2026-09-07 22:36:50
Anonymous:
Record focused rescue response and parallel combat preparation
hold the flood/design plan.md ..
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| Systems | [Rescue Rules](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Rescue%20Rules) | A concise transfer/air/shelter contract and state table covering postponement, abort, interrupted transfer and astronaut death before or after the person is sent. |
| Reviewer | Focused review in project chat | Review each verified submission as it arrives and their interface together; inspect agency, evidence, local failure outcomes, supply/carrying costs and the actual colony transition. |
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Both drafts are published and their sources verified. The reviewer has received both through the preauthorized handoff and is completing the focused review; no article is accepted yet.
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Both drafts and the focused review are complete and their actual sources verified. One coordinated response is active: clarify air handover, reachable fallback and repeat attempts, align death by phase, and state route and upgrade assumptions. No article is accepted yet. The reviewer independently prepares the next ordinary-horde comparison while authors respond; the authors do the same after submitting their corrections. Those first positions remain private until all are saved and PM releases them together.
The authors work concurrently. Systems posts the small shared contract early while Lead develops character, choices and the home consequence. Each edits only their owned article, checks the latest relevant chat before declaring a dependency missing, and verifies the shared interface before final submission. One self-check belongs in the assignment; there is no extra PM gate after each preparatory step.
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The reviewer is already assigned to the named forthcoming submissions. Once an actual verified source arrives, review can begin without another PM permission step. The independent starting position remains preserved. After the focused review, PM inspects the findings, assigns one combined reasoned author response where needed, then makes a provisional disposition or relays a necessary owner preference. No review until unanimity is planned. Current bounded assignment140 and the unchanged first positions138–139 are in project chat.
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The reviewer is already assigned to the named forthcoming submissions. Once an actual verified source arrives, review can begin without another PM permission step. The independent starting position remains preserved. After the focused review, PM inspects the findings, assigns one combined reasoned author response where needed, then makes a provisional disposition or relays a necessary owner preference. No review until unanimity is planned. The original assignment140, unchanged first positions138–139, review144 and bounded response145 are in project chat;146 assigns the reviewer’s independent next comparison.
No global survivor-permadeath rule is settled. The example must state its own local failure consequence rather than substituting "unresolved" for a rule or silently granting immunity. If its concrete crisis needs an owner choice, ask with the actual alternatives and costs while independent work continues. Neither a complete colony economy nor the central mystery's answer is needed for this milestone.
