2026-09-15 14:32:40
Anonymous:
Update active station-completion response and campaign scope forecast F2.11
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 70 — Completing the station | Temporary design support is preparing two completion experiences; independent review criteria saved | Draft **15:00**, range **14:35–15:30**; reviewed comparison **16:00**, range **15:15–17:00** |
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| 70 — Completing the station | Draft delivered **14:23**, single critique complete; author is clarifying what the final join adds beyond earlier joins | Response **14:50**, range **14:40–15:10**; reviewed comparison **16:00**, range **15:15–17:00** |
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| 71 — Campaign scope choices | Systems has begun a current-inventory versus concentrated-campaign comparison; independent review preparation assigned | Draft **16:00**, range **15:15–17:00**; reviewed comparison **17:00**, range **16:00–18:30** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The current proposals tackle two experience risks: making a short rescue feel like helping a person, and making the final station connection produce a lasting, perceptible payoff.
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The tracker contains **70 outcomes: 66 preparation outcomes closed, 1 current design outcome, 1 readiness assessment reopened and 2 parked**. The completed preservation audit and its corrections belong within outcome 38; they do not close overall readiness. These counts are not a percentage of the finished game. Outcomes 39–40 remain parked and unaccepted pending the core corrections.
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The tracker contains **71 outcomes: 66 preparation outcomes closed, 2 current design outcomes, 1 readiness assessment reopened and 2 parked**. The completed preservation audit and its corrections belong within outcome 38; they do not close overall readiness. These counts are not a percentage of the finished game. Outcomes 39–40 remain parked and unaccepted pending the core corrections.
The original Claude Reviewer received the earlier assignment automatically but stopped at a monthly spend limit at 13:03. Temporary GPT support completed that review. The Lead was absent from the same directory check; availability will be checked again before a future handoff. No new permanent agent or manual message forwarding is needed for the current assignments.
## Delivery forecast
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Forecast **F2.10**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
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Forecast **F2.11**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
| Milestone | Target | Plausible range | Completion means |
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| Short-rescue proposal | **Delivered 14:03** | Earlier than 14:30 target | One personal rescue scene and two comparable failure approaches |
| Reviewed short-rescue proposal | **Completed 14:20** | Earlier than 15:15 target | One critique and response; owner comparison published, shared rules await selection |
| Station-completion comparison | Today **16:00** | **15:15–17:00** | Two reviewed consequences of the last connection, with the next home visit and expedition |
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| Costed campaign comparison | Today **17:00** | **16:00–18:30** | Named retained, moved and removed experiences, production deltas and honest authoring assumptions |
| Full detailed campaign design | **24 November** | **3 November–22 December** | Proposed progression, content, mysteries, ending paths and production scope developed across the campaign |
Near-term estimates have moderate confidence. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.10 records the reviewed rescue comparison at 14:20 and parallel work on the station-completion payoff. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.11 records the station-completion draft at 14:23 and its one focused response, and starts the costed campaign comparison. The rescue comparison was completed at 14:20. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
## What still needs work
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The earlier build-priority question also remains: which direction to deepen first. It does not discard the others or approve every proposed rule.
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PM will next bring the effect of completing the station connection and a costed scope proposal; existing story alternatives remain available for reaction. [Open Decisions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Open%20Decisions) is the wider issue index; its recommendations remain proposals. Its fourteen categories are not fourteen answers needed before work can continue.
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PM is preparing the effect of completing the station connection and a costed scope proposal; existing story alternatives remain available for reaction. [Open Decisions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Open%20Decisions) is the wider issue index; its recommendations remain proposals. Its fourteen categories are not fourteen answers needed before work can continue.
