Commit 471731

2026-09-08 20:30:17 Anonymous: Record Language29 closeout and Story30 authoring with preauthorised review; forecast F1.11

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	# Hold The Horde — Progress
-	**Updated 2026-09-08 20:07 Jerusalem (UTC+3).** PM and GPT work continues; only the two Claude roles are paused. All work remains **design only**.
+	**Updated 2026-09-08 20:28 Jerusalem (UTC+3).** PM and GPT work continues; only the two Claude roles are paused. All work remains **design only**.
-	**29 tracked design packages: 27 preparation-closed, 2 open.** Home And Colony Loop28 closed450 at20:01:12 Jerusalem, final5bff3436. Two Language Discovery Map29 was submitted454 at20:07:22, source69c57f0a; Systems is STOPPED and one focused independent review455 is active. Narrow parent-equipment alignment432 and legacy Discovery Chain/Expedition integration441–443 are complete;04 remains open for global shift/rescue/full-station rules, their integration and pending owner choices. The separate coverage map and unadopted intake407 contributions are not extra completed packages. These are bounded written outcomes, not overall game completion.
+	**30 tracked design packages: 28 preparation-closed, 2 open.** Two Language Discovery Map29 closed459 at20:23:52 Jerusalem, finaldf0f48f5. Story And Ending Map30 is authoring under461; one native handoff and receiving20:24:58.675 verified. Narrow parent-equipment432, legacy Discovery/Expedition441–443 and home-parent456 compatibility are complete;04 remains open for global shift/rescue/full-station rules, their integration and pending owner choices. The separate coverage map and unadopted intake407 contributions are not extra completed packages. These are bounded written outcomes, not overall game completion.
	“Closed” means the bounded written design/review outcome is complete. It does not mean a feature is implemented, every detail approved or fun validated. This board covers the current design batch; it is not a complete campaign or production backlog, and the closed/total ratio is not an overall game-completion percentage. Stable IDs stay fixed; added/reopened work must be recorded explicitly.
-	**Availability correction —8 Sep:** only Claude is paused. PM and the existing GPT Systems designer continue useful work with bounded independent GPT reviews. Systems retains STOPPED ownership of Home28 and submitted Language29. The independent reviewer is active455 on actual454 source69c57f0a against pre-assignment criteria69641af0 registered452. PM handles remaining integration, intake and forecasts. Neither permanent Claude role will be woken or replaced before owner confirmation. Active one-minute fallback monitoring and15-minute progress/forecast reports continue.
+	**Availability correction —8 Sep:** only Claude is paused. PM and the existing GPT Systems designer continue useful work with bounded independent GPT reviews. Systems retains STOPPED ownership of Language29 and is authoring Story30 under461. One native handoff sent; receiving20:24:58.675 Jerusalem verified and Systems actively authoring. Independent criteriab1a66b77 were saved before assignment and registered460; reviewer is actively listening under462 and may start its one critique when the actual source/hash and author STOP arrive; no draft review has started. PM handles remaining integration, intake and forecasts. Neither permanent Claude role will be woken or replaced before owner confirmation. Active one-minute fallback monitoring and15-minute progress/forecast reports continue.
	## Forward forecast — baseline F1
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	The critical sequence is core decisions and interfaces → whole-game architecture/content budget → domain designs → cross-domain integration → v1. Content detail proceeds in parallel only where interfaces are stable. Extra writers do not eliminate the PM/review bottleneck.
-	**Next delivery, today Jerusalem:** [Two Language Discovery Map29](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map), submitted454 at20:07:22 before its21:00 draft target(range20:35–21:30), is in one focused independent review455; reviewed outcome22:00(range21:15–22:45) remains the medium-low-confidence forecast. [Home And Colony Loop28](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Home%20And%20Colony%20Loop) closed450 at20:01:12, ahead of its21:15 reviewed target(range20:45–22:00). Core11 Sep(10–14), complete first-pass wiki22 Sep(18–29), and specialist setup9–10 Sep remain unchanged. The144–247role-hour allowance is the dated8Sep planning baseline, not a newly measured remaining balance; accepted depth must be deducted during the9Sep capacity check. If both additional streams are absent10Sep, the provisional current-team scenario remains25Sep(22Sep–2Oct).
+	**Next delivery, today Jerusalem:** [Story And Ending Map30](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map), assigned461, targets draft21:15(range20:50–21:45) and reviewed outcome22:15(range21:30–23:00), medium-low confidence. [Two Language Discovery Map29](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map) closed459 at20:23:52, ahead of its22:00 reviewed target(range21:15–22:45). Core11 Sep(10–14), complete first-pass wiki22 Sep(18–29), and specialist setup9–10 Sep remain unchanged. The144–247role-hour allowance is the dated8Sep planning baseline, not a newly measured remaining balance; accepted depth must be deducted during the9Sep capacity check. If both additional streams are absent10Sep, the provisional current-team scenario remains25Sep(22Sep–2Oct).
	## Extra agents — when and why
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	|F1.8|8 Sep18:57:01|Acquisition26 actual closeout434 recorded against its19:45 reviewed target(19:15–20:15). New Combat And Enemy Roster27 assignment435 targets draft19:45(19:25–20:15), reviewed20:30(20:00–21:15); actual receiving activity18:58:15.181 verified. Narrow04 parent alignment432 is complete; owner-dependent branches remain open. M2–M4, the144–247role-hour planning allowance and current-team scenario remain unchanged.|
	|F1.9|8 Sep19:47|Combat27 actual closeout443 recorded against its20:30 reviewed target(20:00–21:15). Home And Colony Loop28 assignment444 reached draft446 at19:42:37 before its20:20 target(20:00–20:50); independent review447 active, reviewed21:15(20:45–22:00) remains a medium-low-confidence forecast. Narrow legacy04 integration441–443 is complete; global04 stays open. M2–M4 and the current-team scenario remain unchanged; the dated144–247 allowance needs accepted-scope reconciliation.|
	|F1.10|8 Sep20:07|Home28 actual closeout450 recorded against its21:15 reviewed target(20:45–22:00). Two Language Discovery Map29 assignment451 reached draft454 at20:07:22 before its21:00 target(20:35–21:30); independent review455 active, reviewed22:00(21:15–22:45) remains the medium-low-confidence forecast. Home/colony now has a usable first-pass contract; five cast arcs/15scenes and finite room/encounter/mechanism inventories remain unfinished. Global04, M2–M4 and the current-team scenario remain unchanged; the dated144–247 allowance still requires accepted-scope reconciliation.|
+	|F1.11|8 Sep20:28|Language29 actual closeout459 recorded against its22:00 reviewed target(21:15–22:45). New Story And Ending Map30 assignment461 targets draft21:15(20:50–21:45), reviewed22:15(21:30–23:00), medium-low confidence. Language/discovery now has a usable first-pass contract; story remains partial. Global04, M2–M4, planned9–10Sep staffing and the current-team scenario remain unchanged; the dated144–247 allowance still needs accepted-scope reconciliation.|
	## What changed in this report
	- [Combat And Enemy Roster27](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20And%20Enemy%20Roster) preparation-closed443 at19:34, finalf1fe0d9a. One focused review/response corrected the new-role triggers and counterplay, staged cues for both regional orders, and Bellback's warning-start cone lock. Six ordinary/three special roles and two setpieces are prepared within ten encounter placements; exact populations, geometry, presentation and tuning remain later work.
	- [Home And Colony Loop28](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Home%20And%20Colony%20Loop) preparation-closed450 at20:01:12, final5bff3436. One focused review/response clarified shared commissioning, first-return actions and each project's participants and lasting facilities. Five project briefs remain two reused/three new with three new fixed ship fixtures; cast choices, five final arcs/15scenes and management economy remain separate.
-	- [Two Language Discovery Map29](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map) was submitted454 at20:07:22, source69c57f0a: four proposed discovery chains across two alien languages, with evidence/tests, both regional orders, information/help and counted scope. Systems is STOPPED; one focused independent review455 is active against pre-assignment criteria69641af0 registered452. Submission does not close the language domain.
+	- [Two Language Discovery Map29](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map) preparation-closed459 at20:23:52, finaldf0f48f5. One focused critique/response separated address/body evidence, retained valid captures across lives and supplied the iris variant's local B plate and completion state. Four proposed chains across two languages are prepared; actual clue/string/room variants and comprehension evidence remain unfinished.
+	- [Story And Ending Map30](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map) is assigned461: a revisable causal spine, four mystery/personal chains, apparent/deeper/optional-secret layers, visible choices and human consequences, both regional orders and counted reuse/new obligations. One native handoff sent; receiving20:24:58.675 Jerusalem verified and Systems actively authoring. Independent criteriab1a66b77 were saved before assignment and registered460; reviewer is actively listening under462 and may start its one critique when the actual source/hash and author STOP arrive; no draft review has started.
	- PM verified04's narrow legacy integration under441–443: [Discovery Chain](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Discovery%20Chain)114e9267 and [Expedition Proposal](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal)836ab2ae now use historical post-death routes and world-time capture/full frozen journal inspection. No new access guarantee was added; global04 remains open.
-	- The [coverage map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Coverage) now has ten usable first-pass contracts and five partial areas. Only the existing home/colony category advances this time; the two-language area remains partial during29. The five cast arcs/15scenes,24module/40room, ten encounter-placement and twelve mechanism inventories still need actual briefs and integration; no full-v1 percentage is implied.
+	- PM closed narrow [Coming Home](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Coming%20Home)/[Home Projects](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Home%20Projects) compatibility456 at20:15:57, revisionsacbc945c/996d235a. Current Fork/supply, unloading, historical-route and refill rules align; PM owns both parents STOPPED. This adds no package and does not close global04.
+	- The [coverage map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Design%20Coverage) now has eleven usable first-pass contracts and four partial areas. Only the language/discovery category advances this time; story remains partial during30. The five cast arcs/15scenes,24module/40room, ten encounter-placement and twelve mechanism inventories still need actual briefs and integration; no full-v1 percentage is implied.
	- Intake407, all three pending owner questions, the original Claude pause and planned9–10Sep specialist setup are preserved. M2–M4 remain unchanged;144–247role-hours is the dated8Sep planning allowance, not measured labor or an automatically current remaining total.
	## Open and closed outcomes
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	|26|[Equipment acquisition and rig growth](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment%20Acquisition%20And%20Rig%20Growth)|Closed|Reviewed twelve-part acquisition/growth proposal; owner preference unselected|Sep8 18:57:01 disposition434|Finalf5f6d768; Systems owns article STOPPED. Source-fixture details, exceptions, quantities and gameplay validation remain open|
	|27|[Combat and enemy roster](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20And%20Enemy%20Roster)|Closed|Reviewed combat-state contract and proposed6ordinary/3special/2setpiece roster|Sep8 19:34 disposition443|Finalf1fe0d9a; Systems ownership STOPPED. Ten encounter placements and twelve mechanism slots still need exact inventories, cues and geometry|
	|28|[Home and colony loop](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Home%20And%20Colony%20Loop)|Closed|Reviewed return/preparation contract and five project briefs; cast/economy unselected|Sep8 20:01:12 disposition450|Final5bff3436; Systems STOPPED owner. Two reused/three new projects; exact fixture/control detail, five final cast arcs/15scenes and validation remain|
-	|29|[Two-language discovery map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map)|Open — independent review|Submitted four-chain proposal across two alien languages|Sep8 submission454 at20:07:22; review455 active|Systems STOPPED sole owner; draft21:00 target achieved early, reviewed22:00(21:15–22:45) forecast. Criteria69641af0 unchanged; actual placements/final dialogue remain later|
+	|29|[Two-language discovery map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map)|Closed|Reviewed four-chain/two-language proposal; origins and final story unselected|Sep8 20:23:52 disposition459|Finaldf0f48f5; Systems STOPPED owner. Actual clue/string/physical-state variants, room placements and comprehension evidence remain|
+	|30|[Story and ending map](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map)|Open — authoring|Proposed causal/choice map and four mystery-personal chains; final story unselected|Sep8 assignment461; receiving20:24:58.675 verified|Systems sole author; draft21:15(20:50–21:45), reviewed22:15(21:30–23:00). Reviewer actively listening under462 with criteria registered460; full cast/scene/room inventories remain separate|
	## Recent delivery timeline
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	|Stream|Now|Next|
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	|Equipment catalogue|Preparation closed400; final737b3cfd; Acquisition26 prepared434|Use the twelve-part contract and current parent alignment; detailed controller/fixture exceptions remain|
-	|Whole-v1 coverage|Fifteen-domain map has ten usable first-pass contracts and five partial areas|Home return/preparation contract prepared; five cast arcs/15scenes,24module/40room, ten encounter-placement and twelve mechanism inventories and integration remain|
+	|Whole-v1 coverage|Fifteen-domain map has eleven usable first-pass contracts and four partial areas|Language/discovery first pass prepared; five cast arcs/15scenes,24module/40room, ten encounter-placement and twelve mechanism inventories and integration remain|
	|Trap/encounter progression|Traps21 prepared410; Combat27 prepared443 atf1fe0d9a|Author exact ten encounter-placement and twelve mechanism briefs, with geometry, populations, cue variants and recovery|
	|Development handoff|Preparation closed410; finalc0c38e8b|Keep gates explicit; final handoff packet depends on concrete v1/development scope|
	|Save/content state|Preparation closed417 at18:09:56; final438cdf35|Use explicit continuity interfaces; detailed state work and owner selections remain later|
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	|[Equipment Acquisition And Rig Growth26](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Equipment%20Acquisition%20And%20Rig%20Growth)|Preparation closed434 at18:57:01; finalf5f6d768; Systems ownership STOPPED|Use prepared acquisition/configuration paths; owner choices and source-fixture detail remain|
	|[Combat And Enemy Roster27](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Combat%20And%20Enemy%20Roster)|Preparation closed443 at19:34; finalf1fe0d9a; Systems ownership STOPPED|Use the reviewed roster/state contract; finite placement, cue and recovery detail remains|
	|[Home And Colony Loop28](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Home%20And%20Colony%20Loop)|Preparation closed450 at20:01:12; final5bff3436; Systems ownership STOPPED|Use reviewed return/project availability and property rules; exact interfaces, cast arcs/scenes and management choices remain|
-	|[Two Language Discovery Map29](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map)|Draft454 submitted20:07:22 at69c57f0a; Systems STOPPED; independent review455 active against criteria69641af0|Draft21:00 target achieved early; reviewed22:00(21:15–22:45) remains forecast; one focused critique/response then PM disposition|
+	|[Two Language Discovery Map29](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Two%20Language%20Discovery%20Map)|Preparation closed459 at20:23:52; finaldf0f48f5; Systems ownership STOPPED|Use reviewed four-chain evidence/action contract; actual clue/string/room variants and validation remain|
+	|[Story And Ending Map30](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Story%20And%20Ending%20Map)|Systems authoring461; receiving20:24:58.675 verified; independent criteria registered460|Draft21:15(20:50–21:45), reviewed22:15(21:30–23:00); one focused critique/response then PM disposition|
	|Additional proposal intake|Both full pages read; explicitly unadopted|Track authorship and assess protected retreat/next-shift meeting before integrating|
-	|Shared integration04|Narrow parent-equipment432 and legacy Discovery/Expedition441–443 integration complete; PM retains stopped ownership|Global shift/rescue/full-station rules, remaining integration and pending owner choices remain open|
+	|Shared integration04|Narrow parent-equipment432, legacy Discovery/Expedition441–443 and Coming Home/Home Projects456 compatibility complete; PM retains stopped ownership|Global shift/rescue/full-station rules, remaining integration and pending owner choices remain open|
	|Claude Lead/Reviewer|Paused by owner for token limits|Resume only when owner confirms; GPT work continues meanwhile|
	|Specialist setup|Two bounded briefs ready|Planned9–10Sep; no new permanent sessions created|
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	The first-survivor choice is also already with the owner: Yeva, the pressure technician preserving ward measurements (PM recommendation), versus Aster, the supply clerk suspicious of the arrival and requesting one reversible door closure. Neither is selected. Progression, creature, story and corruption alternatives are prepared for later reactions; the owner is not expected to review the whole wiki at once.
-	**Equipment acquisition question now with the owner:** find working parts in station machines, accepting loss of their local function until the part is returned (PM recommendation), or study working examples and spend salvage to fabricate parts aboard. The reviewed acquisition proposal supports this comparison; starting gear, capacity and exact economy remain separate. Language-discovery work can continue while the choice is pending.
+	**Equipment acquisition question now with the owner:** find working parts in station machines, accepting loss of their local function until the part is returned (PM recommendation), or study working examples and spend salvage to fabricate parts aboard. The reviewed acquisition proposal supports this comparison; starting gear, capacity and exact economy remain separate. Story/ending-map work can continue while the choice is pending.
	## Reporting agreement