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**Status.** A finite index over content that already exists: it maps the eight accepted chains and fifteen primary cast scenes onto the actual rooms, controls, objects and observations they consume, and records where those interfaces agree or conflict. It is **not** a campaign map, a scheduler, new content, story truth, language grammar or a validation of anything. No new chain, person, room, mechanism, scene or object is created here. All five owner questions remain unanswered, and only their actual consumers are marked conditional.
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**Sources read live for this revision, with full hashes.**
The index uses the source revisions above. A later change to a cited observation or state boundary requires checking its consumers; a new revision alone does not rename the underlying room, person or object.
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**Counts.** 8 chains (L1–L4, S1–S4) · 15 primary scenes (Y1–Y3, A1–A3, D1–D3, M1–M3, I1–I3) · **26 evidence index entries**, reusing their actual records and objects · 7 mutually exclusive rescue host variants · 5 Story30 personal variants · 2 dependency orders. Existing inventories are unchanged: 24 modules / 40 rooms, 10 encounters including 2 setpieces, 13 major mechanisms.
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**Counts.** 8 chains (L1–L4, S1–S4) · 15 primary scenes (Y1–Y3, A1–A3, D1–D3, M1–M3, I1–I3) · **26 evidence index entries**, reusing their actual records and objects · 7 mutually exclusive rescue host variants · 5 Story and Ending Map personal variants · 2 dependency orders. Existing inventories are unchanged: 24 modules / 40 rooms, 10 encounters including 2 setpieces, 13 major mechanisms.
## 0. Identifier provenance
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**Established identities:** scene IDs Y1–I3 belong to Cast and Short Rescue Map; R01–R40 and M01–M24 to Station Room and Module Inventory; objective numbers 1–12 to Regional Discovery Map. **L1–L4 and S1–S4 are index labels here for the four numbered chains in Two Language Discovery Map and Story and Ending Map respectively.** Those parents do not literally define these prefixed IDs. Room32 already uses L2 as shorthand for the second language chain; this index preserves that reference without inventing a parent-owned ID register.
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**Established identities:** scene IDs Y1–I3 belong to Cast and Short Rescue Map; R01–R40 and M01–M24 to Station Room and Module Inventory; objective numbers 1–12 to Regional Discovery Map. **L1–L4 and S1–S4 are index labels here for the four numbered chains in Two Language Discovery Map and Story and Ending Map respectively.** Those parents do not literally define these prefixed IDs. Station Room and Module Inventory already uses L2 as shorthand for the second language chain; this index preserves that reference without inventing a parent-owned ID register.
**Evidence aliases:** every `A-…` key below is a locally created index handle for observations in the cited source descriptions. The source-owner table below names those descriptions and the player decisions they inform. A handle can group the readings needed for one comparison; it is not a new object or a promise that the game captures a whole sequence in one action. No established identity is renumbered, and parents need not adopt these aliases.
**Scenes carry chain positions many-to-many.** Story30 does not allocate its personal variants exclusively to one chain each, and reading them as 1:1 was an error in the earlier draft:
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| Scene | Story30 variant | Chain positions it carries |
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| **L1** Which main ends here? | Two Language Discovery Map chain 1 | R14, R15, R16; the two service mains | `A-RUNS`, `A-TAAN` |
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| **L2** What is behind the marked wall? | Two Language Discovery Map chain 2 | R04, R15 edge, R17, R26 slab | `A-WALLMARK` |
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| **L3** Which end receives? | Two Language Discovery Map chain 3 | R21, R22, R23 one-way fixtures | `A-TRANSFER` |
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| **L4** Does the line answer? | Two Language Discovery Map chain 4 | R28–R30 racks and reply niche; R36 inlet plate/reply face | `A-AB`, `A-ADDRESS`, `A-REPLY` |
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| **S1** The berth that remembers | Story and Ending Map chain 1 | R03 staged fasteners; R02 installed Fork; ship berth | `A-BERTH`, `A-MANIFEST`, `A-INSTALLED`, `A-BEDSIDE` |
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| **S2** The harmful profile | Story and Ending Map chain 2 | R13 ward machine, R19 comparison bay, R28 regulators, R40 coupling | `A-WARDLOG`, `A-WARDID`, `A-PROFILE`, `A-CARD`, `A-TREAT`, `A-REPLY` |
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| **S3** The last transfer | Story and Ending Map chain 3 | R18 destination drawer/card and ratchet; ship table/receiver | `A-WALLLOG`, `A-LEDGER`, `A-R18SEAL`, `A-SEALACCOUNT`, `A-CYCLE`, `A-TRANSFER` |
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| **S4** What the core contains | Story and Ending Map chain 4 | R28–R30 reply, R32 notes, R36 iris/strip, R39 cell, R40 isolation | `A-REPLY`, `A-CORENOTES`, `A-STRIP`, `A-CELL`, `A-ISOLATION`, `A-TREAT` |
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| **Y1** The wall must come | Cast and Short Rescue Map | R13 if Yeva-first, else R19 annex; one junction; R12 abort | `A-WALLLOG` |
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| **Y2** The dark bench | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Home and Colony Loop projects 1/2 | Ship bench, inherited compressor head/housing | — (state, not evidence) |
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| **Y3** The profile is not the person | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Story and Ending Map variant 2 | Ship | `A-PROFILE` |
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| **A1** Lock behind me | Cast and Short Rescue Map | R13 if Aster-first, else R22 booth; R24 or R12 abort | — |
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| **A2** Count only what we have | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Home and Colony Loop project 3 | Ship ledger table | `A-LEDGER` |
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| **A3** This docking, perhaps | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Story and Ending Map variant 1 | Ship berth/table | `A-BERTH`, `A-MANIFEST` |
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| **D1** Keep the section shut? | Cast and Short Rescue Map | R18, R17 approach, R12 abort; hoist control seat | `A-R18SEAL`, `A-SEALACCOUNT` |
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| **D2** Two leads, one Fork | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Coming Home, Home and Colony Loop 1/2 | Ship receiver/bench | — |
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| **D3** What crossed | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Story and Ending Map variant 4 | Ship ledger table/receiver | `A-WALLLOG`, `A-LEDGER`, `A-SEALACCOUNT`, `A-CYCLE` |
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| **M1** Clean side | Cast and Short Rescue Map | R26 booth, R27 clean abort; rack seal | `A-RACK` |
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| **M2** Catch, don't spend | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Home and Colony Loop project 4 | Ship material tray/cradle | — |
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| **M3** A machine made this | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Story and Ending Map variant 3 | Ship tray/evidence shelf | `A-PROFILE`, `A-ISOLATION` |
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| **I1** My pace | Cast and Short Rescue Map | R05 bay, R06 braced alcove; approach plate | — |
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| **I2** Two actual passes | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Home and Colony Loop project 5 | Ship gait rail | — |
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| **I3** Ask before treatment | Cast and Short Rescue Map; Story and Ending Map variant 5 | Ship | `A-TREAT` |
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**Scenes carry chain positions many-to-many.** Story and Ending Map does not allocate its personal variants exclusively to one chain each:
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| Scene | Story and Ending Map variant | Chain positions it carries |
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| A3 | 1 | S1 |
| Y3 | 2 | S2 |
| M3 | 3 | **S2 and S4** — preserving a trace before a live feed is disconnected is evidence stewardship about the profile *and* about the isolation act |
| D3 | 4 | S3 |
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| I3 | 5 | **S2 and S4** — the consent boundary concerns the treatment *and* the core branch that Story30 names in its chain-4 human paragraph |
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| I3 | 5 | **S2 and S4** — the consent boundary concerns the treatment *and* the core branch that Story and Ending Map names in its chain-4 human paragraph |
**Host variants (7).** R13 hosts Y1 **or** A1, never both; the other person takes R19 pressure annex (Yeva) or R22 supply booth (Aster). Abort hosts are the four already counted rooms — R06, R12, R24, R27 — and no scene adds a fifth.
| A-RUNS, A-TAAN | [Language map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map), chain1; Room32 R14–R16 | Which service control to try; whether the positional reading survives the stair-only counterexample |
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| A-WALLMARK | Language map chain2; Room32 R04/R15/R17/R26 | Whether to spend cutter time investigating the marked panel/slab instead of the longer access |
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| A-TRANSFER | Language map chain3; Room32 R21–R23; Story30 chain3 | Which continuation to investigate; what material-transfer direction establishes about the disputed movement |
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| A-AB, A-ADDRESS, A-REPLY | Language map chain4; Room32 R14/R15/R21–R23/R28–R30/R36 | Do the named work, try a matching deferral, or leave the line unanswered; distinguish response from proof of a speaker |
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| A-BEDSIDE, A-BERTH, A-MANIFEST, A-INSTALLED | [Story map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map), chain1; Save/Continuity; Cast31 A3 | Compare return with retained world work, investigate the berth, reclaim an installed part, and show Aster evidence for a narrower explanation |
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| A-WARDLOG, A-WARDID, A-PROFILE | Story map chain2; Room32 R13/R19; Cast31 Y3/M3 | Test or bypass a particular profile instead of assuming all revival corrupts; preserve the actual before-isolation comparison |
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| A-CORENOTES, A-CELL, A-ISOLATION | Story map chain4; Room32 R32/R39/R40 | Inspect competing core accounts; in the chosen story branch re-seat isolation, leave coupled or postpone. R39's living and empty packages remain mutually exclusive alternatives |
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| A-STRIP, A-CARD | Story map historical chronology; Room32 R36/R19, with the same A-BERTH trace | Compare the strip, commissioning fields and docking registration to assess a limited event order; do not convert it into proof of motive. A-CARD's existing record may also contribute to A-WARDID; it is not duplicated |
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| A-WALLLOG, A-LEDGER, A-R18SEAL, A-SEALACCOUNT, A-CYCLE | [Cast map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Cast%20And%20Short%20Rescue%20Map), Y1/A2/D1/D3; Story map chain3; Room32 R13/R18/R19 | Capture under pressure or cross; choose sealed-side access or direct opening; compare attributed accounts with destination evidence and reconsider an accusation |
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| A-RACK | Cast map M1; Room32 R26 | Purge the local rack or preserve it; this is separate from Story30's culture comparison |
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| A-RUNS, A-TAAN | [Language map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map), chain1; Station Room and Module Inventory R14–R16 | Which service control to try; whether the positional reading survives the stair-only counterexample |
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| A-WALLMARK | Language map chain2; Station Room and Module Inventory R04/R15/R17/R26 | Whether to spend cutter time investigating the marked panel/slab instead of the longer access |
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| A-TRANSFER | Language map chain3; Station Room and Module Inventory R21–R23; Story and Ending Map chain3 | Which continuation to investigate; what material-transfer direction establishes about the disputed movement |
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| A-AB, A-ADDRESS, A-REPLY | Language map chain4; Station Room and Module Inventory R14/R15/R21–R23/R28–R30/R36 | Do the named work, try a matching deferral, or leave the line unanswered; distinguish response from proof of a speaker |
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| A-BEDSIDE, A-BERTH, A-MANIFEST, A-INSTALLED | [Story map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map), chain1; Save/Continuity; Cast and Short Rescue Map A3 | Compare return with retained world work, investigate the berth, reclaim an installed part, and show Aster evidence for a narrower explanation |
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| A-WARDLOG, A-WARDID, A-PROFILE | Story map chain2; Station Room and Module Inventory R13/R19; Cast and Short Rescue Map Y3/M3 | Test or bypass a particular profile instead of assuming all revival corrupts; preserve the actual before-isolation comparison |
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| A-CORENOTES, A-CELL, A-ISOLATION | Story map chain4; Station Room and Module Inventory R32/R39/R40 | Inspect competing core accounts; in the chosen story branch re-seat isolation, leave coupled or postpone. R39's living and empty packages remain mutually exclusive alternatives |
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| A-STRIP, A-CARD | Story map historical chronology; Station Room and Module Inventory R36/R19, with the same A-BERTH trace | Compare the strip, commissioning fields and docking registration to assess a limited event order; do not convert it into proof of motive. A-CARD's existing record may also contribute to A-WARDID; it is not duplicated |
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| A-WALLLOG, A-LEDGER, A-R18SEAL, A-SEALACCOUNT, A-CYCLE | [Cast map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Cast%20And%20Short%20Rescue%20Map), Y1/A2/D1/D3; Story map chain3; Station Room and Module Inventory R13/R18/R19 | Capture under pressure or cross; choose sealed-side access or direct opening; compare attributed accounts with destination evidence and reconsider an accusation |
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| A-RACK | Cast map M1; Station Room and Module Inventory R26 | Purge the local rack or preserve it; this is separate from Story and Ending Map's culture comparison |
| A-TREAT | Story map chain2/personal variant5 and the linked voluntary-treatment proposal; Cast map I3 | Accept, refuse, defer or purge after observing the authored benefit and hostile correction cue; show Ivo the evidence without treating consent as an unlock |
## 3. Representative state and commit boundaries
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## 4. The two dependency orders
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These are Regional25's two viable orders. The arrows are **dependency priorities, not corridors**; current access can interleave eligible objectives, and either order can defer R-3 until its short geometry exists.
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These are Regional Discovery Map's two viable orders. The arrows are **dependency priorities, not corridors**; current access can interleave eligible objectives, and either order can defer R-3 until its short geometry exists.
**Build-and-ship first — 1 → 2 → 3 → 4 → 8 → 6 → 10, then 5 → 7 → 9 → 11 → 12.** Objective 1 supplies `A-INSTALLED` at R02/R03 and `A-BERTH`; the first death makes routes historical while those facts stay current, which is S1's whole opening. Objectives 2, 3, 4 and 8 earn movement, impact and positional parts and expose the physical wall/panel/slab differences used by L2 at 1 and 8, before systematic language comparison. Seeing those differences does not automatically grant their interpretation. **Objective 6 completes without language**, from gauges and the long access, so `A-R18SEAL`, `A-CYCLE` and D1 are available before L2's shortcut is understood; 10 then exposes the conditional apparent-departure preparation. Only afterwards do 5, 7 and 9 supply `A-RUNS`, `A-TAAN`, `A-TRANSFER`, `A-AB`, `A-ADDRESS` and `A-REPLY`, which **reinterpret evidence already stored** rather than unlocking it. Objective 11 asks for the same physical pressure-equalisation action it always asks for; the language routes make it predictable, never optional. Objective 12 depends on authored placement and a selected joining rule — not on 10, rescue, treatment or an ending.
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**3 — Absent versus uninformed participant.** `A-PROFILE` is committed. If Dorn was never rescued, Y3 has no Dorn variant and nothing is lost invisibly. If Dorn is aboard but has not been shown the comparison, he is **present and uninformed** — a different state, and his knowledge does not update by proximity.
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**4 — Apparent versus deeper ending, with the departure branch unselected.** Objective 10's assemblies can make readiness true with no language, survivor or core answer. The deeper transaction at R40 is separate and does not require it. **The departure branch is an unselected owner choice, not a settled fact:** Story30 *recommends* an irreversible apparent-credit departure — leaving the field ending revival and closing station exploration in this continuity — against the alternative of keeping readiness as a repair milestone with no departure at all, and the outline treats field-limited revival and irreversible departure as optional assumptions. Save policy is a further open question, not the whole of it. This article selects neither, and objective 12 neither triggers nor blocks either.
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**4 — Apparent versus deeper ending, with the departure branch unselected.** Objective 10's assemblies can make readiness true with no language, survivor or core answer. The deeper transaction at R40 is separate and does not require it. **The departure branch is an unselected owner choice, not a settled fact:** Story and Ending Map *recommends* an irreversible apparent-credit departure — leaving the field ending revival and closing station exploration in this continuity — against the alternative of keeping readiness as a repair milestone with no departure at all, and the outline treats field-limited revival and irreversible departure as optional assumptions. Save policy is a further open question, not the whole of it. This article selects neither, and objective 12 neither triggers nor blocks either.
| Story30's personal variants are not chain-indexed: v1→S1, v2→S2, v3→S2+S4, v4→S3, v5→S2+S4 | Read them as scene variants, not chain numbers; link here | Story30 five-variant list; Cast31 scene rows | **Link suffices** |
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| No scene is *labelled* chain 4. This is a labelling gap, **not** absent human coverage: S4's positions are carried inside the isolation and treatment branches of M3 and I3 | Record the labelling gap; keep fifteen scenes and five variants | Story30 chain-4 human paragraph; Cast31 ledger | **No change; no sixteenth scene** |
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| Story30 asks that the shared profile scene be assigned to both arcs; Cast31 already does it as Y3 with Dorn participant-if-present | One cross-link | Story30 variant 2; Cast31 Y3 | **Link suffices** |
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| Room32 tags R04 and R17 "chain L2" but not the R15 edge or R26 slab, though L2 uses all four | Add two tags, or treat Language29 as the authority | Room32 R15 and R26 rows | Optional, low value |
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| Twenty-six local evidence handles refer to the source descriptions below | Keep them local; a compound comparison reuses its constituent records | This article §0 | No parent renumbering required |
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Personal variants in [Story and Ending Map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map) are scene variants, not chain numbers: variants 1–5 correspond to S1, S2, S2+S4, S3 and S2+S4. Core-related positions appear within M3 and I3; the shared profile scene is Y3 with Dorn participating when present. These relationships use the existing fifteen primary scenes.
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**Quantities, no longer wholly open.** Mechanical35 is accepted and supplies the determinate endpoints: **10 C** shared carrying capacity, a **12 O** integral suit tank outside C/A, an ordinary-full canister of **8 O in a 2 C** vessel and a prepared-full of **12 O** in the same vessel, with conserved incremental transfer. What remains authored per route is the **full-attempt return mark** itself — a per-route value, not a missing model.
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The wall-access chain uses R04, the R15 edge, R17 and the R26 slab. [Two Language Discovery Map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map) owns that evidence chain. The twenty-six evidence handles in this index remain local aliases for existing observations and comparisons.
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**Nothing here requires a parent edit to be correct**, because this article changes no rule; it records what the existing pages say and where they disagree. Two optional tags are the only parent changes named, and no tagging cascade is proposed to spread these aliases.
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**Proposed quantities.** [Mechanical Interfaces and Opening Quantities](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanical%20Interfaces%20And%20Opening%20Quantities) supplies the current comparison values: **10 C** shared carrying capacity, a **12 O** integral suit tank outside C/A, an ordinary-full canister of **8 O in a 2 C** vessel and a prepared-full of **12 O** in the same vessel, with conserved incremental transfer. Each rescue route still needs its own authored **full-attempt return mark**.
## Coverage and limits
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**Complete for what was assigned:** all 8 chains and all 15 primary scenes mapped, both Regional25 dependency orders traced through their actual evidence and state gates, and the evidence ledger deduplicated across them. **Not covered, and not claimed:** full occurrence/branch/failure variants per chain, exhaustive permutations of order and participation, any glyph or string catalogue, and the internals of anything owned by Mechanical35 beyond the endpoints cited. Ten encounters, two setpieces and thirteen mechanisms are referenced only through their owning rooms; this article adds none.
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**Coverage:** all 8 chains and all 15 primary scenes mapped, both Regional Discovery Map dependency orders traced through their actual evidence and state gates, and the evidence ledger deduplicated across them. **Not covered, and not claimed:** full occurrence/branch/failure variants per chain, exhaustive permutations of order and participation, any glyph or string catalogue, and the internals of anything owned by Mechanical Interfaces and Opening Quantities beyond the endpoints cited. Ten encounters, two setpieces and thirteen mechanisms are referenced only through their owning rooms; this article adds none.
Nothing here establishes that the chains are discoverable, that the corrections land, or that any scene is affecting. Those need later owner-authorised implementation and observation, and none has occurred.
