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Record scope response and language journal readability F2.14
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 71 — Campaign scope choices | Draft delivered **14:38**; Systems is stopped and the independent reviewer is examining the comparison | Draft delivered; reviewed comparison **17:00**, range **16:00–18:30** |
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| 71 — Campaign scope choices | Single critique complete; Systems is writing its one response, including a clearer player journey and historical-estimate wording | Response **15:10**, range **15:00–15:30**; reviewed comparison **17:00**, range **16:00–18:30** |
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| 72 — Language journal readability | Temporary editorial support is rewriting the existing entry page; independent reviewer is preparing | Draft **15:30**, range **15:10–16:00**; reviewed page **16:15**, range **15:30–17:00** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The current proposals tackle two experience risks: making a short rescue feel like helping a person, and making the final station connection produce a lasting, perceptible payoff.
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The tracker contains **71 outcomes: 67 preparation outcomes closed, 1 current design outcome, 1 readiness assessment reopened and 2 parked**. The completed preservation audit and its corrections belong within outcome 38; they do not close overall readiness. These counts are not a percentage of the finished game. Outcomes 39–40 remain parked and unaccepted pending the core corrections.
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The tracker contains **72 outcomes: 67 preparation outcomes closed, 2 current design outcomes, 1 readiness assessment reopened and 2 parked**. The completed preservation audit and its corrections belong within outcome 38; they do not close overall readiness. These counts are not a percentage of the finished game. Outcomes 39–40 remain parked and unaccepted pending the core corrections.
The original Claude Reviewer received the earlier assignment automatically but stopped at a monthly spend limit at 13:03. Temporary GPT support completed that review. The Lead was absent from the same directory check; availability will be checked again before a future handoff. No new permanent agent or manual message forwarding is needed for the current assignments.
## Delivery forecast
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Forecast **F2.13**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
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Forecast **F2.14**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
| Milestone | Target | Plausible range | Completion means |
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| Reviewed short-rescue proposal | **Completed 14:20** | Earlier than 15:15 target | One critique and response; owner comparison published, shared rules await selection |
| Station-completion comparison | **Completed 14:36** | Earlier than 16:00 target | Two reviewed consequences of the last connection, with the next home visit and expedition |
| Costed campaign comparison | Today **17:00** | **16:00–18:30** | Named retained, moved and removed experiences, production deltas and honest authoring assumptions |
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| Readable language journal | Today **16:15** | **15:30–17:00** | Existing journal explanation leads with player use and discovery, with current rules preserved through review |
| Full detailed campaign design | **24 November** | **3 November–22 December** | Proposed progression, content, mysteries, ending paths and production scope developed across the campaign |
Near-term estimates have moderate confidence. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.13 records the scope draft delivered at 14:38 and independent review underway. The station-completion comparison finished at 14:36. The rescue comparison was completed at 14:20. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.14 records the scope critique completed at 14:46 and its single response underway, and starts the supporting-page readability pass with the language journal. The station-completion comparison finished at 14:36. The rescue comparison was completed at 14:20. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
