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## Ready to read
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**Twenty-one proposal or editorial packages have been completed today.** The latest finished at **19:47 Jerusalem time**: [Who Is the Astronaut?](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Who%20Is%20the%20Astronaut). A repair pilot seeks a chosen home; a surveyor wants someone to share discoveries with. The same docking, build breakthrough and conversation show their differences, with a mostly silent alternative. All remain proposals. Systems is now comparing the existing disc-and-arc hybrid with a shot that could carry lightning around cover. The short-rescue choice remains open.
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**Twenty-one proposal or editorial packages have been completed today.** The latest finished at **19:47 Jerusalem time**: [Who Is the Astronaut?](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Who%20Is%20the%20Astronaut). A repair pilot seeks a chosen home; a surveyor wants someone to share discoveries with. The same docking, build breakthrough and conversation show their differences, with a mostly silent alternative. All remain proposals. The new equipment-interaction draft arrived at **19:59** and is in independent review. It compares the existing disc-and-arc hybrid with a projectile-delivered electrical action. The short-rescue choice remains open.
Start with [The Game](/Hold%20The%20Flood/The%20Game), continue through [three expeditions into the observation ward](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Expedition%20Proposal), then [Coming Home](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Coming%20Home) and [Discovery in a Changing Station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Connecting%20The%20Station). For combat, follow [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds) into [Three Ways to Break a Horde](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Build%20Comparison).
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 84 — Can a shot carry lightning? | Systems working; independent criteria ready for the draft | Draft **21:30**, range **21:00–22:15**; reviewed **22:30**, range **22:00–23:30** |
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| 84 — Can a shot carry lightning? | Draft submitted; Systems stopped; independent reviewer working | Draft delivered **19:59**; reviewed **22:30**, range **22:00–23:30** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The new Receiver Vault proposal tackles a different risk: a later expedition must deliver growing power and a horde climax before its quiet discovery. It uses the existing vault rooms, enemies and machinery; the new reward opportunity remains a proposal. Earlier rescue and station-completion comparisons are ready for owner reaction.
The tracker contains **84 outcomes: 80 preparation outcomes closed, 1 current outcome, 1 readiness assessment reopened and 2 parked**. The completed preservation audit and its corrections belong within outcome 38; they do not close overall readiness. These counts are not a percentage of the finished game. Outcomes 39–40 remain parked and unaccepted pending the core corrections.
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The messaging directory did not list either original Claude task at **19:43**. Systems has received the new equipment comparison and is working. Independent review criteria are ready; that reviewer is waiting for its draft. The character writer has completed the response and stopped. This is a messaging observation, not a judgment about the apps' health. No new agent or manual forwarding is needed for this work.
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The messaging directory did not list either original Claude task at **19:43**. Systems has submitted the equipment comparison and stopped. Its independent reviewer is working from criteria saved before the new proposal. The character writer has completed the response and stopped. This is a messaging observation, not a judgment about the apps' health. No new agent or manual forwarding is needed for this work.
## Delivery forecast
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Forecast **F2.37**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
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Forecast **F2.38**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
| Milestone | Target | Plausible range | Completion means |
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| A hospital worth remembering | **Completed 18:55** | Earlier than revised 19:30 target | Four existing [clinical spaces](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Station%20Room%20And%20Module%20Inventory#region-2-clinical-exchange-r11r20) become memorable places of care, crowd pressure and disturbing discovery while preserving their current rules |
| A current decision guide | **Completed 19:23** | Earlier than revised 20:00 target | Current proposals and choices explained, substantive objections retained, routine reference repairs verified |
| Who is the astronaut? | **Completed 19:47** | Earlier than revised 20:30 target | Two contrasting personalities and a quieter alternative, with one critique, response and verified integration |
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| Can a shot carry lightning? | Draft **21:30**; reviewed **22:30** | Draft **21:00–22:15**; reviewed **22:00–23:30** | Existing hybrid versus proposed remote electrical delivery, with a discoverable experiment, horde payoff and explicit costs |
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| Can a shot carry lightning? | Draft delivered **19:59**; reviewed **22:30** | Reviewed **22:00–23:30** | Existing hybrid versus proposed remote electrical delivery, with a discoverable experiment, horde payoff and explicit costs |
| Full detailed campaign design | **24 November** | **3 November–22 December** | Proposed progression, content, mysteries, ending paths and production scope developed across the campaign |
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The equipment-comparison estimate has moderate confidence. Systems has begun; the new interaction still needs to be worked through and compared with the simpler existing hybrid. Independent criteria are ready. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
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The equipment-comparison estimate has moderate confidence. Its early draft is in the single independent critique; a response and verified integration remain. The reviewed target is retained while the comparison’s player discovery, targeting and costs are checked. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. F2.37 records the astronaut comparison completed at 19:47, ahead of its revised 20:30 target, and adds the equipment interaction comparison. That new proposal addresses whether familiar parts can produce a surprising relationship and a more spectacular horde payoff, rather than simply operate beside one another. Existing team restrictions can be reconsidered, with changes and costs explained. The overall dates remain unchanged because broader experience coverage, supporting clarity and consequential creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates and reasons remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. F2.38 records the equipment draft delivered at 19:59, earlier than its 21:30 target. The reviewed target stays 22:30 pending critique and response. The astronaut comparison completed at 19:47, ahead of its revised 20:30 target. The equipment comparison addresses whether familiar parts can produce a surprising relationship and a more spectacular horde payoff, rather than simply operate beside one another. Existing team restrictions can be reconsidered, with changes and costs explained. The overall dates remain unchanged because broader experience coverage, supporting clarity and consequential creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates and reasons remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
