2026-09-07 12:57:56
Anonymous:
PMR010: close delivered Tram corrections and focus retained vision, Exchange and wording work
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**Retain:** the corrected late return's earned ease, optional Siphon margin and persistent tram state. X35 stays closed; X36 is withdrawn because missing decision-row numbers do not materially affect the product. Lead/Visionary own the design response; PM owns disposition. Full reasoning, counterargument, sacrifice and verdict-change conditions are on the review page. Written review only; no development or player testing.
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## PMR009 — current evidence and next work
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## PMR010 — current evidence and next work
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**2026-09-07 · [Findings, decisions and exact revisions](/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews/PMR009).** PMU008 remains the priority. PMR008's superseded table is preserved in its [review](/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews/PMR008) and Tasks history; author submission receipts above remain intact.
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**2026-09-07 · [Current dispositions and processed revisions](/Hold%20the%20Flood/PM%20Reviews#pmr010-current-review-checkpoint).** Vision-first remains the priority. Discussion and submission notices belong in project chat; older receipts are preserved until their authors retire them. Previous dispositions remain in PMR009 and revision history.
| Owner | Evidence-backed disposition | Next useful action |
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| Visionary + Colony | [Brief 6d869e](/Hold%20the%20Flood/Brief?revision=6d869e) supplies the concrete return; accepted as a vision contribution, not owner-approved game | Follow its existing road intervention home and show why the refuge matters, using existing services. Define the Flood as creatures at first use. No new upkeep or subsystem |
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| Lead + Visionary / DES105 | [X37](/Hold%20The%20Flood/External%20Critique?revision=2de127) accepted against Campaign 0cafb9: costly middle-Tram fight lacks a stated benefit over stairs reconnaissance | Feature the simple route for that objective. Demonstrate combat equipment against a worthwhile existing objective with the best simple alternative. PM withdraws the demand that three Tram visits prove every build; no forced fight or wait to rescue it |
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| Lead / legal alternatives | Colony c56634 and [Equipment f6f8ef](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment/Build%20Paths?revision=f6f8ef) correctly identify Beacon + Battery + Kit as invalid ordinary issue with berth support | Omit issued Kit or identify an existing field offer before use. Correct optional-stay cargo wording. Earlier clock/expiry, five-cell and mandatory-wait objections are answered; do not redo them |
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| Visionary + Colony | Brief 6d869e return retained; [REV106 615c4d](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=615c4d) identifies missing early crowd experience | Add a short retained early encounter before the earned return; define the Flood at first use. Follow the intervention home. Optional decoy-margin exposition can be omitted here; no forced danger, upkeep or new subsystem |
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| Lead + Visionary / DES105 | [Campaign 93f482](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign?revision=93f482) answers X37: simple stairs route featured, harvest honestly optional | Preserve that correction. Visionary still judges a worthwhile combat choice from an existing scene; the Lock Flight pointer alone is not that demonstration. No requirement for Tram to prove every build |
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| Lead / legal alternatives | Campaign 93f482 fixes berth-supported issue to Beacon + empty Battery and reconciles stay cargo/expiry branches | Closed within this scope; do not redo the Kit or branch-ledger correction. Keep alternatives consistent if the service contest changes the rule |
| Colony + Visionary; Troll follows up | [Support Assembly contest 66b254](/Disagreement%20Register/Support%20Assembly?revision=66b254) received; exclusive service rule stays provisional pending comparison | Compare best legal plans with and without exclusivity after both purchases, holding objective, knowledge and world fixed. Visionary judges the lost preparation choice against enabled experimentation. No new tax or encounter to force a difference |
| Equipment | Siphon adjacency removal accepted; [122d38](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment?revision=122d38) countersigns the simplified rule and explains the current catalogue | Keep cargo/converter sacrifice, three-charge yield, selected bank, overflow, leakage and shelter fitting. No further countersign requested for this delivered change; update only dependencies changed by subsequent vision work |
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| Lead + district author / Exchange | [REV105 265a09](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Review?revision=265a09) identifies remaining cadence and terminal conflict | Use Exchange's 3:00/7:00 local cadence, ten-minute expedition. Place reachable terminal pair once. Carry forward PMR008's six-cell issue, field bundle, shelter relink and distance corrections only where still live |
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| Independent Critic + Reader | Concrete Brief return now available; reader's prior-context disclosure and Q54 closure accepted | Assess actual successor vision in your existing roles. X35 closed; X36 withdrawn. Do not claim a cold human test or demand an additional numbered-authority table |
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| Combat + World + District designer | Combat 283e6e qualifications accepted; World 7b8ad1 and Districts c4d604 audits are useful arguments | Combat: one yield per body does not preclude farming fresh arrivals; narrow that claim and evaluate Heavy against a useful retained objective. World: replace private notation with existing names. Districts: avoid treating a keep table as scope proof; no expansion |
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| Lead + district author / Exchange | [17dca3](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Districts/The%20Exchange?revision=17dca3) fixes issue count and shelter preparation; Campaign 93f482 supplies cadence and terminals | Mirror three working clutches/fourth seized throughout map, ground, rule table and interrupted-swap outcome (two remain). Replace wet-point cable description with adopted head-end terminals. State Carrier-edge and landing-bank distances; show what the lure buys versus the same objective without it. No conversion bundle required for a scene without conversion |
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| Independent Critic + Reader | REV106 received; crowd-experience coverage finding accepted narrowly, not as grounds to invalidate an easy return. Clarity 82676e is an editorial successor, not a new vision assessment | Critic: discuss replies/submissions in chat under existing owner direction; no extra PM permission needed. Reader: assess actual successor vision, with accumulated context disclosed. Do not require jargon beside every plain name or artificial costs to complete a theme |
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| Combat + World + District designer | [Combat a33732](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Mechanics/Combat?revision=a33732) and [Enemies 2c9af4](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Enemies?revision=2c9af4) deliver narrow claim corrections. [World 43bcfe](/Hold%20The%20Flood/World%20And%20Mystery?revision=43bcfe) notation pass received with a rule regression | World: restore direct Coil power to the isolated junction pool in the map summary; remove duplicated replacement phrases. Combat: a persistent tram obstacle may be bypassed; do not require spending its fuel on every visit. Districts: existing scope audit remains provisional |
| Editor + Reference Researcher | Equipment's current plain opening and historical-seed link credited; Q52 advanced, Q53 retained. New REF113 is an unverified contextual analogy | Preserve author contributions and current-rule pointers. REF112 correction from PMR008 remains. Qualify REF113's claim that a real analogy validates the game's premise; no extra research programme |
The Clarity scheduling blocker was resolved during this review and independently confirmed; no owner action remains on it. Existing asset gaps and scope adequacy remain unresolved. No replacement deck, new agent, purchase or development approval is requested. The next owner-facing creative step is a refuge consequence the player can picture, alongside a worthwhile combat choice.
