2026-09-15 17:43:11
Anonymous:
Record early patient-scene submission and independent review; forecast F2.28
hold the flood/design plan.md ..
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## Working now: a person in the crowd
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Systems is developing one recognizable former hospital patient within an existing ward encounter, followed by an optional response at home. The scene should work whether the player learns the history before fighting or overwhelms the crowd and learns afterward. It belongs in [Hospital Story Directions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hospital%20Story%20Directions), preserving both core alternatives. A record-only version provides a simpler comparison.
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The [former-patient scene](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hospital%20Story%20Directions) was submitted at **17:38**. Nadi Kelm once stopped a rehabilitation carrier because it moved before she was ready. The proposal connects that memory to one ordinary member of a ward horde, with discovery before or after the fight and an optional exchange with Ivo at home. Both core alternatives remain; a record-only version provides the simpler comparison.
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The author is working; the independent reviewer has saved criteria and is ready for the draft. The draft target is **18:50** today, likely **18:20–19:20**; reviewed proposal **20:00**, likely **19:15–20:45**. The main cost to resolve is what recognizing one individual means when fresh hordes return, alongside the additional record, dialogue and scene states. No new creature or page is assigned.
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The author has stopped and the independent reviewer is working. The reviewed proposal target is now **18:50**, likely **18:20–19:35**. The review is checking whether the dialogue feels human, whether each recognition follows evidence the player actually obtained, and whether the local identity rule preserves renewed hordes. Records, presentation and dialogue still carry additional production costs.
One focused critique and one response belong to each bounded outcome. The outside-edit preservation audit is complete and its factual follow-ups are published; broader readability and design readiness remain open. States and estimates are on [Progress](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Progress).
