2026-09-15 14:45:53
Anonymous:
Record scope draft and independent review F2.13
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| Outcome | Owner and current state | Next delivery, Jerusalem time |
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| 71 — Campaign scope choices | Systems is preparing the current-inventory versus concentrated-campaign comparison; reviewer criteria are ready | Draft **16:00**, range **15:15–17:00**; reviewed comparison **17:00**, range **16:00–18:30** |
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| 71 — Campaign scope choices | Draft delivered **14:38**; Systems is stopped and the independent reviewer is examining the comparison | Draft delivered; reviewed comparison **17:00**, range **16:00–18:30** |
| 38 — Full-design readiness, still reopened | Outside-edit preservation audit completed; eleven factual/reference corrections published. Supporting readability and broader experience coverage remain | Readiness reassessment with the coherent wiki pass, target **23 September**, range **21–28 September** |
Read the scene in [Hordes and Builds](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Hordes%20and%20Builds), with placement in [Moving Scan Expedition](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Moving%20Scan%20Expedition). Its added rail, viewing bay, bridge and receiver make a fourteenth proposed major mechanism; physical fit and fun remain untested. The current proposals tackle two experience risks: making a short rescue feel like helping a person, and making the final station connection produce a lasting, perceptible payoff.
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## Delivery forecast
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Forecast **F2.12**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
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Forecast **F2.13**, updated 15 September. Dates assume work continues today and about five further active working days for the first full pass.
| Milestone | Target | Plausible range | Completion means |
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Near-term estimates have moderate confidence. The full-wiki estimate has low confidence. The campaign date has very low confidence and remains a planning allowance pending a fresh content estimate. None promises development, validated fun or the desired number of playable hours; those require a separately authorized phase.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.12 records the station-completion comparison finished at 14:36 and the costed campaign comparison in progress. The rescue comparison was completed at 14:20. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
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The pre-pause targets were 15 September for the readable wiki and 17 November for detailed campaign design. Five paused calendar days and the outside review's core-loop findings moved those dates. Today's first packet finished at 12:08 against a revised 13:00 target; subsequent packages finished at 12:32, 12:45 and 13:26. F2.13 records the scope draft delivered at 14:38 and independent review underway. The station-completion comparison finished at 14:36. The rescue comparison was completed at 14:20. The moving scan and preservation audit are complete. The overall dates remain unchanged because supporting design and creative choices still need work. Earlier estimates remain in revision history and the forecast checkpoint.
## What still needs work
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The earlier build-priority question also remains: which direction to deepen first. It does not discard the others or approve every proposed rule.
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[Completing The Station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Completing%20The%20Station) is ready to compare: finish securing a dependable home, or add an optional departure carrying the entire place. This is prepared for a subsequent owner choice; the rescue question above remains the current question. The costed scope proposal is in progress, and existing story alternatives remain available for reaction. [Open Decisions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Open%20Decisions) is the wider issue index; its recommendations remain proposals. Its fourteen categories are not fourteen answers needed before work can continue.
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[Completing The Station](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Completing%20The%20Station) is ready to compare: finish securing a dependable home, or add an optional departure carrying the entire place. This is prepared for a subsequent owner choice; the rescue question above remains the current question. The [campaign scope comparison](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Campaign%20Scope%20Choices) is in independent review, and existing story alternatives remain available for reaction. [Open Decisions](/Hold%20The%20Flood/Open%20Decisions) is the wider issue index; its recommendations remain proposals. Its fourteen categories are not fourteen answers needed before work can continue.
