2026-09-10 13:20:08
Anonymous:
Record stopped build and expedition drafts under combined review
hold the flood/design plan.md ..
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The station-space and player-information batch is integrated after one combined review, one response per author and PM verification. It preserves physical crowd sources, short rescue routes, the twelve equipment parts and the five save examples. Two concrete living-return traces now expose the cost of repeatedly walking farther to fresh combat. Existing detailed samples remain parked.
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The next parallel assignments address the remaining player-experience gaps. Systems will give the three builds actual broad coverage, supply, heat and control rules. The Design Lead will replace the older Expedition Proposal with three successive outings and at most two ways to keep living returns worthwhile, making any proposed travel-rule changes explicit. The Reviewer will save fresh criteria before inspecting their new drafts, then provide one combined critique. The next reviewed proposal packet is targeted for 15:30 on 10 September, with a 14:30–16:30 range; see [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
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Both next drafts arrived by 13:12 on 10 September. Systems proposes finite crowd-scale coverage, energy, heat and control rules for the three builds. The Design Lead compares preparation under the current rules with a new transport line between visited endpoints across three successive outings. The Reviewer saved independent criteria and is now examining both stopped submissions in one combined critique. One author response and PM integration follow. The next reviewed packet targets 14:45, range 14:00–15:45; see [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
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The main pitch and three build examples now distinguish actual equipment behavior from the further rules needed for a developed build to transform a substantial visible horde. Storm Choir needs a convincing branching payoff, Ricochet Foundry needs overlapping shots to create its dense pattern, and Gravity Furnace proposes temporary pull and thermal-burst effects. These are concrete design targets; the current conservation rules alone do not establish the promised spectacle.
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The build drafts now specify branching lightning, overlapping ricochets and a pull-and-thermal burst using existing physical parts, with proposed climaxes reaching dozens of ordinary bodies. Their actual power, geometry and recovery claims are under review. The expedition proposal shortens repeat travel but still exposes the problem of a later outing without fresh temporary-power growth. Transport and cargo behavior remain unadopted proposals. Neither written accounting nor a review establishes fun or balance.
