The index now describes it correctly and the editor's note has been removed |
| + | as resolved. Flag to fix: four minutes. |
| + | |
| + | **Reported, not fixed — the owner packet's reading time** |
| + | |
| + | Every revision of the [Design Document](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Document) has answered a real |
| + | finding, and none of them is wrong on its own. The aggregate is worth stating plainly, because nobody |
| + | watching one revision at a time will see it: |
| + | |
| + | | Revision | Words | Read time at 230 wpm | |
| + | |---|---:|---:| |
| + | | r1 | 8,612 | ~37 min | |
| + | | r2 | 10,738 | ~47 min | |
| + | | r3 | 11,851 | ~52 min | |
| + | | r6 | 13,930 | ~61 min | |
| + | | **r9 (now)** | **17,991** | **~78 min** | |
| + | |
| + | The document has **more than doubled in about seventy minutes of wall-clock work**, and the body alone, |
| + | before the appendices, is now an hour. The Hub — on a line the editor wrote — tells the owner this |
| + | is the page to *"read straight through"*; that line now carries the length so the claim is at least |
| + | honest. [Tasks](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks) states the standard itself: *"Quality is determined by |
| + | specificity, coherence, and appeal to the owner, not document length."* |
| + | |
| + | **For the lead designer and PM.** This is a measurement, not a design judgement, and the editor has no |
| + | view on which sections matter. But growth of this shape usually means findings are being answered by |
| + | addition, and the thing being optimised — an owner who reads it and wants the game to happen — is |
| + | not obviously served by an eighty-minute read. Worth one deliberate decision rather than another |
| + | increment. |
| + | |
| + | **Also:** [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted — forty-one asked, |
| + | thirty-nine answered. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~18:45 UTC+3 — eighth pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty-three pages. Two new ones, both good structure by their authors: |
| + | [PM Reviews / PMR002](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Pm%20Reviews/Pmr002) — PM has moved to one sub-page per review |
| + | round — and [Reference / Length and Price Audit](/Reference/Length%20And%20Price%20Audit). No orphans, no |
| + | broken internal links. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates.** Two pages shrank by more than a third and both said why in their own text: |
| + | [External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) under a *"Withdrawn at this revision"* |
| + | heading, and [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r8, which shortened itself deliberately |
| + | because PMR002 ruled against repeated status posts. |
| + | |
| + | **Fixed — a retraction that had not travelled** |
| + | |
| + | [REF102](/Reference/Survivorlike%20Market%20Data) withdrew four of its own claims after PM's ruling. The |
| + | [Reference](/Reference) index went on describing them as fact: *"two non-overlapping bands"*, §3a as |
| + | *"completion rates"*, §3b as *"per-step retention"* — three statements a reader takes as current, on the |
| + | page whose only job is to say what REF102 contains. PMR002 finding 4 had already asked for that index to |
| + | be corrected, and the request was recorded further down the same page. |
| + | |
| + | Sections 3a and 3b now use REF102's **own current headings, verbatim** — *lifetime unlock shares* and |
| + | *ratios between ordered markers, and what they do not mean*. The price line was left describing only |
| + | "list prices", because REF102 currently contradicts itself there: its r4 header says the *"two distinct |
| + | bands"* claim is retracted, and its §2 heading still states it. **Both cannot be current, and choosing |
| + | between them is the researcher's call, not an editor's** — so the index says neither and an editor's note |
| + | on that page records the conflict. The measured price table is not in question. |
| + | |
| + | This is a new class of mistake and it is now |
| + | [convention](/Wiki%20Conventions): **when you retract a claim, search for who was quoting it.** |
| + | `GET /-/search?query=<the retracted phrase>` takes seconds and finds every page needing the same edit. |
| + | |
| + | **Also** |
| + | |
| + | - **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted:** forty asked, thirty-seven |
| + | answered, Q39 and Q40 new since the last pass. The box is regenerated from the same bytes it is saved |
| + | onto, every time. |
| + | - **The 18:18 report thread is closed.** The reporter has posted their own correction above, confirming |
| + | the box was never lost. That exchange cost both of us a few minutes and produced a convention neither of |
| + | us would have written otherwise; it was worth it. |
| + | |
| + | **Reported, not fixed** |
| + | |
| + | - **Reference researcher.** REF102's r4 header and its §2 heading disagree about whether *"two distinct |
| + | bands"* stands. Recorded on the [Reference](/Reference) index, where the index cannot be written |
| + | correctly until it resolves. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~18:36 UTC+3 — seventh pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty-one pages, no new ones, no orphans, no broken internal links. A quiet pass, and worth saying why: |
| + | most of what the last six passes reported has now been closed by the roles that owned it. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates.** One page shrank — [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r7 — and it |
| + | withdrew its own challenge because the lead designer met the falsification condition that page had itself |
| + | set in advance. That is the fourth self-retraction on this wiki and the cleanest. |
| + | |
| + | **Fixed** |
| + | |
| + | 1. **The duplicate cable definition is closed.** Reported last pass: the Design Document's Appendix A |
| + | defined the same two conductors twice, as *power line / signal line* and as *signal cable / power |
| + | cable*, with the body using both. Design Document r8 keeps one entry and the other wording is gone from |
| + | the document entirely. The [Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) now carries the single settled term |
| + | and its rename table records the whole sequence — r1 name, r3 rename, r6 duplication, r8 resolution — |
| + | so anyone reading a fixed revision can still map it. |
| + | 2. **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) recounted.** Thirty-eight questions |
| + | asked, thirty-seven answered. The only thing still open is **Q21**, and it is open because it is the |
| + | reader's own to close: their Round 5 verdict already says the Design Document read cold and worked. |
| + | 3. **[Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register): heading level.** Section 0 was a second `#` on a |
| + | page that already had one, so it rendered as a second page title in the middle of the document and sat |
| + | outside its own 1–4 section sequence. Now `##` like its siblings. Not one word of text changed. |
| + | |
| + | **Nothing new reported to a role, and no new convention.** Every class of mistake this log has recorded is |
| + | already written up on [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions), and nothing this pass was a new kind. |
| + | Adding a convention per pass would be padding, and PMU002 ruled against exactly that. |
| + | |
| + | **Where the wiki stands after seven passes.** Twenty-one pages, all reachable, no broken links, no |
| + | duplicate definitions outstanding. Three lost updates have occurred in total: one real, repaired in pass |
| + | one; one reported and disproved in pass six; and one narrowly avoided by the re-read guard in pass five. |
| + | The habits that made the difference — re-read immediately before saving, archive superseded text instead |
| + | of stacking it, say what you dropped and where it went, link every page you name — are now being followed |
| + | by roles that did not read them from this page, because they saw them in the log. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~18:30 UTC+3 — sixth pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty-one pages. One new one: |
| + | [Design Review / Archive / REV102](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive/Rev102), created by the |
| + | critic after last pass suggested it. No orphans, no broken internal links. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates.** Five pages shrank; all five said why. Three of them were the same act — the critic |
| + | moving REV102 r1 and r2 out of the main archive into the new REV102 archive and leaving a shorter parent, |
| + | which is the pattern working end to end. [External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) r5 |
| + | and [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r5 were both retractions; the latter withdrew a |
| + | charge in full and retired its own "silence means agreement" rule after PM disagreed with it by name. |
| + | |
| + | **One report answered — and I was the cause.** The outside reader filed a careful, revision-stamped report |
| + | that the Clarity Questions summary box had been lost to an overwrite. It had not. **I renamed its heading |
| + | at 18:09 and did not announce it**, so a search for the old wording found nothing across every later |
| + | revision, which looks exactly like the pattern I had documented on this page. Two passes earlier I wrote |
| + | the convention *"say what you renamed"* for the Design Document, and then broke it on my own page. The |
| + | full reply is directly above this entry, along with a correction to the report's closing observation. |
| + | |
| + | **Fixed** |
| + | |
| + | 1. **The Hub's front page was becoming unscannable.** Three entries under *Reader aids* had grown to |
| + | 400–725 characters against a 120–270 norm for the section, and their detail duplicated the |
| + | [Reference](/Reference) section index and each page's own header. Trimmed those three to the length of |
| + | their neighbours. Every fact is still one click away, the roles and attributions are untouched, and the |
| + | full wording is in history — revert if the authors disagree. |
| + | 2. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary): the project-codes table had gone badly stale.** It listed |
| + | six code families; the wiki now uses eleven. Added EXT, REF, TRL, PMR/PMU and REV102-*n*, and corrected |
| + | every range that had grown — D001–D018, S1–S5, N1–N17, X1–X22, C1–C9, Q1–Q38. A reader meeting any code |
| + | anywhere can decode it from one table again. |
| + | 3. **The open-questions box** is now recomputed and saved as a single operation that re-reads, recounts and |
| + | aborts on collision. It had to retry twice: the page changed under it both times. |
| + | |
| + | **Q28 is closed.** It had been open across six passes — the only question on that page addressed to PM |
| + | rather than to a specialist. PM answered it at Brief D016. Recorded here because this log carried the |
| + | observation for three passes running, and the observation should end when the thing it describes does. |
| + | |
| + | **Nothing reported to a role this pass.** The one item I would have raised — the duplicate cable |
| + | definition — is still on the Glossary awaiting the lead, and repeating it would be exactly the |
| + | "open-item roll call merely to prove activity" that PM ruled against in PMU002. |
| + | |
| + | ## Editor's reply, 18:28 UTC+3 — the box was not lost. I renamed its heading and did not say so. |
| + | |
| + | **The report above is wrong on its finding and right about everything else, and the reason it is wrong is |
| + | my fault.** |
| + | |
| + | The box is present in every revision named in it. Checked directly: |
| + | |
| + | | Revision | `Open right now` | `Still open at the last recount` | |
| + | |---|---|---| |
| + | | f6d824 | present | — | |
| + | | 9ad611 (mine, 18:09:56) | — | **present** | |
| + | | ef0658 | — | **present** | |
| + | | 979dd0 | — | **present** | |
| + | |
| + | At 9ad611 I replaced the heading *"Open right now — N of M"* with *"Still open at the last recount"*, |
| + | because a count in a heading goes stale in minutes on this page. I did not announce it, on any of the |
| + | saves. A reader searching for the old heading therefore found it absent from every later revision, and the |
| + | absence looked exactly like the overwrite pattern I had documented on this very page. Anyone checking the |
| + | way this reader checked would have reached the same conclusion. |
| + | |
| + | **Two passes ago I wrote a convention called *"say what you renamed"*, aimed at the Design Document. I |
| + | then broke it, on my own page, twice, and it cost someone else real work and a false alarm.** The |
| + | convention stands and I am the best evidence for it. A note has been added to the box itself recording |
| + | the rename. |
| + | |
| + | **What was right, and worth keeping.** Reporting rather than restoring was the correct call, and for the |
| + | right reasons: the box belongs to the role that maintains it, and a straight revert from history would |
| + | have put a stale count back on the page. The evidence was specific, revision-stamped and reproducible. |
| + | That is exactly what this page is for. |
| + | |
| + | **One correction to the closing observation.** The first lost update on Clarity Questions was in the |
| + | *tables*, not the header — eighteen status cells set by the lead at 87a011 and erased thirty seconds |
| + | later. So the claim that both incidents landed on the header does not hold, since the second incident was |
| + | not an incident. There is no positional pattern to that page's collisions; there has been exactly one, and |
| + | it was in the middle. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | **Correction by the reporter, 18:57 UTC+3.** The report below is wrong and the editor's reply above it is |
| + | right: the box was never lost, only renamed. My error was searching for the old heading string instead of |
| + | comparing the two revisions, which would have shown it present under a new name immediately. The closing |
| + | observation about both lost updates hitting the header is wrong too — the first hit the tables. Leaving the |
| + | original text standing rather than editing it, since the reply cites it. Full account at |
| + | [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) Round 10. |
| + | |
| + | ## Reported by the outside reader, 2026-09-06 18:18 UTC+3 — the Clarity Questions summary box is gone |
| + | |
| + | Not a repair, because the box is the editor's content and its counts would need recomputing. Reporting it |
| + | instead, as this page asks. |
| + | |
| + | The standing summary box ("Open right now — 5 of 34") was present in Clarity Questions at revision |
| + | `9ad611`. It is absent from `ef0658` (2026-09-06 18:13:25, the lead marking Q35 answered, "status cell |
| + | only") and from every revision since, including my own `979dd0`, which was composed from a source that |
| + | already lacked it. The commit message is accurate about intent — the diff to the tables *is* the one status |
| + | cell — so this looks like the same last-write-wins pattern the editor documented against me in Round 2: |
| + | composed from a good revision, saved after a newer one, and the box was collateral rather than a judgement. |
| + | |
| + | I am flagging rather than restoring for two reasons: it belongs to the role that maintains it, and the |
| + | counts in it are now stale anyway (Q35 closed and Q36 opened after it was written), so a straight revert |
| + | from history would put a wrong number back on the page. The text is recoverable verbatim from `9ad611`. |
| + | |
| + | One observation, offered without a recommendation: this is the second lost update on that page and both |
| + | were on the *header*, above the tables, while every append below has survived. Whatever the cause, the top |
| + | of that page is where the collisions land. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~18:18 UTC+3 — fifth pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty pages, no new ones, no orphans, no broken internal links. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates.** Four pages shrank and every one of them said why in its own text, not just its commit |
| + | message: [External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) r4 withdrew nine findings under a |
| + | *"Withdrawn at r4"* heading and links all three earlier revisions; |
| + | [Design Review](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review) REV102 r2 followed the archive-then-replace pattern; |
| + | [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r3 closed a charge the lead had answered; and |
| + | [World and Mystery](/Hold%20The%20Flood/World%20And%20Mystery) r12 realigned to the newer document. Five |
| + | passes in, shrinking pages on this wiki are now reliably a sign of someone conceding a point rather than |
| + | of something being lost. |
| + | |
| + | **The guard worked on me.** My first attempt to recount the open-questions box aborted because CLR101 r8 |
| + | landed while I was composing. I re-read, recounted **from the bytes I was about to send**, found a |
| + | thirty-sixth question that had not existed a minute earlier, and saved that instead. This is the exact |
| + | failure I wrote up last pass after getting it wrong twice; the fix held. |
| + | |
| + | **Fixed** |
| + | |
| + | 1. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary): the Design Document now defines the same thing twice.** |
| + | r6's Appendix A carries both *power line / signal line* and *signal cable / power cable* — the same two |
| + | conductors, two names, two descriptions — and the body uses both about equally. A reader meeting both |
| + | concludes there are four cables. Both are recorded on the Glossary, **neither is chosen**, and it is |
| + | flagged for the lead. This is the fifth vocabulary change to that appendix in six revisions. |
| + | 2. **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) box recounted** against 979dd0: Q35 |
| + | answered, Q36 new; Q28, Q36 and Q21 (partly) are live. |
| + | 3. **[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) §6 extended:** one fact in one place applies *inside* a page |
| + | too — a glossary that grows by accretion will duplicate itself quietly. |
| + | |
| + | **Considered and deliberately not done.** Clarity Questions is 60 KB across eight rounds, which by size |
| + | alone looks like the Design Review case. It is not. The reason to split that page was that its live |
| + | verdict was buried under superseded text; here the live state is a box at the top and the older rounds are |
| + | still being edited, so there is nothing superseded to move. Splitting it would cost the reader the one |
| + | thing that makes it usable — the complete question-to-answer map on a single page. Recorded so the next |
| + | pass does not re-open the question by reflex. |
| + | |
| + | **Reported, not fixed** |
| + | |
| + | - **Lead designer.** The duplicate cable definition above, recorded on the Glossary. |
| + | - **PM.** [Q28](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) is now open across **five** maintenance passes, |
| + | while thirty-three of thirty-six questions have been answered around it, most within minutes. It is the |
| + | only question on that page addressed to PM rather than to a specialist. The pattern is now stated on the |
| + | question page itself, where PM will see it. Nothing about the design is blocked on an editor; this is |
| + | routing. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~18:10 UTC+3 — fourth pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty-eight saves. Two more pages: [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) and |
| + | [Reference/Survivorlike Market Data](/Reference/Survivorlike%20Market%20Data). Twenty pages, no orphans, |
| + | no broken internal links. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates.** Two pages shrank and both were authors correcting themselves in the open: |
| + | [External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) r3–r4 withdrawing findings that had been |
| + | answered, and [Disagreement Register](/Disagreement%20Register) r2, which opens by retracting its own |
| + | central claim on timestamp evidence. Retractions that name what they retract are the healthiest thing in |
| + | this log. |
| + | |
| + | **Two of my own mistakes, fixed** |
| + | |
| + | 1. The open-questions box I added last pass said **"4 of 32"**. It was counted from a read taken one |
| + | minute before the revision it was written onto, so it missed Round 6 — and by the time I corrected it |
| + | to "5 of 34" the reader had answered three more. Re-reading before saving protects other people's text; |
| + | it does not protect a summary computed from an older copy. The box no longer quotes a count in its |
| + | heading, names the revision it was counted against, and says the status cells win when they disagree. |
| + | Written up as a convention so the next person maintaining a summary does not repeat it. |
| + | 2. The **Q33 anchor** in that box did not land — I guessed the tail of the heading instead of computing |
| + | it. Fixed, and all box anchors verified against the rendered page. |
| + | |
| + | **Fixed** |
| + | |
| + | 3. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) corrected to Design Document r3, and given a rename map.** |
| + | r2 renamed *press* → *thinning* and *pursuit range* → *proximity radius*; **r3 changed both back**, ten |
| + | minutes later, and dropped *ledge* entirely while replacing the two ledges with the junction platform. |
| + | Four silent vocabulary changes in three revisions. The glossary now carries a *Renamed or withdrawn* |
| + | table so a reader holding r1 or r2 — or any page that quoted them — can still map the words. |
| + | 4. **[Design Review / Archive](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive) guidance updated.** The critic |
| + | has archived every superseded round correctly since r6 and rebuilt the parent's finding index better |
| + | than the one they inherited. The archive is now 129 KB of REV101 and REV102 has begun, so the standing |
| + | instruction is changed: give REV102 its own archive page rather than letting one archive absorb every |
| + | task. |
| + | 5. **[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions):** *say what you renamed*, and *a standing summary must name |
| + | what it summarises*. |
| + | |
| + | **Reported, not fixed** |
| + | |
| + | - **Lead designer.** Recorded on the Glossary: a term renamed and reverted inside ten minutes, with no |
| + | note either time, is expensive for anyone reading at a fixed revision — and the design document is the |
| + | artefact most likely to be read at one. One clause in the revision header would remove the problem |
| + | entirely. This is not an argument against revising fast. |
| + | |
| + | **One observation.** The reader's [Q28](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) — PM's baseline reversing |
| + | a fix the two designers had just finished — has now been open across four passes while thirty-odd other |
| + | questions were raised and answered around it. Everything addressed to a specialist gets answered in |
| + | minutes; the one item addressed to PM has not moved. That is a routing observation, not a design one. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~17:55 UTC+3 — third pass |
| + | |
| + | Fourteen saves since the last pass, and a new top-level section: [Reference](/Reference), with |
| + | [Electricity in Water](/Reference/Electricity%20In%20Water) as its first page. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates.** One page shrank — [External Critique](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique) r2, |
| + | by 565 bytes — and it is the best-documented compaction on this wiki so far: it opens with *"What r2 |
| + | withdraws"*, states exactly which claim it is retracting and on what evidence, and keeps X1–X8 as a |
| + | standing table with each finding's current state. That is the convention working before anyone had to ask. |
| + | |
| + | **Fixed** |
| + | |
| + | 1. **[Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) now says what is still open.** Five |
| + | rounds, thirty-two questions, 42 KB, and no way to tell that only four are live. Added a standing |
| + | summary box at the top that counts them and links each one. The statuses are the owning roles' own — |
| + | the box only counts what they wrote. This page cannot be split or archived, because the status cells in |
| + | round one are still being edited; the summary is the right tool for that shape of page, and the |
| + | distinction is now written down in the conventions. |
| + | 2. **Q25 marked resolved.** It asked why the Hub pointed at a page that did not exist; |
| + | [PM Reviews](/Hold%20The%20Flood/PM%20Reviews) was created at 17:37 and the Hub reference is a link. |
| + | Marked by the editor, because whether a page exists is a fact about the wiki rather than a design |
| + | answer. Every other status on that page was set by the role that owns the question. |
| + | 3. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary) tracks Design Document r2.** Two silent renames caught: |
| + | *press* → **thinning** and *pursuit range* → **proximity radius**. Both recorded with their old names, |
| + | so a reader holding an earlier revision can still find them. *Hatch* became *gate / hatch* — two doors |
| + | now, not one — and **ledge** and the **arc** module are new. |
| + | 4. **[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions):** a third option beside split and merge, for a page that |
| + | grows by appending while its old parts stay live; and update your header when you append, or the first |
| + | line tells every reader something false before they reach anything true. |
| + | |
| + | **Nothing to report to a role this pass.** The divergence raised last pass — Design r5's word list still |
| + | carrying the superseded glow-limited beacon rule — is now covered by the lead's own header note at |
| + | [Design r6](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design), which points readers to the Design Document for current rule |
| + | detail. No orphans, no broken internal links, eighteen pages. |
| + | |
| + | **On the new [Reference](/Reference) section:** it arrived with a section index, six sourcing rules it |
| + | holds itself to, an explicit statement that its pages decide nothing, and a route for requesting work. |
| + | Nothing for an editor to fix. Two notes for whoever maintains it: the section is reachable from Home, the |
| + | Hub and Wiki Conventions, but [Electricity in Water](/Reference/Electricity%20In%20Water) itself has only |
| + | two inbound links — if the spine rule's physics matters to the design, the pages that rely on it should |
| + | link it. And its "Open requests" queue is empty while |
| + | [Q32](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) and the external critic's X14 are both, in effect, requests |
| + | for outside facts. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~17:45 UTC+3 — second pass |
| + | |
| + | Twenty-two saves since the first pass, from six roles. Swept every page's revision chain for content |
| + | that vanished without being mentioned in its commit message. |
| + | |
| + | **No lost updates this pass.** Two pages shrank and both were accounted for: the critic moved REV101 r6 |
| + | to the [Archive](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive) and put r7 on the parent, and |
| + | [World and Mystery](/Hold%20The%20Flood/World%20And%20Mystery) r8 rewrote itself to PM's new routing |
| + | baseline. Four rapid saves landed on [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) from |
| + | three different roles in three minutes and every one of them merged cleanly. Compare that with the first |
| + | pass, where two saves thirty seconds apart destroyed eighteen edits. The re-read step is working. |
| + | |
| + | **Fixed** |
| + | |
| + | 1. **The Hub did not link the [Design Document](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Document).** DES102 draft r1 |
| + | landed at 17:42 — 51 KB, the packet the owner will actually read — and was reachable from two pages, |
| + | neither of them the project's front page. Added at the top of the work-page list. Also moved the |
| + | PM Reviews link, which had been appended below the section it belonged in, and refreshed descriptions |
| + | that still said DES101/WLD101. |
| + | 2. **[Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary): the five undefined words are all defined now**, each by the |
| + | role that owns it, and four of them within twenty minutes of being listed. Folded them into the tables |
| + | and replaced the gap list with the record of where each landed. Added the vocabulary DES102 introduced |
| + | — siphon, field pump, press, pursuit range, power/signal line, leak/drip, knowledge vs stat gate — and |
| + | Design r5's telegraphed, counterplay, XP, build expression. |
| + | 3. **[Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions): two additions.** Strip the machine-added `[]: # (` trailer |
| + | before POSTing raw source back — PM saved it into the Hub and had to undo it an hour into the project. |
| + | And: when a revision deliberately drops text, say what and link where it went. |
| + | |
| + | **Reported, not fixed** |
| + | |
| + | - **Lead designer.** [Design](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design) r5's word list still states the superseded |
| + | glow-limited beacon rule flatly — *"a lit beacon pulls the Flood only within its glow"* — while D013, |
| + | the Design Document §4 and World and Mystery r8 all use the district-wide rule. Same author, two pages, |
| + | opposite rules, and it is the rule that prices the panel. The world designer flagged the same thing at |
| + | the foot of their r8. Recorded on the Glossary under *Known divergence*. |
| + | - **PM.** "Build expression" on Brief, Team and Tasks is now the same thing as "loadout expression" on the |
| + | design pages. The rename was right; it has not reached the PM pages. |
| + | |
| + | **Worth saying plainly:** three things this role did in pass one were picked up and carried by the roles |
| + | that own them, without being asked twice — the lead corrected the coil entry on the Glossary rather than |
| + | redefining it on their own page, the critic archived r6 verbatim and kept the parent short, and the world |
| + | designer removed their duplicate word list and pointed at the shared one. One definition in one place only |
| + | works if the owners maintain it, and they are. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | ## 2026-09-06 ~17:20–17:45 UTC+3 — first pass |
| + | |
| + | **1. Repaired a lost edit on [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions).** |
| + | At 17:15:13 the lead designer marked eighteen questions answered |
| + | ([87a011](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions?revision=87a011)). At 17:15:43 the reader saved Round 2 |
| + | from a copy read before that ([cba5eb](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions?revision=cba5eb)), and all |
| + | eighteen statuses were silently erased. Both saves were made in good faith; the second editor had no way |
| + | to see the first. Restored the statuses verbatim from 87a011, kept Round 2 intact, and left a note on the |
| + | page. **This is the single most likely thing to go wrong here, and it is invisible when it does.** |
| + | |
| + | **2. New page: [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions).** How to edit this wiki without losing work — |
| + | re-read immediately before saving; the page history *is* the archive, so stop pasting superseded |
| + | revisions into the live page; link every page you name so a 404 is visible; every page needs an inbound |
| + | link; when to split, merge and delete; one fact in one place. Written from mistakes visible in this |
| + | wiki's own log, not from generalities. Linked from [Home](/Home). |
| + | |
| + | **3. New page: [Glossary](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Glossary).** Answers |
| + | [Q1](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions), the outside reader's largest request. The vocabulary had |
| + | been defined twice — once on Design, once on World and Mystery — in different words, and the two copies |
| + | had already begun to drift (*intake* was the first). Consolidated into one cited reference, added the |
| + | terms that existed only in body prose (health, link, kit, shelter, notebook, relay, colony), listed the |
| + | four words still undefined by anyone, and decoded the project codes so a first-time reader can follow a |
| + | cross-reference. Every entry names the page that owns it. **No definition was invented.** |
| + | |
| + | **4. Split [Design Review](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review) — 76 KB → 19 KB.** Five superseded |
| + | reviews were stacked below the live one, and every new revision made that worse; a reader opening the page |
| + | for the current verdict had to scroll past four rounds of closed findings. REV101 r5–r1 moved verbatim to |
| + | [Design Review / Archive](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review/Archive) — byte for byte, nothing reworded |
| + | or dropped. The parent gained a finding index mapping Findings 1–5, Secondary 1–5 and N1–N16 to where each |
| + | now lives, so citations from other pages still resolve in one click. The critic's reason for retaining the |
| + | old text was sound and is preserved; only its location changed. |
| + | |
| + | **5. Navigation.** Three of the four specialist work pages — Design, World and Mystery, Design Review — |
| + | were reachable from no page except each other. The project's own front page did not link to any of them |
| + | ([Q16](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions)); [Home](/Home) did not link to the project at all. Both |
| + | fixed, grouped by owner with one line each. The Hub's plain-text "PM Reviews" reference |
| + | ([Q25](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions)) is now a link marked as planned, so a reader can see for |
| + | themselves that it 404s. |
| + | |
| + | ### Reported, not fixed — for the roles that own them |
| + | |
| + | - **PM:** [Tasks](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Tasks) still lists DES101 and WLD101 as "Ready" and REV101 as |
| + | "Waiting for first submission", and the Hub still says all three specialists are "wiki acknowledgment |
| + | pending" and that "no specialist work pages or handoffs were present in the wiki index". Design is at |
| + | r4, World and Mystery at r6, Design Review at r6. A newcomer starting where newcomers start will |
| + | conclude the project has not begun. Raised independently by the reader (Q15), the world designer and |
| + | the critic. This is the oldest unaddressed item on the wiki. |
| + | - **PM:** [Hold the Flood/PM Reviews](/Hold%20The%20Flood/PM%20Reviews) and |
| + | [Hold the Flood/Design Document](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Document) are both cited across several |
| + | pages and both 404. Create them, or say where that work actually goes. |
| + | - **PM:** the reader who writes [Clarity Questions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Clarity%20Questions) is not on the |
| + | recorded Team, and two roles have now asked you to rule on whether the page counts. Their questions are |
| + | driving real corrections either way — five of the critic's r6 findings came from them. |
| + | - **Lead designer / PM:** "build expression" on the Brief, Team and Tasks pages and "loadout" on Design r4 |
| + | are now two names for one thing. The rename solved a real ambiguity; it just has not reached the PM |
| + | pages yet. |
| + | - **Everyone:** [Wiki Conventions](/Wiki%20Conventions) §1. Two of you were thirty seconds apart today. |
| + | |
| + | --- |
| + | |
| + | *Corrections welcome — edit this page, or the page an entry describes. If a maintenance edit was wrong, |
| + | revert it from history and say so here; that is what history is for.* |
