2026-09-15 17:59:19
Anonymous:
Integrate the reviewed former-patient scene and its evidence conditions
hold the flood/hospital story directions.md ..
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| The player takes the passage before the stage commits. | The presentation remains pending for a later eligible open release. The reachable card supplies Nadi's history now, but no claim of a meeting. |
| The near ward is sealed before commitment. | The presentation is omitted. The other ward may release only its own generic bodies; Nadi's card remains. |
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| The stage commits, but the marked Presser is defeated or the near door closes before it crosses. | The one-time presentation is spent, with no comb trace and no replacement. The result is card-only history. |
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| The stage commits, but the marked Presser is defeated or the near door closes before it crosses. | The one-time presentation is spent, with no comb trace and no replacement. Witnessing the marked body supports its presence behind the door; otherwise only its recorded history is known. |
| The marked Presser crosses, whether noticed or not. | A witnessed crossing or later inspected trace supports that narrow fact. A late seal leaves the body active; an unseen bypass may still lead back to the trace. |
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Later expeditions refill viable sources with generic bodies only, while permanent seals and any completed trace remain. Bodies already through a late seal remain active. The sealed-local-source route supplied from R35 never moves Nadi into its migrated population. No corpse is promised to remain, and the state does not say that defeating the body ended restoration or where Nadi's identity could exist later.
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After the presentation is spent or omitted, later expeditions refill viable sources with generic bodies only, while permanent seals and any completed trace remain. Bodies already through a late seal remain active. The sealed-local-source route supplied from R35 never moves Nadi into its migrated population. No corpse is promised to remain, and the state does not say that defeating the body ended restoration or where Nadi's identity could exist later.
Back aboard, the optional exchange sits beside **I2 — Two actual passes** at the ship gait rail, after Ivo is Sent. The player may show the card before or after commissioning the rail, defer it or keep it private. Showing Nadi's record does not repair the rail or complete either of its two actual astronaut tests. If Ivo is absent, no one contributes his memory or reacts unseen.
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With a witnessed crossing or an inspected and captured comb trace:
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With a witnessed crossing of the paired marks, or an inspected and captured comb trace:
> **Astronaut, if witnessed:** “I saw 4B-17 cross the near door.”
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This fuller version adds a record, one readable strip-and-brace variant, a fixed threshold trace, local pending/omitted/spent-without-trace/spent-with-trace states and optional Ivo lines. Any special model, decal, portrait, voice or animation would be future asset work and is not approved here. Recognition may be moving because a triumphant build becomes evidence about one person without becoming a wrong choice. It will fail if the marks are too subtle, glow like a quest target, interrupt the horde with a checklist, or use pity, guilt or scolding dialogue to punish combat.
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The cheaper alternative keeps Nadi's fixed card reachable before the release and folds two lines about her disagreement into Ivo's existing scene. It removes the marked Presser, threshold trace, presentation states and any new visual asset. The player can therefore know Nadi before fighting, but cannot recognise one moving body as hers or recover later crossing evidence. That version is harder to mistake for a protected target and costs much less, but a particular former person never changes the meaning of the horde while it is happening. Neither treatment chooses between the two core alternatives below.
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The cheaper alternative keeps Nadi's fixed card reachable before the release and folds two lines about her disagreement into Ivo's existing scene. It removes the marked Presser, threshold trace, presentation states and any new visual asset. The player can therefore know Nadi before fighting, but cannot recognise one moving body as hers or recover later crossing evidence. That version is harder to mistake for a protected target and costs much less, but loses the moment of recognising her particular body inside the moving crowd. Neither treatment chooses between the two core alternatives below.
